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Syko_Crazy's Random Page Umm, this is just a random page of random ideas for random stories that I may develop in the future....I really don't know what I'm going to put on here but I love comments so I'm doing it anyway!! ^^ So....I guess I'm gonna write about pretty much


syko_crazy
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Depressing Emo Poem (different concept for me!!)
This is a depressing poem I thought up when I was putting black lace on my windows one rainy evening....not everything I write is this sad but I thought I'd give it a shot....
{NOTE: I AM NOT A CUTTER!!!!!!! NOR AM I EMO!!!!!! ...nor am I or was I going to be married....I just wanted to try this type of poem out....}

I live in a world of hatred and fears,
Of death and destruction and crocodile tears.
And I never thought it would turn out like this:
But I see now I'm doomed to eternal abyss.
You were my one and my only desire,
But now you have proven you're naught but a liar.
I once thought for sure that you'd make me contented,
But up at the altar you never consented....
You took off your ring and you took out my heart,
And right then and there we were torn apart.
Now I am chained to my desolate life--
Sometimes I think I should pick up my knife....
I'm destined to live filled with thoughts about dying
And how you abandoned me, helpless and crying.

crying




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Lyra Coulter
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comment Commented on: Sun Nov 19, 2006 @ 05:33am
Wow, I hate emoness, but that was a really good poem. The beginning is kinda silly--no offense--because of the crocodile tears, but after that it gets really good!! I like it!! blaugh


comment Commented on: Sun Nov 19, 2006 @ 06:03am
lol i very much dislike emoness too but i thought it would be fun to try it out... i know "crocodile tears" does sound kind of silly but it was a commonly used phrase at one time.... false emotions. glad you like the poem despite the emoness and silliness!!! i will come up with a less depressing one sooner or later. blaugh



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