PLZ comment on my poems in blue thx
Last Login: 10/26/2009 6:30 pm
Registered: 07/26/2008
Gender: Female
Birthday: 09/18
My heart acks in pain because i lost u
My heart hurts because ur gone
My heart crys out to u but u no longer listen
Its because u no longer care about me and my missery
One day u were here then u were gone
like the wind i must sing
and like the sky im must fly high
but the day u may come back it will be a sincer
victory to see me cry but here and now
im no longer urs cause u boke me
in half and just laughed
The day will come when i dont need u
The day will come when i dont want u
The day will come when u relize i was a mistack
The day will come when i cry away in pain
I always think of u in my sleep in
my dreams I always think of u all day
all night hoping that ur all right i always
think of u wishing that ur thinking of
me too every minute every second of the
day i think of u in every special way
i always think of u cause i love u
I don't want to be me i just
want to be free from the soul
that lies inside me
U may hate me u may say im different
in a big way but listen here and listen
good im ganna be me forever more
Who would u trust when ur life's in
the dust who could u live for ur
whole life y would u cry when ur
love says goodbye because it's true
when they say love last a lifetime
The days we meet r sincer
and sweet but when we leave
i cry and weep
Even if the love i felt for him
was no more thatn a weal echo of
wat i was capable of, even if my
heart was far away, wandering and
grieving after my lost romeo would
it be so very wrong to love another?
u captured my heart then tore
it apart like it didnt mean
anything to u from the start
Could he like a girl like me
strange and weird with
coriousity day by day night by
night i wonder if he'll be my guy
I trusted u with my heart now i just
fall apart we were together for some
years now the pain brings me tears when
the stars shine above i no there is a
song waiting to be sung u were my dreams
u were everything to me now i shall go
into the light but then i froze u were
there begging me to stay but i no the
way were i must go into the shadoes of
no return were i must perish and its said
PLZ comment on my poems in blue thx
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"Long ago, there lived a little girl in a small town that was at the foot of a mountain. She was very shy and awkward and had no friends. Her hair always hung in front of her face, which gave her a strange appearance; which made the villagers dislike her more.
One day, on her way home, all the children in the town cornered her while she was walking. They started throwing rocks at her and calling her names. But the children suddenly stopped, because the little girl raised her arm up and pointed to one of the boys. "You will die in 3 days" she said. The kids got scared and ran off screaming.
Three days later, the boy unexpectedly started vomiting blood. He died before he reached the hospital. Soon, the little girl started announcing more of the villager's deaths, and they would all die on the predicted date. A wave of panic and fear swept over the town. So, the remaining villagers had a meeting in the town hall. After an hour, they had finally decided...
THE NEXT DAY...
The young men in the village led the little girl into the mine, and as soon as they were out of sight, they grabbed her and led her into a secret chamber. They tied her arms, chest and legs to a chair, and one of the men got out a sewing needle. He then grabbed her lips and started sewing them together, so she could never foretell another death. Then they left her in the chamber and sealed the mine forever...
If you don't want the little girl to appear by your bed tonight, send this to 12 people, and the sender. If you don't, she will appear by your bed tonight, with a needle in her hand..."
Ashley smirked to herself and hit the send button. The next day, she received 12 emails from her friends. All were the same chain letter she had sent. She saw them and laughed to herself. "I can't believe they actually believe it. Pathetic!" She logged off her computer, laughing aloud to herself. Then she brushed her teeth and went to bed. But in the middle of the night, she woke up with a cold sweat. She heard a girly giggle in the corner, but no one was there, so she turned to go back to sleep. And then standing there was a little girl with long black hair covering her face. She looked at Ashley with her cold grey eyes and her hands were behind her back. Her face slowly broke into a mischevious smile, and she revealed her arms from behind her back and started giggling. In her hand, was a needle...
(sorry for this, but it was sent to me and i didn't want her to appear next to my bed... or do i????
WHOA, creepy and inapropiate thought) ew