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The Bleeding Heart Poetry Contest
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I go and read the guidelines for a lot of poetry contests and often I see that they don't accept "depressing" poetry. I see poetry as a form of self expression. At times everyone is depressed and if poetry is how you choose to express yourself- why not try to profit a little from it too, wink .
That is why The Bleeding Heart is here. This contest if for poems of a sad, depressed, angry, or dark nature. Since poetry can often be difficult to judge because it comes down to two or three pieces that are almost equally good- we have three prizes. The First Place prize is 2000g, second place is 1000g, and third place prize is 750g.

There is an Entry fee of 75g per poem to help cover the cost of the prizes and nothing more (donations are also accepted biggrin ). You will not be added to the Contestant list until I recieve either a trade request for the money or a PM explaining why you are not yet paying but to count your peice in my judging- but if you don't pay your entry fee in the next 72 hours you will be disqualified. There are 50 entry spaces available and once we have 50 paid contestants the judging will begin.

The Judges are TheDarkDivinity (myself) and Darkiya. Each piece will be judged on itself first, given a rating, and then compared to other pieces of that same rating. The best of the best of the highest rating poems will win. We will judge on the following criteria: Originality, Flow, Vocabulary Use, Use of literary devices (such as imagery, alliteration, rhyme, etc), and emotion. Note that if you use a piece that is not your own you will not only be disqualified but we will alert the hosts of any other contests you may have entered of your dishonesty.

So the contest is actually fairly simple- so get out your pens and let the games begin!

NEW: After 10 Rounds we will invite back the winners of each round (First, Second, Third, and any who may recieve an honnorable mention may be invited) to compete among one another, the best of the best for 15000g! Only one winner and you have to be invited to enter. More details to come later.
There will be a website ready with the past winning works posted here in a couple days

Round 2 Contestants!
1. youma_rage xd
2. oninoshinenyo xd
3. xBakaTulipx xd
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redface =entered but not payed
xp =needs to confirm trade
xd = entered and payed!



Round 2 Donators!
1. juno hott stuff=25g biggrin
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"The Traitor"
Naki

Not to loud
For they may hear
The demons that are
Drawing near

You know they're out there
Watching you
They always have
And I have too

You were too sweet
You were too kind
To my evil
You were blind

Now listen as
I wish you well
Because my army's
Straight from Hell

They'll take you down
They'll kill your dream
They'll feed on every
Fearful scream

I'll tell you now
Not to plead
I'll just be laughing
As you bleed
Tears

Tears running down
the childs face
as the child looks up
pleading with their eyes

I never meant to do
the things that i did
Please just give me
one more chance

Tears run down
the adults face
as they look down
pleading with their eyes

I never meant to do
what i did to you
I never wanted to hurt you
Give me one more try

The bystanders cry
as they watch helplessly
Watch the end of their lives
Roll to a stop

Wondering what they
should have done
Crying inside
but moving on
Drown


This world is just like a great big ocean
Watching everyone drown in their own sorrow
Maybe one day too
I'll drown in mine

I never meant to do that
I never meant to hurt you
I never meant to run away
I need a scapegoat this time around

Sometimes I wish I could just drown now
Just to get away from all this now
But only if I gave up
Would I drown

So hear me out now
You would talk talk talk
But never listen to someone like me
You would never hear what I had to say

I never got why you didn't accept me
Or why you had to be the way you were
But just to let you know now
I'll leave you alone and drown now
Disconnected
Please hang up and try again.
<b><u>Cynical Love</b></u>


Tell me the truth, love
as I watch your eyes glaze
your chest rising and falling
so delicate is your air
breathing, your breath, extatic..
Im sitting, watching you
like a mystery
petting you from afar

Your head is hanging;
like a hanged man
Im not fearing the fact
that you may die
the true nature of the question
is: are you

Dont try to scream and waste your
precious air
I just want to ready you
for your final dance

I rise to untie, ever so slowly,
your weary self
Pull back the damp sheets;
now turned crimson
that engulf your soft,
demeaning posture
Your moans; ever so soft
arouse my cynical being

Just a moment, let me dress you
in clean black silk sheets
carry you with care
to the dance floor
Your still eratic
though now your shaking

Glittering, the light flickers
off of the blade from the
light of the midnight sky
filterring through the blinds
I cut your long black hair
to your shuddering shoulders

I draw my nails along your body
"Gods, so easy to draw blood"
your pale as the moon
a beautiful shade indeed

Soon we're dancing
as I hold your hands
tightly clasped in mine
the barbed wire clenching
your delicate wrists
start to cut yours and mine
the averuncate of my love begins
to place with your heart

All this to be together
in eternal pain
to us; so twisted
like a sapphire scream
this, it is it's only a ritual
of two in love in death
I kiss you softly on your
now frozen lips
with mine turning blue

Soon will I be with you
sooner shall we find each other again
until we meet again my love
shall I conjure our demise

"In love is truth
in truth is death
semantics show"
written on an aged
piece of paper
clasped within our hands

In love is truth
in truth is death
Wow- we're off to a really good start- thanks everyone. Keep 'em comming!
F-r-a-g-m-e-n-t-s

His blood drips off my fingers
which are wrapped around a knife
which gave him a mortal wound
which hurt him deeply
because of me.
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Betrayal is evil
but that's what you've done
Did I really not mean that much...
now blood replaces water
and chaos, calm.
Beware for my revenge will strike-
You will wish you never betrayed me
who loved you...
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My hatred is overwhelming
thoughts of Death...for him?
I cannot think
annihilation is sounding logical
he tortures-i love
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you are mean and cruel to me
why?...am i to you...
except in retaliation...
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blood, betrayal, hatred and retaliation...
love?
keep 'em comming guys!
Going Unnoticed

That knife is quite temping
When it's calling to me
No one else hears it
And nobody can see

The children, they mock me
They’d never know I’m not there
They wouldn’t look for me
They just wouldn’t care

My mother my farther
They might cry
Because of the money they wasted
Not because I just died

So who would miss me?
It’s so hard to tell
Since no one likes me
And treats me well

So I’d go quite unnoticed
Passing out of this world
My cry of loneliness
Has gone unheard
The End of the World

The worlds a waste
Our doom is near
Our water’s polluted
It’s already here

The skies are black
From the gas in the air
But people keep driving,
They don’t even care

The birds are dying,
The trees can’t survive
Human nature is crawling
Were barely alive

The winds can’t continue
The sun will not shine
We should have known
Where to draw the last line

Though we’re going in circles,
There’s never an end
Our bad deeds went too far
It’s too late to mend
Loving Curse

How should I feel
Living a lie?
One I’ll be acting out
Till the day I die?

One that won't leave me,
Not when I’m old and grey,
One that will stay with me
As I live threw each day.

One that I’ll live threw
Unaware what to do
One that I’ll think of
Each time I see you.

It's not such a bad lie
For the better not the worse
It's that I can't love you
And that is my curse.
EDIT: nevermind, you got it lol ^-^

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