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 Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 5:43 am
He walked over to look out of the dusty barred window, peering out through the half broken blinds. Grey clouds loomed overhead, a forewarning of rain, and he didn't have an umbrella.
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:42 pm
There was a lot of noise around him, phones jingiling on their percarious hooks, papers rustling, radio buzzing away, pencils and pens scratching at paper, people being interviewed, and as he turned from the window with a sigh about the rain he noticed something else... A simple thing he would have missed had it not been at eye level... A small pocketwatch hanging from the wall, adding it's own unique noise to the station... Silence
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Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:32 pm
((Heh, hope this works. Looks like this has come to a temporary standstill. Anyone still alive out there? Run out of steam or something?))
One of the officers came up to him and noticed he looked a bit out of it, and asked, "Sir, is everything alright? Oh, and please sign these, so you can be on your way." He handed some papers to (insert protagonist's name here) and sat down at his desk, as he proceeded to pour over some documents he had brought with him.
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 5:20 pm
The man looked at the papers,
1: please discribe the incident
He sighed, wouldn't it figure they only give you one line to write the entire ordeal... the man looked up at the police officer,
"Um, sir? May I have another piece of paper so I can write in more detail what happened?" He asked
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Silvermoonfall Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:27 pm
((Okay, we need to get out of this slow part fast, lol.))
An hour passes as (insert name here) finishes the mundane paperwork set before him by the police.
((I've also noticed several posts with horrendously long run on sentences. Please try to avoid these, as they can be a little cumbersome to read. If a second sentence is needed to remedy this, it's okay as long as you aren't being overly silly with it. Having said this, it is still preferred that only one line at a time is used, even with dialog. Ya never know where it'll go with that ^_^. Thanks!))
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 3:35 pm
((lol, yeah, maybe a better name would be a one-interactions-at-a-time story or something razz ))
"Thank you sir, now if you would wait a bit longer for us to process your forms we'll have a detective in with you shortly." An officer said, smiling a bit as he took the man's papers
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 8:00 pm
As the officer started to walk off with the papers, there was a loud crash outside, as the sounds of twisting metal filled the street.
(Meh, take it or delete it. I was just trying to get him out of there. You didn't have to go into so much detail with the paper work I handed him you know. Plus, I don't think they really cared THAT much about the details around this time. I could be wrong though.)
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Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 3:30 pm
Shortly after there was a series of gunshots and the police office was suddenly filled with officers rushing to grab their weaponry and running out into the street to see what was the matter
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Silvermoonfall Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:21 am
"Well, when opportunity knocks..." thinks (insert name here) as he discretely slips out of the back door.
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 4:55 pm
Making sure the coast was clear, he dashed out into the ally just, he shouted suddenly as a giant stempowered walker crashed into a building just down the street
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Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:14 pm
then and there, *mr. protagonist* heard a faint yelp, a damsel was being crushed by the walls of the collapsing buillding.
He took one step foward, thinking about helping her, then he swiftly dodged pellets from behind, whizzing a couple centimeters away from him, striking the limbs of the steamed powered walker.
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 11:41 am
As he rushes over to help her out of the mechanical rubble, he notices an oddly ornate gear work piece and picks it up.
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Silvermoonfall Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 09, 2010 8:29 pm
((lol, I think our protagonist has ADD, ooh watch... Oh! girl! Ooh... gear lol))
He picked it up quickly, pocketed it, and continued running for the girl, "I'm here," he said, "Don't panic"
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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 12:38 pm
((I'm sure I'm not helping much with that. I have what I like to call ADOS...Attention Deficit OHH SHINY!! Lol.))
Pulling mechanical parts off of the girl, he realizes she's unconscious.
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Silvermoonfall Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 18, 2010 2:50 pm
He swears loudly and proceeds to pull her out of the rubble
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