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 Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 11:32 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 1:55 pm
Lol, bare with me, please. It's just going to take a little while... possibly less than a week... hopefully...
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 3:03 pm
Ok as long as its not a month xd
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 1:29 pm
Hey! I haven't made you wait that long for a new chapter! ...yet...
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Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 6:07 pm
I kno xd I am just saying its ok as long as its not a month
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:35 pm
Okay then, since you're not quite so specific, I'll just wait 25 days to post the next chapter. ^.^
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 4:47 pm
NO! Come on @ least 7days
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 9:40 am
Okay then, at least. ^.^ Muahahahahahaha!!!!! lol
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 10:05 am
not fair ur torturing us stare
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 7:04 pm
I'm not meaning to, honestly... but, as with most writers, I've come to one of the hardest points in the story. At first Nate's background story was just going to be for me to know, but, I couldn't think of anything for chapter eight, so, I had to use that. I haven't been able to get a single thought written down for chapter 10, yet, though.... >.<
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 4:17 pm
I cant wait til chapter 10 whee
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 8:02 am
Previously
I stared at the ceiling, images forming on it. Edward, mostly. His face, his eyes. Obviously I had no idea how long it been since I last saw Carlisle… did he already go off to kill Edward? A tear ran down my cheek. No.
Carlisle wouldn’t kill his own ‘son’. It wasn’t like him… nothing that was happening here was like him. It couldn’t be. I wouldn’t believe it. Please let me wake up soon, I want this nightmare to be over. I don’t care if I wake up in Phoenix. As long as this God-like vampire doesn’t die because of me. Just let me wake up, Edward is too perfect to be real, this has to be a dream…
And the door opened, letting in far too much light that practically blinded me.
Chapter Ten
Duplicates
The door opened, letting in far too much light that practically blinded me.
“Good morning, Isabella.” Someone said from the doorway. He wasn’t Carlisle, I could tell that much.
It took my eyes a few moments to adjust to the new light. He looked like a vampire, so I figured he was. His eyes were a dark shade of topaz, and his hair was auburn and fell to his shoulders. His face was perfect, but not in the same way Edwards was. His was sort of like a brotherly perfect. He didn’t look much older then me. In fact, he looked a bit younger.
“You’re very beautiful when you’re asleep, did you know that?” He said, interrupting my thoughts.
What the—? What kind of comment was that? I could feel my eyes go wide and I wanted to know what was going on. I could hear her heart racing in my ears.
“Don’t be frightened, I won’t harm you.” He came over and took the ropes and tape off of me. Finally.
“Are,” my voice sounded terrible, like someone had just used steel wool to clean my throat. It hurt to talk, but I had to know what was going on. “Are you with” I paused for a minute. “Carlisle?” As much as I wanted to, I wasn’t able to sound angry when I said his name.
He laughed, “I can hardly say that.” He said darkly.
"Now, Bella, can you behave?" He asked.
I only nodded, as a tear rolled down my cheek. What was going on? Why was this happening?
"Good." He patted her on the head. Bella glared, but he only laughed. "I can see why Edward actually likes you! Other than the fact that you're his La Tua Cantante."
I blinked once, and then he was gone. In front of me stood… me. But it wasn’t me. The me in front of me was pretty. Her face was more defined, her eyes were… different, but beautiful. They were brown, still, though. When I finally found my voice, I asked:
“What’s going on?” She ignored my question and started talking.
"Now, I'm going to go kill your precious Edward. After what he's done to me, I think he should be the one to kill you...” WHAT? I honestly had no idea what was happening, but why should Edward kill me? He loved me—or so he said, and I loved him. “But since that hasn't happened yet, I don't think that it will, so, you're going to kill him, no, I'm going to kill him, but he'll think I'm you! Imagine what a shock he'll find that! And then he'll watch you be turned into a vampire and live with me for the rest of eternity from hell!"
My eyes opened even wider, and my heart felt like it was about to implode with emotion.
“What’s going on?” I asked again, but it was too late, she was already out of the room.
I cried, no, I sobbed, what was going on? I thought Carlisle was against Edward. Part of me was happy that he wasn't, but then I realized that Edward was in trouble, and there was no way I was going to be able to help him.
I'm so happy that I finally got this written! Please don't kill me for the shortness though... I know I promised it to be longer... but, sorry!!!
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 4:02 pm
lol its okay I cant wait til 11
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Posted: Sun Jul 29, 2007 11:37 pm
Chapter Eleven
All Plans Have Their Flaws
N POV
“Edward!” I screamed running around the neighborhood. “EDWARD!” I screamed again—Isabella would panic, right?
I could smell him, I knew exactly where he was. My plan was perfect. Edward would be dead soon, and Isabella would be mine. She would grow to love me, I knew that that was inevitable.
E POV
“Edward!” Was I going insane, or did I really just hear Bella shouting my name? “EDWARD!” Okay, I wasn’t going insane, there was no why I could imagine this.
“BELLA?!” I shouted in question, running out the door. Alice ran out right behind me.
Edward, no! It’s a trap! That’s not Bella! She shouted in her thoughts. And for the first time ever, I could hear Bella’s thoughts, too. No, not Bella’s thoughts, Nates thoughts.
I can smell him. I know exactly where he is. My plan is perfect. Edward will be dead soon, and Isabella will be mine. She’ll grow to love me, I just know it, it’s impossible for her to not.
A ferocious growl escaped my chest. How dare he take the form of Bella. My Bella.
Esmes POV
“Emmett, Rosalie, you go catch up to Edward and tell him to come back to here so him and I can go get Bella.” Emmett and Rose both nodded. And ran off to find him, which wasn’t hard.
Edward was back within a few moments. “I’m going to kill him!” I kept hearing him mutter.
Not now Edward, you can’t, not now. Carlisle and the others will take care of that, you and I need to go get Bella—immediately. I thought every time I heard him say that.
Finally we were there, at the house where Bella was being held. It was up on a hill, and the inside was ridiculously messy. Blood stains were everywhere; only one event could sum up what had happened here. A massacre. A massacre by a vampire.
R POV
God damn it, Edward! Go back to the house with Esme! You two are going to go get Bella! Edward turned to look at me immediately after I said that and ran back to the house in a furry.
E POV
It looked like it had happened at least a decade ago, but that didn’t stop my worries, I know I had seen it once before, but that didn’t mean anything. Not to me.
I ran down the stairs and knocked down the door that Bella was behind. “Bella.” I said almost inaudibly. There she lay, asleep on the old couch, her face stained with tear trails.
I rushed to her and ran my fingers through her hair. “Bella, Bella, please wake up!” Her breathing deep and regular for a sleeping human, but I had to know she was okay, I needed to hear it from her that she was okay.
B POV
I heard a musical voice in my dream calling my name and telling me to wake up. The strange thing was that I actually recognized the voice, and because of it, I didn’t want to wake up, I wanted to keep hearing Edwards voice.
“Edward, I think she better sleep.” Another musical voice said. Okay, there was no way I could get both Esme and Edwards voices perfect in my dream, so I slowly opened my eyes.
“Oh god, you’re okay.” Edward exclaimed, kissed me on the forehead, picked me up bridal style and ran me out of the windowless room.
And right in front of the door stood the one person I didn’t expect to be there. Me.
So, what'd y'all think?
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 10:43 am
I liked it ^ ^ I cant wait 4 da next chapter
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