so first shes able to see perfectly fine like all other teenagers
then shes gets inffected w/ glacoma and yea
like in every sory
or almost every story
there is of course romance in it
theres these 2 guys and her best friend
her best friend doesnt like her but he feels like his best friend is getting taken away from him and soon he doesnt see her as a friend anymore but as a lover
so scratch that part where i say he doesnt like her
ok
and the other 2 guys
one of the is her older brothers best friend
and the other one is a new student that joins the art club but the art club is basically empty so its only her and the new kid
but im having trouble with who i should make her go with man
th best friend
brothers best friend
or the new kid
OMFG~!
help me decide
i decided to make it like yaoi/ and hetero story
the list goes like
Main Char.- Takumi (Artisan)
Brother - Natsu (Summer)
Brother's BFF - Yuki (Snow)
Childhood friend - Hiroshi (Genorus)
New Kid - Kiyoshi (Purity)
i started it
yes
finally
but i think the beginning is crappy
now im thinking about changing
but for now
this is how its going to start
My dream of becoming an artist is starting to become impossible. My vision is starting to get cloudy. The world I see now is becoming darker. Why must I carry around this burden?
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I look out the window to see the sun setting. Colors. What would I do if I wasn’t able to see color? I looked at the blank canvas, sitting in front of me, and the table with the flowers right next to it. The colorful delicate petals on the flowers.
“Takumi-Chan!”
Out the window of the art room I see my brother Natsu calling out to me with his best friend Yuki right next to him. I smiled down at them waving.
“Oy, nii-san. What do you need?”
“Hoi hoi, I cant even say hi to my little sister. Heh, well anyways. Do you want to come with me and Yuki to go eat after club activities?”
“Mmm, you just want me to go so I can pay for you, neh?”
“Ehehehe, how did you guess?”
“I thought so. Well its okay, I still owe you from last time.”
“Ahh, thanks Kumi-chan. Let’s go Yuki.”
“Bye nii-san, bye Yuki-san”
“Bye! We’ll come pick you up after club activities ok?”
“Ok”
I smiled as they walked away. I always enjoyed them coming over to the art room. I always got lonely in there since I was the only one in the art club.
“Hello?”
At the door stood a boy. Probably around the same age as me, 15 or so.
“Can I help you with something?”
“Oh! I was looking for art club do you know where it is?”
“Mhm, you’re looking at it”
“Oh, it’s kind of empty in here, don’t you think?”
“Hmmm, yea. I’m the only one that’s in it so you would expect it to be this empty. Anyways, my name is Mizukoshi Takumi. You can call me Kumi-chan if you want, almost everyone does”
“Oh, how rude of me. My name is Shishido Kiyoshi. Nice to meet you Kumi-chan”
“Its nice to meet you too. Are you new to this school? I’ve never seen you around”
“Oh yes. 2nd year class 2-A”
“Oh, you have the same class as me”
“Takumi-Chan!”
Out the window of the art room I see my brother Natsu calling out to me with his best friend Yuki right next to him. I smiled down at them waving.
“Oy, nii-san. What do you need?”
“Hoi hoi, I cant even say hi to my little sister. Heh, well anyways. Do you want to come with me and Yuki to go eat after club activities?”
“Mmm, you just want me to go so I can pay for you, neh?”
“Ehehehe, how did you guess?”
“I thought so. Well its okay, I still owe you from last time.”
“Ahh, thanks Kumi-chan. Let’s go Yuki.”
“Bye nii-san, bye Yuki-san”
“Bye! We’ll come pick you up after club activities ok?”
“Ok”
I smiled as they walked away. I always enjoyed them coming over to the art room. I always got lonely in there since I was the only one in the art club.
“Hello?”
At the door stood a boy. Probably around the same age as me, 15 or so.
“Can I help you with something?”
“Oh! I was looking for art club do you know where it is?”
“Mhm, you’re looking at it”
“Oh, it’s kind of empty in here, don’t you think?”
“Hmmm, yea. I’m the only one that’s in it so you would expect it to be this empty. Anyways, my name is Mizukoshi Takumi. You can call me Kumi-chan if you want, almost everyone does”
“Oh, how rude of me. My name is Shishido Kiyoshi. Nice to meet you Kumi-chan”
“Its nice to meet you too. Are you new to this school? I’ve never seen you around”
“Oh yes. 2nd year class 2-A”
“Oh, you have the same class as me”
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