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The Path Less Traveled
This is a poem I wrote a while ago when something really bad happened:

With our eyes we see nought but thy wishes
Money, Greed, and So called Happiness
But when we stick our head below the veil of shadows
We see more, we see ourselves brighter than before
We see what our world hides, we can see into the souls of others
Even Ourselves...

Comment and tell me wut ya think? Please?






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Yuki Hikura
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commentCommented on: Fri Jul 22, 2005 @ 07:03pm
That's an Awesome Peom!!! ^^x I like it!


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 26, 2005 @ 02:36pm
Thanks...it's just thoughts...in words... 3nodding



Glyph Knight of Purity
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Sainte Adrien
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commentCommented on: Wed Aug 10, 2005 @ 05:17am
I do like the centrality of it; but as you know, I'm very strict on my grammar....


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