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Amaya_Moonstone Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 12:47 pm
((why the f*** do you think i tried to draw one?! but noooo you found it unsatisfactory scream you know what, if you didnt like the version i drew, then yeah, draw it yourself, damnit!))
Weaving through the streets with ease, Keir easily led himself and Praxis to the Northern city gate so that they could proceed in a Northwesterly direction, towards their first stop. Faraltia.
((yes, such is the fate of characters like ours, ne? i wanted to write more but i shoudl go do homework XD))
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:25 pm
((all I am saying is that the capital city shouldn't take up the majority of the map, and there is no area of just light/dark - it's just desert, everything else was fine rolleyes You guys need to learn how to follow some written directions, I have too much homework to do anything anytime soon - so you get a 3-minute map:
Maybe, MAYBE, if I am in the mood next weekend, I'll draw a better one You get the basic idea...))
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Amaya_Moonstone Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:03 pm
((and i told YOU that it wasnt the capital city, it was the capital AREA that bordered the ELEMENTS, and NOT CITY BORDERS....))
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:11 pm
 >> Only the blackest of hearts
((yes, but as I said, there wasn't that large an area for the elements in capital city, as the area out there was uninhabital))
Can feel the purest of love <<
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:43 pm
((I can't think of anything to post... I'll do it later. You know, I never did see your map Rin. And yes, I can follow writen directions, but not many can acurately remember the details of a fantasy world to the point of where each city lies.))
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 2:14 am
((just cuz the cities are on the map doesnt mean there arent small villages! the villages within the borderlines were also of that element! that and to be honest your map sucks! im fixing the borderlines of the one i drew so we can use that!))
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Amaya_Moonstone Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:04 am
>> Only the blackest of hearts
((well of course it sucks, I didn't call it a 3-Minute Map because I spent three hours of my life drawing the damn thing rolleyes and really, there aren't any other villages except the makeshift ones that some naga live in, as they aren't really going to be living with the elves peacefully - but they aren't even proper villages really, and they are deep in their lands, mostly off the map entirely; and they certainly don't have names))
Can feel the purest of love <<
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:23 am
((the characters of mine that are traveling fully intend to visit even those random nameless villages of nagas and any small elf villages they pass, so the fact that the element borders reach past the capital city is vital, or there would be none but nobles who use such powers. which is why i felt my borders were justified. but if you find them unsatisfactory your highness then i'll change it.))
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Amaya_Moonstone Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:10 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:31 pm
((ill continue to argue all i want XD im gonna give the proper map to alex by the end of the week))"Yeah, yeah, I know there are a rogue village or two between here and there, so worst comes to worse we stay at one of them if we can. And we're going to go to Faraltia first because it's the general direction Amaya's kidnappers took her in." Stopping momentarily to turn and face Praxis, Keir smiled cynically.
"Ready for a long journey? After Faraltia, it's pretty far to Lorafta... After all, having gown Northwest can narrow it down to that area. And if I can't find any information in the two larger cities or at any rogue villages in between them, then there truly is no hope."
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Amaya_Moonstone Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 4:37 pm
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 3:43 am
Keir's dark eyes stared back into Praxis' unwavering gaze. "There is nothing else I have to lose. She is alive. And we will find her.", he said stubbornly.
When him and Amaya were young, as they both had the power of empathy, they were always connected. After Amaya had been kidnapped, thei connection had weakened with distance but it did not completely diminish. "I can sense her, even now.", Keir murmured to himself.
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Amaya_Moonstone Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 2:15 pm
Zetsubou rested his head on his knees, twirling his finger in a cirlce. This caused the water droplets he was controlling to spin along in the same manner. He turn his head to the side and stared at the light reflecting into the water, having the consistency of rain. Looking as colorful as a jellyfish. He made the water into a little ball and began to toss it up and down boredly. His villagemates where probably busy, though he had no idea how busy the tiny village of Quarishna could be.
His feet dug into the sand of the beach and his skin absorbed almost all moisture. He let out a low sigh, boredly tossing the ball back into the water by moving his index finger up and down, and now lifting it in and out of the water as if he was fishing.
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Posted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 9:23 pm
Anwyn sent a dark glare towards her twin, anger searing through her at the sheer thought of what her sister had just suggested to her. The nagas were ready to siege war upon the elven kingdom of Sulis, and Isolada had suggested they stick to the smaller battleships of their navy. "Isolada, my sister, are you insane?" she asked incredulously, waving her arm out to the sea before them, walking down the shores of the beach until she reached the waters, "These waters are vast and the nagas are great in numbers, Admiral Nagendra is almost certain to have a great fleet waiting to invade our lands, we cannot stand back and attack those of such a low ranking, we must go after the higher ups."
"Sister," Isolada began, stepping beside her twin as she put a hand over her shoulder in attempted confort, "I have heard things from the northern lands, word has seeped out that the nagini who run the army are to be attending the fleet of Nagendra, Bartholomous, and Andreas... we cannot hope to defeat a fleet if it is true."
The water surrounding Anwyn began to spiral in a small whirlpool of her anger, now yelling at her twin for all those on the beach to hear. "General Sayuri and Brigadier General Aiko, correct? We all know the tales of what they did - but at water, they are weak, neither sunlight nor darkened moons stand strong. If we defeat them at this point - the war will practically be ours," she screamed, slamming her fists into thin air, shoving the waters below her deep into the sand. She rarely had emotional outbursts such as this, but such matters could bring out another side of her all together.
Isolada held her hands over the salty waters of the ocean, pulling them out of their sand container once more as she looked at her sister with worried eyes, hugging her closer to her. "Anwyn," she whispered soothingly, trying to calm her twin the best she could. The entire war upset her, and she hated how it had begun to affect Anwyn, but nothing could be done - the days of withdrawn peace were coming to an end. "There is another Brigadier - Xiomara... if Sayuri and Aiko are to be gone, nobody - I doubt even the naginis themselves - truly trust her not to start this war; if we were to kill her closest, if not only friends, she could make it the worst war Sulis has ever had... if they were to die, she would have control over everything," she said in a quiet voice, close to her sister's ear as the other began to lose her nervous and enraged nature. Isolada smiled solemnly, hugging her sister closer to her then she was before, "They may be nagini - but they are still of sound mind... Xiomara, however, could, and would, destroy all naga and elf alike if she ever obtained such power."
Anwyn looked at her twin, sighing softly at the obvious pain that she was holding. "I understand, sister - for you, I shall try to see the ways of the Admiral..." she said lightly, using her magic to wipe away the tears that were beginning to fall from her twin's eyes, "But I shall not trust his judgment until we win this war."
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 7:34 am
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