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RINGOS ADVENTURE ^o^
Okay heres a fairytale we had to work on for class so enjoy


There was a legend of three crystal spheres that where to open a door to free a goddess, there was an evil witch who had locked her in and that sooner or later a young child will find the keys that will lead them to a diffrent world to save the goddess.In a land in Japan lived a young girl named Ringo which means apple in japanese. Ringo had long brown hair and crystal blue eyes.She lived with her grandma her parent had died when she was young in a fire.Every week she would love to go to the market and vist these stand that only opened once every second week they selled strange items there.



One day Ringo was looking around and she saw this beautiful necklace it had a charm in the shape of a key and it was a golden with red little stones covering it "Grandma could I please have these necklace please." begged Ringo "Hmm I am not sure Ringo." said Grandma "How about if it does'nt cost that much then could we buy it?" asked Ringo "Okay lets check the price then." said Grandma "Hello how may I help you?" asked the clerk "Um..yes my grandaughter would like to buy this necklace um how much is it?" "Well lets see its a very interesting peice" said the clerk examining it "But for the young girl you may ahve it for free." said the clerk "What really but we could'nt." said Grandma "No its alright and this necklace comes with this box." said the clerk as she pulled out a box that was white and had red and yellow gem stones on it "Here you go take care bye now." said the clerk "Thank you!" yelled Ringo as she ran off with the box and the necklace.




At home Ringo looked at the box while she sat on her bed, she grabed the key "Hmm I wonder what's inside?". She placed the key in the small hole then a bright light covered the room and it sucked in Ringo "Ahhhhhh!". "Hmm were am I?" asked Ringo as she rubbed her eyes she looked around and saw she was beside a cherry blossom tree "This is not my room and where's Grandma?" then something ran pass Ringo.



"Huh what was that?" Ringo followed the small pass that was behind the tree then she saw it a rabbit who was running around "Aww its so cute come here bunny." "Ecxcus me but who are you calling cute?" asked the rabbit "Huh what you can speak!" "Of course I can speak girl I guess your not from around here are you" "Oh my gosh where am I how can you talk ? ahhhhhhhhhhh I want my grandma ?" "Hey are you even listening to me?" "Wahhhh I wanna go home!" cried Ringo "Huh no its okay don't cry!" said the bunny waving its arms in a panic "Come on there has to be a reson why you are here just please don't cry," said the bunny "What do you mean there has to be a reason why you are here?" asked Ringo "Um well no one just comes into the world with out a reason right?" "Um I guess so.' replied Ringo "Okay then but you have to stop, okay my name is Chibi how about you?" "My name is Ringo." "Okay Ringo now we got to go see what where going to do with you lets go visit the elder to see what he thinks." said Chibi.




They were walking down a path when Ringo heard something crying "Hey where are you going?" asked chibi "Don't you here that crying just hold on let me see." Ringo followed the cries to a small area abundend with flowers "Hey you why are you crying?" asked Ringo "Huh Im cryin cause I lost my little brother and now I can't find him!" "Um..its okay maybe I could help you find him." "Really thank you so much!"said the girl "No its okay I'm Ringo by the way." "Oh Im Hana and my little brothers name is Minaro."
So Ringo tried to help Hana fine her brother "Hey Hana I think I found him." Hana came oevr and saw her brother sleeping "Yup thats him thank you so much Ringo and her take this for your kindness." Hana handed her a crystal blue sphere "What am I suppose to do with this?" asked Ringo "I don'r know its just to say thanks." said Hana as she walked away."Chibi I got this weird blue crystal sphere thingy." said Ringo Chibi's eyes expanded at the site of the blue sphere "Thats a...." "A what Chibi?" asked Ringo "Oh its nothing know lets hurry up were so close to finding the elder its just around this path." Ringo nodded, they followed the path.




"Elder, elder come quickly" yelled a women "What is it now?" asked an old man as he came out of his tent "Chibi is that you?" "Elder!" yelled Chibi running towards him "Come closer sir I have something to tell you." "Ah what is it Chibi?" "I think the girl that I found may be the one to free the goddess from her impressiment, her name is Ringo sir." said Chibi "Ah Ringo how long we have waited for you to come." said the Elder "Um thank you sir but all I want to do is get back home," "Well then you must hellp us in freeing our goddess from the wrath of the evil witch Yami." hearing this all the town gasped "Um Im sorry but I don't know if I could help you." "But you must be the one you where the only one to find a way here from the diffrent world and if your desire is to return home the only way to return is to find the three spheres and free the goddess." "Huh a sphere by any chance would it be crystal sphere." "Why yes how did you know." "Um cause I think I found one." said Ringo pulling it out of one of her pockets "Ah you must be the one you have already found one of them there's only one more to go." "Huh one more don't you mean two?" asked Ringo "Well not anymore." said the Elder pulling out one from his pocket and handing it to her "Now go Chibi will guide you." said the Elder "Here so you could defeat the witch." he handed her a sword "Hey I'm just a kid what am I suppose to do with this?!" "You may needed good luck!" yelled the Elder as the villagers sent them out.





"Okay lets get moving." said Chibi "Chibi you knew what the sphere was why did'nt you tell me?" asked Ringo "Well cause um...you see..." Chibi was cutt off by a laughter "Whats that?" asked Ringo "Oh no it the...." out of the tree's jumped out a small stubby bigfooted creater "hahahaha I am the powerful Yami I will destroy you!" yelled Yami "This is Yami?" asked Ringo "What do you mean this is Yami I a the all powerful Yami mahahah..." "Ughhh *sob* uggh *quiver* owww." "What all I did was hit her head with the sword and then she falls*sigh* come on." said Ringo putting away her sword "And to belive everyone was afraid of her." ssaid Chibi at that moment the witch disspeared into a puddle of black liquid then a crystal sphere appeared "Wow we found the last one good job Ringo!" "Now we got to find the door where the goddess is hidden." said Ringo




"Finally we found it!" yelled Chibi "Yes now we have to place the spheres in." said Ringo they placed the three sphere's and the seal of the door broke "Ahhh its so bright!" yelled Chibi as he sheild his eyes. The dark sky briten the shine came back out the flowers bloomed and life spreaded all over the world again "Thank you Ringo for saving me and now for your reward you may return home." said the goddess as she pulled out a sphere from here pocket "Look closly Ringo what do you see?" "I see my grandma." said Ringo as she looked into the sphere then there was a flash "Ahh." "GOODBYE RINGO!" yelled Chibi. "Hmmm huh where am I?" Ringo looked around she was back in her room "Ringo time to get up." said her grandma "Grandma, grandma you won't belive what happened I got sent into this diffrent world and then..." "Wow Ringo that must of been some dream you had Ringo" "But it was'nt a dream honest." said Ringo "Okay okay just go get dressed." Ringo sighed and thought 'Well if it was a dream at least I had an adventure.' When Ringo went into her room she saw a small plushie on her bed it looked just like Chibi, she picked it up and sat near her window holding the plushie in her arms.







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Shadow_Queen_Yumi
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Wed Jul 11, 2007 @ 05:38am


THATS WAS EXCELLENT!!!! YOU SHOULD BE PROUD!!!!!


HoshiAngel_Ryu
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Fri Aug 03, 2007 @ 09:19pm


that was great kaiya!! bravo!! crying


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