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Ryu_chan

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Post: 7290874_1 created on Sat, 28 May 2005 20:53:06 +0000
Posted: Sat, 28 May 2005 20:53:06 +0000

"It is your destiny. You alone can save us."

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Post: 7290874_2 created on Sat, 28 May 2005 23:36:27 +0000
Posted: Sat, 28 May 2005 23:36:27 +0000

She eyed the glass and licked her lips, staring at me like I was dinner and she hadn't eaten in weeks.

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Post: 7290874_3 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 01:22:36 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 01:22:36 +0000

At the moment, the corniest line I can remember reading was in Tamora Pierce's In The Realms of the Gods. It was Daine exclaiming, "You're in love with me?" Reading that absolutely killed me.

And, alright, I have to admit to writing this line, back when I was in sixth grade:

"The family boarded the airplane. They had packed a sense of adventure in their carry-on bags."

I think I've said enough.

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Post: 7290874_4 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 10:29:46 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 10:29:46 +0000

I've just read through this whole thing and you know what I've noticed? I've used almost all of these ,lines in my stories before. *realises something*

Oh, crap. OH, CRAP. I've posted those stories on the internet before! Holy crap! HOLY CRAP!!!

AHHHH!!!!

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Post: 7290874_5 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 12:04:10 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 12:04:10 +0000

"you're always there for me."
it's like saying that they're stuck to you like glue. gags. scream

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Post: 7290874_6 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 13:33:41 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 13:33:41 +0000

Ruby_Valentine

"I want to try some..."

"Good... I want you to try some...."

Right before one of my infamous kissing scenes... this one involved watermelon lipgloss that actually tasted like watermelon. xp

I hate those too!

I also hate when characters say
"I'll love you forever!"
stare It gets on my nerves for some unknown reason.

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Post: 7290874_7 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 16:06:39 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 16:06:39 +0000

"I love you"

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Post: 7290874_8 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 16:22:01 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 16:22:01 +0000

I can't believe I wrote this, but I did:

I can't believe I

You would think that she was shy; but if you were able to look into her mind, you would see that she had an unquenchable sense of adventure.

Something like that.

Nnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyuuuuuuuurrrrrrrggggggghhhh. It makes me writhe in pain just thinking of it.

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Post: 7290874_9 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 16:51:55 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 16:51:55 +0000

Shammybaby

1. Her face was a perfect oval, like a circle that had its two sides, you know like gently compressed by a Thigh Master.
2. His thoughts tumbled around in his head, making and breaking alliances like underpants in a dryer without Cling Free softener.....

Hey I've read those before! I think it was at jumbojoke.com... xd I love those lines!

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Post: 7290874_10 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 16:58:44 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 16:58:44 +0000

(Natalie Portman impression) You're breaking my heart!

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Post: 7290874_11 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 17:24:01 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 17:24:01 +0000

boy-" did it hurt?"

girl-"did what hurt?"

boy-"when you fell from heaven?"

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Post: 7290874_12 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 17:53:52 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 17:53:52 +0000

ShozoboroRyusaki

All you base are belong to us <_<

You have no chance to survive make your time.

domokun

lol Yeah, but the rest of it was as funny...

What happen?
Somebody set up us the bomb.
We get signal!
What!
Main screen turn on.
It's you!!
How are you gentlemen!! All your base are belong to us. You are on your way to destruction.
What you say!!
You have no chance to survuve make your time. Ha ha ha!!

xd I take it you've seen the video... lol

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Post: 7290874_13 created on Sun, 29 May 2005 17:58:28 +0000
Posted: Sun, 29 May 2005 17:58:28 +0000

Chibi_kitty99

"WE'RE ALL GOING TO DIE!"
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yup .: nods matter-of-factly:. I have actually read this in stories... it's kind of sad sweatdrop

lol But it's much stranger when you know people who yell this out at random, or whenever they're excited about anything. Ditto for "Oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!" in a very, very high pitched voice. xd

I asked them about it once, and the explanation I got was "well, it's TRUE... we are going to die, eventually!" sweatdrop