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 Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:18 am
Please don't tell me not to cry,
Please don't say there is no reason why,
You don't know what i'm feeling,
or how much it hurt,
The wet spots are from the tears,
On the collar of my shirt.
You think i should go on with life,
Forget about it and be strong,
But deep down i am sad,and i don't want to go along.
I don't expect you to understand why,
For no apparent reason i break down and start to cry,
my life is changed forever,
And that is why i'm not acting like the same old me,
so please don't try to act like nothing happened,
because it changed my life forever,
I will never be the same again,
not today,not tomarrow,not never.
the best thing you can do for me is just be there,
just like always,my friend
My broken heart is hurting bad and it will never mend.
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:21 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:23 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:24 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:26 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 6:27 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:07 am
Why in God's name are you bumping this? XD You bump stuff to bring it to the top of a forum if it's fallen out of sight... this forum barely gets a post every two days! XD XD
Also: Please read the rules in here before posting. Keep the naming of your thread in uniform with the others please!
(I am not a big fan of poetry, so I can't really judge your work, my apologies)
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 5:02 am
Vamp: Every person gets a single thread in this forum to post their own work. Do not post your stuff in another's thread without their consent, I'm going to remove your poem.
And please read the rules before posting.
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Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 10:08 am
sairus is right, sis, you gotta read the rules.
and i really can't make an unbiased rating cuz i hate emotry
and don't waste bumps here!
but moreover check you grammar and spelling before posting. copy it and run it through word, it always helps to make a poem a little more professional.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:00 am
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Pork W i z a r d The Wise
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 10:33 pm
This is so sad, but I must say: You have touched me. I know exactly what that feels like, and can relate to it so much. Though I do not feel that way now, I can vividly remeber when I did. It is always nice to beable to connect so deeply with your audiance. Very Nice. Just keep it real, kiddo.
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 3:19 pm
Did You know drugs are bad for you dont do them that is all
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