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WARNING! I'm a loud mouthed 20 year old Roleplayer, my writing will have violence, swearing, and the occasional naughty bit. You've been warned!

Chapter One - It Starts

"Seyli! Seyli! Wake your a** up! You promised you'd start today!" A young man leaned over her, shouting, one eye hidden by an patch, the other the shade of those olives with the little red things. Dark navy hair hung down as well, and features that mimicked her own glared at her. She frowned before shoving him away with a slender and tanned hand.

"Go away Gara, I don't wanna." She glared at him, red eyes angry, and blonde hair a mess. She sat up on her bed causing Gara to skip away before she could swat at him again. Blinking a few times she frowned, her room was always a mess, but she must've done something crazy last night because her clothes were strewn about.

"So, you're gonna start writing it today?" Gara asked, while grinning, "You've been planning on doing this since November, and I'm tried of bugging you." His smile left his face as he spoke that last bit. It always bothered him how his sister could put off something for so long.

"Yeah, yeah...I'll get started today, can you hand me my pants?" She held out her hand as he grabbed a pair of black jeans and tossed them at her. She then made a quick shooing motion so he'd leave and let her get dressed.

"I don't need this." She moaned as she slowly got dressed, zipping up the jeans and then grabbing a faded tank-top an pulling it over her head. She took a grey head wrap off the top of her dresser and quickly pulled her hair back with it before leaving her room. A few steps down the hall and she was in the 'main' area of the home. Gara was sitting at the plain table fiddling with the hem of his well worn vest, he looked up and grinned at Seyli before turning to the other person there.

"So, AEAI, will Seyli have to start writing today, or do we have work?" He asked of the woman he looked at. AEAI looked at Gara, then Seyli, brown eye darting back and forth, she then ran her hand through her short brown hair.

"Nope, Mel went and graffiti tagged Durem again. You both have a long days work ahead of you." She spoke flatly, as Seyli heaved a sigh of relief as Gara moaned.

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Chapter Two - Durem Bound, or God Bless Bunnyfish Mel-Mel!

Seyli was sitting on floor tying up the laces on her work boots as Gara was grabbing two buckets, various cleaning agents, a mop, 2 scrub brushes, his tool box, and one of them funny brooms that looks like it has a scrub brush on the end. Looking over at AEAI and smiling Seyli asked,

"Whose place are we cleaning first, oh great and mighty orignizer?" The sarcasm in her voice was not lost on AEAI who just gave her a dirty look before answering her, "Edmund's, then Nessa's, Moria's, and then the public buidlings." She rasied a finger, as if anticipating Seyli's question, "The Von Helsons have their own servants, and even if Mel did what alot of people have wanted to do, we aren't touching their home. Unless they're willing to pay us something in the range of one hundred thousand gold."

Seyli laughed, quite glad that she and Gara let AEAI live with them. As she stood up and grabbed some of the gear from Gara, as he put on more sensible shoes then his usual choice of sandals. As he grabbed the rest of the gear, Seyli opened the door and headed out.

"Ah-ha, if I see Mel I'll have to give her a hug!" Seyli spoke cheerfully as she and Gara headed down one of the few paths in Barton that lead toward Durem. She was almost skipping, smiling ear to ear, as Gara seemed to stalk and stomp. The stopped once in front of the Boutique so Seyli could say 'Hello' to Ian, but they quickly continued on their way before Ian could be, well Ian.

Within minitues they were on the road to Durem, Gara seemed to be less grumpy, and was also smiling. That was until someone bumped into them.

"Oi! Watch it!" Came the voice, from a woman around 4'11" tall, wearing a Cowboy hat, and some mighty stylish and femine clothes. Both Gara and Seyli looked at her, first amused, then slightly shocked.

"MEL!" Seyli shouted and pointed, causing the treasure hunter to jump slightly before she reconised the shouter, "Seyli, long time no see..Uh, going to Durem?" Both of them nodded, and told Mel why they were headed there.

"Uh, you guys aren't cleaning up the Von Helsons' place, are you?" Mel seemed less nervious, but still abit jumpy, which wasn't normal, "No, they aren't paying us, so why would we?" Gara answered, getting a simple head shake from Mel.

"No reason! See ya!" Mel quickly left, and headed off to Barton. Most likely to hang around the guildhall and spy on Leon. Seyli raised an eyebrow and Gara merely shrugged, they continued on to Durem.

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Interesting start, this looks like it should be a cool story. The first chapter was a little hard to understand because you introduced a lot of characters and were a bit cryptic on what was actually going on. The second chapter is a lot clearer and easier to follow, and the plot so far looks nifty. You've got a few typos here and there, but I'm definitely looking forward to reading more. smile
A good start to a great story! I like it!

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OH, we can post?! I thought we weren't supposed to post here or something...

YAY FOR YOU ONG GOOD JOB. domokun heart

Now this is making me want to write something. xD
Good job ^^ Nice story so far too. Keep up the good work 3nodding

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