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Reason for needing a charecter history/ suggestions
If you are reading through my journal this is simply an exerpts from a series of rants about charecter histories and why they're important and how to make me love yours.

If I sent you the link to this page it's because you either did somthing to annoy me through your charecter history or you didn't include one for one reason or another. Read this and reaply.


Four reasons character histories are important
1) Quality control. If I don't keep some limit on the angst factor before long this will devolve into nothing but a moan fest about abusive dads who ripped apart their teddy bear the day their mom died because they killed her and their grandparents sold their livers to pay for their education and... I'm sorry, but I want editing rights on what your character has been through. If what they've been through should have put them in a mental institution for good I want to be able to tell you (as politely as possible) that your character would be in a mental institution and you need to cool off the drama
2) Having a posted character history means that the next person to apply will hopefully read it and go "Oh, A, B, and C happened to this character, I probably shouldn't have A, B, and C happen to mine to" We don't want fifty abuse victims who got raped by their boyfriends and killed there cat.
3) A different type of quality control. Histories are the best way for me to judge your writing skill. An inability to put together a coherent and well-written history has proven a fail proof sign that that person will be giving me headaches before the week is out. By now it's one of the few things that causes me to reject someone flat out to avoid said headaches, calc gives me enough already.
This does not mean it needs to be the equal of a great classic you studied in lit class. I just want as history from as early in life as necessary to the present telling the important details in a manner that I can follow.
4) Not being willing to write a history just makes it seem like you were too lazy to be bothered. This is not a good sign.





If you’re trying to write a bad past without making it too terribly angst-ridden here’s a suggestion:
Make your character active, and make them make bad choices every so often.
I love it when characters end up in a bad place because of bad decisions as well as bad luck instead of fate just having a hit out against them. It leads to a much more believable character, more room for personal growth, and helps keep them from having a victimized attitude. People with victim complexes tend to be very boring to rp with.

Here is an example of what I mean, My character

Amelia had a good life, the worse thing that could be said about it was she was pushed a little to hard to excel but she wasn't beaten or starved when she didn't. She didn't have a choice about falling in love with another girl but she chose to act on it perfectly aware of what would happen if her parents found out. She didn't have a choice about the bad things that happened after that (but it is made very clear she tried to do something about it rather than just going damsel in distress) and when she was committed to a mental institution for a few months it was because she chose to try to kill herself, not because someone framed her or some overeager doctor decided he needed another inpatient.
After she got out she chose to run rather than needing to because of something. She made bad decisions by getting into drugs and eventually the hard stuff. She shared needles knowing full well the dangers of that and she got HIV not because someone raped her but because of her own bad decisions and now she has to live with that.
Even now, with her rather self destructive behavior (not eating or sleeping for days, occasionally relapsing into self injury) are all her own faults and when she alienates people the narration doesn't blame them or call them names. Her personality’s hard to live with and I as the author am aware she’s not the easiest person to get along with.





New Rule Added
Rule # 18
a) Giving a klondak bar to someone with the munchys is a very good way to make friends.
b) Attempting to drive a car from the backseat while eating a klondak bar because everyone else in the car is also eat klondak bars and unable to eat onehanded (as you are doing) is never a good idea.





When Wind is In the West
A charecter peice, the "translation" of a song my charecter Aniki sings about her people, the Roshborin, and the reasons they seperated from their cousins the Roshnosin as well as fortelling of a day when they will reunite. Based loosely on a song from a book (cyber cookies for those who know the song)
Blue is the Roshborin Green is the Roshnosin black is both.


When Wind is in the West

When spring unfolds the archon blooms
And birds are in the bough
When light is on the Wildrun Stream
And Tregnin are on the prowl
When stride is long and breath is deep
And sweet the morning air
Come back to me come back to me
And say my land is fair


When Spring comes forth to clan and tent
And caravans rest in the glade
When song are sung throughout the night
And new tales are being made
When stars and storms are in the sky
And wind brings unknown air
I'll wander far and heed not your call
Because these land are fair


When Summer lies upon the hills
And in a noon of gold
Beneath blue skys and on green earth
The song of life unfolds
When flowing feild are calm and cool
and wind is in the west
Come back to me come back to me
And say my land is best


When summer warms the dusty roads
And the skys are full of stars
When fires burn away the night
and dawn finds us in safe arms
When perfect nights are fast and free
And wind is in the west
I'll wander far and heed not your call
Because these lands are best


When winter comes the winter wild
That bloom and beast will slay
When gods shall fall and starless nights
Devour the endless day
When wind is in the deadly east
Then in the bitter rain
I'll look for thee and call to thee
And travel forth with thee again


When Winter comes and singing ends
Darkness falls without a light
When song and step fall no more
And failed is thought and sight
I'll wander far, listen for your call
And in this bitter rain
We'll walk once more side by side
And travel together once again


Together we'll take the twilight road
And follow the wind into the west
We'll wander far beyond death's call
To where we both may rest





 
 
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