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 Posted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 8:57 pm
Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna Which side would you rather see? Germany or Lior? Can you let me know, because I will write on both sides, but I want to know which one would be more interesting. I have part of Lior planned, and no idea for Germany, so let me know. too loooooooong -__-' Sorry! Dawn asked for paragraphs- so i put it in paragraphs, then it stretched. So if it wasn't in paragraphs, it would be......a little shorter. xp sorry. s'ok Well, according to my friend nightshadow926, I don't know how to write short fan fictions. eek OH MY GOD, It's TRUE!!!!!!!!no comment really though, Germany or Lior?
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:51 am
Ivy_Luna Which side would you rather see? Germany or Lior? Can you let me know, because I will write on both sides, but I want to know which one would be more interesting. I have part of Lior planned, and no idea for Germany, so let me know. LIOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i jus cant fma being involed with geramany i have nothing angasnist it but since the moive i just dont want fma to be involed with the nozis its just not right . i no ur not going to make nozis but since the moive............ i cant watch fma and think of geramany at the same time....... do u get me?
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 10:18 am
Ivy_Luna Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna -__-' Sorry! Dawn asked for paragraphs- so i put it in paragraphs, then it stretched. So if it wasn't in paragraphs, it would be......a little shorter. xp sorry. s'ok Well, according to my friend nightshadow926, I don't know how to write short fan fictions. eek OH MY GOD, It's TRUE!!!!!!!!no comment really though, Germany or Lior? I like Germany better than Lior, because I can relate to it
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 1:19 pm
Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna Alphonse Rosenkreuz Ivy_Luna -__-' Sorry! Dawn asked for paragraphs- so i put it in paragraphs, then it stretched. So if it wasn't in paragraphs, it would be......a little shorter. xp sorry. s'ok Well, according to my friend nightshadow926, I don't know how to write short fan fictions. eek OH MY GOD, It's TRUE!!!!!!!!no comment really though, Germany or Lior? I like Germany better than Lior, because I can relate to it Okay, voting ends at Midnight Hawaii time! only get one vote. Currently tied. Also, I know NOTHING about Germany, so if it wrong, sorry.
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:14 pm
Ask me absolutely anything about Germany, then ask me. I know anything you can possibly need to know about Germany
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:53 pm
i nos dawns password!
lol i dont
OR DO I?!?!??
no i dont
OR MAYBE NOT?!!??!?!?!
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 8:58 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 9:04 pm
The Results are in! The winner is..............................LIOR! lol, it doesn't really matter, I will do both sides anyways. But probably Lior more. A because more people prefer it, and B because I know more about it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:29 pm
Ivy_Luna Ivy_Luna Ivy_Luna Alright, scratch the train station thing. Has everyone seen episode 48 of the brotherhood? If not, Then don't read this until you have, it contains spoilers. Ivy had encountered something interesting while looking at Ed and Al's Life Story. According to the Gate, They were somewhere in the woods near Hoenheim, defending themselves from Pride. Al was unconscious. She decided to go help them, because, Pride decided to become a cannibal and eat Gluttony. *shudders*. She was racing through the sky, in the shape a griffin, seeing that was the only thing that could carry two people, and be easily mistaken as an eagle. LanFan, Greed/Lin, and Fu glanced up sensing another presence. She dropped by in the nearby forest, turning into Fuhrer King Bradly. She walked into the clearing. "Wrath? What are you doing here?" Pride said to her. "WHAT!?!" Edward said. Greed/Lin rushed over, whispering to Ed "That isn't Wrath. I can sense it. It is a human in a complete disguise." Greed/Lin said to him. "Wha-AH!" Ed whispered back, realizing quickly, who the person was, the only person alive who could transform. Ivy. He thought trying not to give away his sister's foolish distraction. "You, do not smell like Wrath." Pride suddenly said. Ivy was stabbed with a shadow arm. She fell down, dead. Ivy still in the form of Wrath, stood back up, the red sparks dancing around the wound. She leaped back, to stand next to the group facing Pride. She transformed into herself. Ivy was wearing a coat (like Edward's) that was black, jeans, and a forest green t-shirt. She had her bow and arrows in a quiver slung across her back. She was wearing leather boots laced up to her knees. She transformed her automail into a sword, and it was coated with a layer of carbon (the stuff that Greed/Lin's shield is made out of). "Who are you?" Pride said to Ivy. "That depends, who should I be?" Ivy said slyly. She transformed into Edward, then into Alphonse, then into Pride. Shadows engulfed Ivy, and she was now controlling them too. "What?" (real)Pride said, straining to regain power over the shadows. "Ah, you don't know the full extent of my powers, do you?" Ivy/Pride said to him. She turned into herself, releasing the shadows. "FU!" Ivy shouted. Fu tossed her a flare, And she activated it, filling the clearing with light. While Pride was cowering, she stabbed him several times. She leaped back in time, to deflect a shadow/sword. "NOW, NIGHT, LUNA!" Ivy shouted, and then there was a blinding flame in the sky, illuminating the clearing brighter than any flare. Ivy sliced at Pride, multiple times. "Ed, go help Alphonse! I will take care of Pride!" Ivy told him. Ed rushed into the bushes. A shadow arm/sword flies at him and Ivy deflects it. She turns into Greed, and deflects another attack aimed at Night, who was flying high in the sky. Ivy realized the only way to awaken Alphonse was to pull him back from the Gate. "Edward!" Ivy shouted. Ed rushed into the clearing. "Can you hold off Pride?" Ivy asked him, deflecting more blows. "Yeah!" Ed replied, helping her deflect blows. Ivy rushed to Alphonse, and checked him. "He's alive, but his soul is locked in the Gate. I'll get it back." Ivy said. "..Ivy?!" Hoenheim said to her. "Yes, it's me. As you can see, I lost my arm. I am sure you know why." Ivy said to him. He gasps. "Why?" Hoenheim asked her. "you never know when you're gonna need knowledge. But I didn't suck it all in at once. I keep most things unknown, it pains me to see someone walking on the street, and just by looking at their face, I know everything about them, even how they will die." She said to him. "Now, is a good time to have it, though." Ivy said. She clapped her hands and then she to, became unconscious, next to Alphonse. She knew instantly Alphonse was within the Gate. She opens the Gate tentatively. It sucks her into the light, not the darkness, which is where she needs to go. She turns away, running to the darkness. She sees Alphonse, trapped. She tries to get to him, but The black child-like entities (couldn't find any other way to describe 'the black babies') pulled her away. "AGH! LET ME GO!" Ivy screamed. "AL! ALPHONSE! ALPHONSE!!" Ivy yelled, attempting to awaken him. She transmuted her arm, and sliced her way through to Alphonse. When she reached him, she was pulled away, and she was back, a few yards away from the clearing. She was exhausted, and Ed was probably, too. "Did it work?" Donkey Kong asked. "GOD! WHAT THE HELL!?!" Ivy yelled into the crisp night air. "s**t! Everyone duck!" Ivy yelled, jumping in front of everyone, her automail transformed into a shield (with a layer of carbon). Three shadow arms rushed into the area, and was deflected by her shield. She was forced back, and was slammed into a tree. She gets up. Ivy whistles a high, clear signal into the night air. Luna comes into the clearing. Night lands, distinguishing her fiery arms. "Hoenheim, go with Alphonse on Luna, back into Lior. DK, you go with Night to Central to get Mustang, wait, scratch that. Go to Lior." Ivy commands them. (Sorry, gtg to bed now, it is like 10:30PM. PLZ DON'T CONTINUE! I WILL FINISH IT TOMORROW!!) Okay, Might as well continue. Donkey Kong (sorry forgot his name) began to protest. Ivy won, and They left in the direction of Lior. Ivy rushed into the clearing to aid Edward. "Did it work?" Edward asked her. "No, I sent them to Lior, I'll fix it there." Ivy replied, deflecting a blow, It was harder now, because Pride was going all-out, attacking everyone. She had gotten Fu's flares and a few of LanFan's explosives. LanFan was trying to get close enough to Pride to attack, but was unsuccessful. Ivy didn't dare use the flares yet, she had a plan, that if it failed, only she would die. Night and Luna were back, coming to take more people to Ivy's hideout in Lior. She got Old Man Fu, LanFan, Greed, and the other Chimera away, so it was only Ivy and Edward against Pride. "Edward, when Luna comes back, you will go to Lior. I will fight Pride. I will go to Lior when I either escape or kill Pride, to help Alphonse. If I am not back by 8:00AM (it is around midnight currently), then I am probably dead and you should ask Dad if he can do anything. Got it?" Ivy said to him. She could sense Luna, about 10 minutes away. "No! We can take this damn homonculi down!" Edward said. "Probably, but then we would both get injured, if we lived at all, and then where would we be? If you go, then there is still a chance that you will stop this country from becoming a philosopher's stone!" Ivy said back. Edward couldn't respond. Luna arrived, and Edward left, leaving Ivy and Pride alone. Pride attempted to hit her leather boots, but all it did was slice through the leather to reveal metallic boots. Her boots were also reinforced with carbon, making it impossible to hit her shins. "Your prepared, aren't you?" Pride said to her. "Obviously." Ivy replied, avoiding hits and deflecting attacks. They weren't getting anywhere. Ivy activated a flare, causing Pride to cower, and she killed him several times. She lighted another flare, seconds after the last, and activated a bomb at his feet. His legs were blown off, but her was still alive, and she sliced at his head while his legs grew back. She leaped back, unsure if he could still control the shadows. In her moment of hesitation, he cut her right cheek, and left arm. That caused her to lose blood at a slow rate, but not too slow. (skipping a few hours of uneventful combat) Ivy was dizzy, and her cloak was in tatters. She couldn't hold out much longer, and her only options were to light the flares and attack like there is no tomorrow. She threw a flare at him, then sliced at him, again and again. She leaped back and launched another, tossing a bomb. Ivy had killed him about 50 times already. As the sun began to rise, the shadows were receding. He launched a shadow mouth at her, and it ate her automail. "s**t!" Ivy yelled. It was pulling the rest of her in, so she detached her automail. She lit her last flare, praying it was Pride's last life. She tossed a bomb, and it blew him up. He landed on the ground, and she sliced him in half. She sliced him as much as she could. She leaped back, careful to watch the minimal shadows in the clearing. Pride deteriorated right before her eyes. She whistled a long high pitched whistle into the fresh morning air. She was a bit pissed off at the moment because she still had other things to do. Luna appeared 10 minutes later. she rode on Luna to Lior. She got to the outskirts of Lior, and let Luna change into her human form. She got to the hideout at 7:45AM. She slammed the door shut, and went upstairs to check on Al. He was the same as ever. She walked out of the room, to see Edward in front of her. "So? Is he better??" Edward asked her. "I'll get to it after I take a nap." Ivy said tartly, walking up stairs to her room. She slammed the door shut, locking it. She heard Ed coming up the stairs, then she heard Hoenheim tell him to leave her alone. Ed complained, and Hoenheim replied, then Edward went back down the stairs. Ivy took a nap. (nap lasts 45 minutes). She wakes up to a knock on the door. She already knew it was Edward, because the knock was loud, and accompanied by a bunch of yells. She opens the door to see Edward. "Well, if you hadn't noticed, I am kind of missing something important for a transmutation!" Ivy yelled at him. Ed then realized that Ivy was missing her right arm. "What happened?" He asked. "Pride ate it!" Ivy responded. "HOW!?!" Ed asked, shocked. "He used his shadows to pull it off and eat it." Ivy explained. "So until Winry gets here, I can't help Alphonse." Ivy continued. "Now, please let me sleep!" Ivy said, losing her temper. She shut the door in his face, locking it with alchemy. There were more shouts downstairs, then one shout followed by laughter, then angry footsteps tromping down the stairs. (I will continue it later) I am continuing again. Ivy was now awake. She went outside to visit Rose. Winry was arriving today, so she could go visit Rose while she was waiting. Rose was serving food to the people in Lior, who were working hard to put their homes back together. They were almost done reconstructing the city. "Hey, Rose!" Ivy called to her. "Hey, Ivy! What happened to your arm??" Rose asked. "Uh...a monster ate it." Ivy said, not sure if Rose knew what a Homonculus was. "Ohh...Want lunch?" Rose offered. "No thanks, I am fine." Ivy replied. "So whats up?" She asked. "Not much, the city is getting rebuilt very fast!" Rose said. "I know, it is coming along great!" Ivy said. "I think my friend Winry is here. She is gonna fix my arm. See ya later, Rose!" Ivy said, walking away. She got to the train station, where the train was just pulling up. Winry emerged a few minutes later. "Hey! Winry!" Ivy called, walking up to her. "Hey........WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR AUTOMAIL!?!" Winry replied, angry. "Aha, about that, a homonulus at it... sweatdrop " Ivy replied, leading Winry to where the rest of them were. "How long do you think it might take? I kinda want it done fast, Al needs help." Ivy said. "What? What is wrong with Al? Where is he?" Winry asked, concerned. Ivy pointed to a house not far ahead, and Winry ran, leaving Ivy. She sighed. "Ivy?" Someone called from behind her. She turned around. "Gale?" She asked. A guy walked up to her grinning. "What would you be doing in Lior?" He asked. "I could ask the same for you!" Ivy said. "Just wandering the country, looking for something interesting." Gale said. "Now what are you doing in Lior?" He asked. "Meeting up with some friends." Ivy replied. "What happened to your arm?" He asked. "Pride ate it." She replied. "I thought Gluttony ate everything?" Gale questioned. "Pride was interested in cannibalism, and ate Gluttony, absorbing his power." She said. "Oh, wow, that was unexpected." Gale said. "I think everyone is waiting for me." Ivy said. "How about I introduce you to them?" Ivy offered. "Sure." Gale said. *If you are wondering about Gale, I will have a Bio up shortly* She came in with Gale next to her. "Who is this?" Hoenheim asked her. "Gale, an old friend." Ivy said. "Gale, that is my dad, Hoenheim," Ivy said, pointing to Hoenheim, "My brother, Edward Elric" She said, pointing to Ed, "LanFan, Old Man Fu," She said, pointing to them, "and Greed." She said, pointing to Greed. "Hey." He replied waving. "Give the young master his body back!" LanFan yelled at him. "No can do, miss!" Greed said. Ivy sighed, and walked up the stairs with Gale. "That is Alphonse Elric, my youngest brother, and Winry, my mechanic." She introduced. She continued to her room, and said, "And this is Luna, and Night.". Gale waved to them. They said hello and continued discussing a topic that Ivy believed was the pros and cons of a tail. "Hey Ivy! Come here a sec!" Winry called to her. Ivy and Gale walked across the hall to where Winry was working on an automail arm. "Yeah? Wow, looks great!" Ivy said. "Thanx!" Winry replied. "I think it is just about ready." Winry said, tightening the last screws. "There!" She said, sighing. "I guess I might as well get it over with." Ivy said lying on the bed in Winry's room. Winry attached the automail. (later) "Well, what to you think?" Winry asked. "It feels great." Ivy replied, experimenting with alchemy. "You got your arm fixed?" Edward asked, appearing in the doorway. "Alright, I'll do it now."Ivy said. She walked into Al's room. Ivy closed her eyes. The Gate appeared before her. "WHAT IS THAT?" Winry asked. Ivy opened her eyes, and the Gate opened up. It sucked her in. "IVY!!" Winry screamed, running to the Gate. Edward held her back. "No! She is fine!" Ed grunted, restraining her. Ivy ran straight to Al, freeing him. She dragged him, or his soul rather, to the opening. She could feel Them pulling her back. She had gotten to the opening, where Luna's soul was waiting, because she knew already, that the Gate wasn't letting her get away with their hostage. Luna took Al's soul, and the Gate opened before her. She saw Luna affix Al's soul, and Luna attach her own soul. Winry asked Luna, "Where is Ivy?!?" All Luna replied was shaking her head, and turning into her wolf form. Then the Gate slammed shut before her, and she was engulfed in darkness. She was suddenly flooded with light, and it felt like she was falling. She woke up, in a strange place. "Hey!" someone said to her. "You awake?" They said. It sounded like Alphonse, but older. She sat up, and Alphonse was standing in front of her. "My head hurts. Oww." Ivy said. "Well, most likely, seeing as you collapsed in the street!" The older Alphonse said. "I...collapsed?" Ivy asked. "Yeah...you don't remember?" The older Al asked. "No, sorry. Uhh, what was you name?" Ivy asked. "Alphonse Heidrick. You don't remember, Alyc (pronounced Alice)?" Alphonse said. "Uh, sorry no. where am I?" Ivy asked. "You are in Germany!" Alphonse said, walking up to her. "You sure you are all right?" He said, touching her forehead. She saw him apologizing about something, and jumped. "Oh, sorry, I forgot, your ability to read someone's future, with the slightest touch. sorry!" He said, smiling apologetically. "But you feel fine." He said. "Oh, yeah." Ivy replied. She reached out and grabbed his hand, and saw him playing an acoustic guitar, and her singing along in a meadow. She let go, shocked. "What did you see?" Alphonse asked. "You were very happy." Ivy said to him. _-^Yeah, that is it for now.^-_ I would continue, but I have to think of what is gonna happen, because the landing in Germany was off the top of my head, and I got stuck after the last bit. Oh, gee. What to do? *paces and ponders* GOT IT! (after about 5 hours of intense thought) "Where is Ivy, Luna!? Tell me now!" Winry screamed. "She is lost. Not coming back for a while." Luna replied, walking away. The room was dead silent, and the air was cold, even though it was mid-afternoon. Everyone had come in, you could hear Winry when she yelled at Luna. Alphonse was awake now, looking around. "What happened? Where is Ivy? I saw her earlier..." He said, confused. "She...disappeared." Night said to him. "Where? I would like to thank her for rescuing me from..the...oh no." Alphonse said, horror-struck at the end. "Is she...?" He asked in a shaky voice. "Yeah. They kept her, but let you go. I guess that was equivalent exchange." Edward said to him, also shaken by the loss of his sister. "Where's Ivy!?" Gale came in. "She.." Night said. "GODDAMN IT! I TOLD HER NOT TO!" Gale yelled. "You...told..her..?" Winry said. "Yes! and she didn't listen! DAMN STUBBORN GIRL!" He shouted. Gale stormed out, leaving the house silent again. Everyone had a WTF? expression on their face. Eventually everyone cleared out, except Winry, Ed, and Al. They were all staring at the place where the Gate had appeared, all expecting it to come back. "She won't die there, right brother?" Alphonse asked. "I don't think so." Edward replied. "She lived in the forest by herself for years. She should be fine." Edward said, trying to comfort Alphonse. "It's my fault, isn't it?" Alphonse asked. "No, it isn't. You couldn't stop her if you tried. Gale tried. She still did it." Ed said. "Okay." Alphonse said. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "What time is it?" Ivy asked. "It is around noon." He replied. "I have lunch ready, if you like?" Alphonse offered. "Sure!" Ivy said, realizing how hungry she really was. They walked downstairs, sitting at a table. "You kind of remind me of someone." Alphonse told her. "Was his name Edward Elric?" She asked. "How did you know?" He asked. "I...er...read his future before he left home." Ivy said. "YOU are from Shamballa, too?" He asked. "Err..yes. I am actually Edward's sister." She said. "Wow! So all those stories were true?" Alphonse said. "He told you about Am--Shamballa?" She asked. "Yeah, all sorts of stuff. I didn't realize it was all true, until he left, and then I stopped thinking it was true." Alphonse said to her. "Is there alchemy here?" Ivy asked, clapping her hands together. "No. Edward asked the same question, doing the same thing. But he found alchemy right before he left, and used it to open a portal home." He said. "Oh, I think I figured it out..." Ivy said. She picked up a small knife, and cut her arm. "What are you doing?!" Alphonse yelled, taking the knife from her. She looked around for something to draw with, and found some chalk. She drew a circle, and let the blood drip onto the circle. It began to glow a brilliant blue. After it stopped glowing, she had transmuted wooden plank into a wood brick. "Wow! How did you do that?" Alphonse asked. "That was alchemy, not very good alchemy, but the basic concept of it." She replied. "What were we doing when I collapsed?" Ivy asked. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Everyone was out now, leaving the room empty. There was a cold feeling in the air, and everyone was a bit sluggish. Luna and Night locked themselves in Ivy's room, trying to remember what they were doing. Gale had disappeared. Winry worked idly with some tools, making nothing in particular, just a pile of metal. Ed and Al were at a loss of words, not quite sure what to do with themselves. Greed and LanFan were still arguing.
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:49 am
wow hi ppl ^^ im back so im goona start posting here again if you guys also post here to i want this to be a active topic
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Posted: Thu Jul 08, 2010 2:12 am
IM BACK! YOUR LORD HAS COME TO FUFILL THAT PROMISE. as any good king would...
lol jk. i havent been here in along time. im gonna try get the other old regulars to come back on.
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