Hmmmm....I've been writting this story, its a romance story. Since I have writters block, I shall now review it. Okay, Kazuma ans his little sister Sara, have always been close, and one day, Kazuma and her were watching fireworks, and one went crazy and almost hit Kazuma, only Sara jumped in the way, putting herself into a coma, instead of Kazuma. In such despair, Kazuma's mother beats him, than kills herself. His father overcome with the grife of sara and now is wife, flees to work across seas. Sara cannot be moved from that hospital in such a delicate state, so Kazuma stays behind to live by himself, reciving money from his dad overseas. Kazuma is the head of his class and has a charming personality, many people a drawn to him, but he never gets close to them, for fear of them hurting him. He visits his sister in her comatose state every friday. A nurse who works there becomes friends with Kazuma, and tells him he is not alone, and that there is another person who visits their brother who is in a coma at that hospital. One day Kazuma meets that person, her name is Rei. Her older borther, Erie who tried to commit suicide a few years ago is in a coma, the reason is still unkwon why he tried to kill himself. They find out that both go to the same school, and they slowly but steadily fall in love, until Erie awakens. For some odd reason he is cold to Kazuma, and very posesive of his sister. It is later found out that Erie tried to kill himself beacuse he had fallen in love with Kazuma. This puts both Kazuma and Rei in a very odd position, they still love eachother, but do not want to hurt Erie. So Kazuma runs away to his father's place overseas. He lived their for almost two weeks, when he realizes that Sara is now by herself, and he feels obligated to return home, much to his father's dismay. When he returns Erie confronts him, and tells him that he still loves Kazuma, but he knows that they can never be togather due to the fact that Kazuma loves loves Rei, who still does not know of his return. Kazuma is terrified of seeing Rei, for fear that she might hate him. So he visits Sara at the hospitle.....this is how far I have gotten in the story, if you have any sugesstions please tell me.(APRIL 30!) Okay....here is some more crap I created. Crying over Sara, Kazuma thinks about his childhood with her. This dosn't help him, it only makes him feel worse. In a state of despair, he flees to Erie, wanting someone to talk to, and Erie is happy, and allows Kuzuma to live with him in his apartment. Both talk about eachothers problems, and life. After talking to Erie, Kazuma is ready to face Rei, with Erie's support. However, when Kazuma goes to Rei's house, he finds that Rei is no longer living with her father but has moved out to her new boyfriends house. Kazuma is crushed. In a desparate attempt to end his life, Kazuma stabs himself, and falls uncounsious on the floor of his kitchen. He is found by Erie, and is rushed to the hospital. Once out of the hospital, he gets a visit from Rei, who had heard what had happened. She tlls him she still loves him, but cannot be with him, she than leaves. Weeks later, Erie calls Kazuma, to tell him to meet him at his apartment. Kazuma goes to his apartment, and Erie tells him why Rei could not be with him. The reason is that Rei's boyfriend abuses her, and threatens to harm her father if she leaves him. Kazuma is outraged. Kazuma calls Rei to ask her if it is true, only to have his fears confirmed. He than tells her that he will help her escape. Erie and Kazuma go to Rei's boyfriends house, at midnight, while her boyfriend is sleeping, she leaves, and they head towards the police, to tell them what has taken place with Rei. Her boyfriend is arrested and they get back togather. Everything seems fine until he tries to touch Rei, in wich she than seems to pull away. Rei acts very strangly, and becomes very distant of him. Erie also feels as though she has become distant around him as well. Erie is concerned, and starts to look for the answer to why she is doing this, only to find out that not only she was abused, but she was also 'taken advantsge of' (Meaning raped). Kazuma is now emotionaly unstable, and colapses. The one thing he had in life, was now damaged. and in the midst off all this emotion, Sara comes out of her coma. Kazuma is releaved that she now is awake, although she remebers him, she is still rather slow at awakining, and it takes her time to become 'fully funcional' during this time Kazuma has been seeing a counsuler, but it seems not to work. Than the day comes that Sara finally comes back to live with Kazuma. Sara finds out what has happened in Kazuma's life, and does her best to help him. They slowly heal eachothers emotional scares, and she aslo helps Rei to open up, and finally be able to love again. Erie is happy, and he than realizes that he no longer loves Kazuma (In the romance way, but he still loves him as a freind) but he loves Sara. Sara is happy that she finds someone to love, and they both date. Meanwhile Kazuma's relationship with Rei has gone far, and they want to get married, but if only life was so kind, Kazuma's father objects to the marragie, beacuse Kazuma and Rei are only 18, and he says that no one can love at that age. Kazuma is not determind, and neither is Rei, Kazuma tells his father that he has lived all his teenage years, the hardest years of his life alone, and that his father has no right to say that he can't marry. Kazuma also has a good paying job, and so does Rei. His father is outraged at his son's rebliousnes. Sara than steps forward and tells her dad what has gone on in his absence, beacuse he did not know anything, due to the fact that Kazuma has concealed his life from his father. His father than agrees. Both Kazuma nd Rei are wed. Erie and Sara live togather and all of them eventualy have children. OKAY! the story than forwards to when all of them are old. Kazuma and Rei summarize about how they feel about their lives. and Erie and Sara do the same (Diffrent chaps.) And then Kazuma and Rei die togather on a warm spring day, holding eachothers hands. Two years later Erie passes. Sara dies only days later. THE END!
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