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 Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:47 pm
I lift like serpent's head above the water
And naught I'd seen was there before the slaughter
I gaze with eyes made cold beneath the sea
And surmise that none had come nor sought for me
The violent throes of war I'd not escaped
And the eye remaining whole was left to gape
So frantic ran the pieces through my mind
That when I turned I vowed to leave it all behind.
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Posted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:15 pm
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 6:18 pm
Thank you Calop, glad you like it.
But, does that mean it wasn't creepy enough, lol? (that is was liked)
I remember I was feeling very alone that day.
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:17 am
it's beautiful....and i think it's amazing you allowed art to inspire it. I am sorry you had to feel alone to write something with the beauty this has! As you've read with my poetry....i inspire from my pain or the pain of those around me.....this is dark and beautiful.....good job!
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