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well hear's a little peek at the book i want to write tell me if its an ok starting point or not please

It just started one day. The love of my life showed up tall, lean, dark brown spiked hair, crystal blue eyes and he had the perfect tan. He came and saved me when my mother wanted to and was going to secede in, kill me. You see she was in one of her stats and drunk. I thought nothing would stop her but he did. He stormed in and threw my mother against the wall. She landed with a thud and then didn’t move again though she was still breathing. He then scooped down and lifted me up into his arms and held me as we left the apartment, I fell unconscious soon after we left. When I came to I was in a warm, plush bed surrounded by pillows and tucked in snugly. My savior came in with a breakfast trey full of food. And told me I was to eat will he tried to explain the situation. He told me were we where, which was a flat in St. Paul, and that I wouldn’t have to go back to my mother ever again. He had paused before telling me how he knew who I was and how he threw my mother and who sent him. In the end he told me after me assuring him like a thousand times that I wouldn’t care and was just happy he had saved me he told me. He was an angel, my guardian angel.

so what do you think please comment