This is the place for all you poets to show off your poetry and get some feedback on it. You can post each poem in separate topics, or one topic, and just keep adding to it with each poem you want to post. And remember, if it's anything more than PG13, make sure you write 'Mature'in the name of the topic. smile
Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 9:41 am
such unrelenting pain is caused by us loving in vain ad i'm sorry to say but this is our last day
i'm leaving now i still don't know how i turn for a last glance but i missed my chance
i can't take anymore of this anymore empty bliss i'm still searching for a way out but i'm begining to doubt
i don't think i can get away from you you know how hard i'm trying to all i can do is make you sad then make you cry and feel really bad
i'm out of your life ridding you of your strife the end of this lie begins with goodbye....