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Last Login: 11/27/2011 11:32 am

Registered: 01/06/2008

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Occupation: poet, novelist, singer

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skiing, sledding, ping pong, swimming, reading, gaming, writing poetry, writing novels, and talking to the sweetest most beautiful caring thoughtful gf iv ever had

Remind me to update my interests.

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-Forevermore by: Captain Cheese

-Fi by: Captain Cheese

eyes by Captain Cheese

The snire by: Captain Cheese

I believe by: captain cheese

-Excerpt from the catching of the snark The butcher by: lewis carroll

- as the fire burns by my gf janet

Forevermore

The angry setting sun glows bright,

it speaks of love and moon lit nights

oh yes my love I'll hold you dear forever more and many years

Your beauty great your kindness fine and so i feel you are divine

oh yes my love I'll hold you dear forevermore and many years

oh how may I profess my love for one as graceful and fine as doves

oh yes my love I'll hold you dear forevermore and many years

I could try roses i could try ring i could try to bring you everything

oh yes my love I'll hold you dear forevermore and many years

but something as hollow as being bribed could not reveal my love for thy

oh yes my love I'll hold you dear forevermore and many years

by: Captain cheese

dedicated to dragonfly 44 (Janet)my girl friend

Fi

The moon has risen, risen high

from his slumber wakes a creature called Fi

Fi clamors over snowy creasts

Fi lives in a big frozen mess

in many ways the lands like Fi's heart

no room for love no room for art

but even fi's known love before

back when his heart was soft and pure

oh dont let my heart be like Fi's

I want to love you all our lives

dedicated to janet

Eyes

The sun was reflecting in your eyes

Glistening like deep pools

Causing many glimmering sparkling shades

Breaking all the rules

And as I gazed into your eyes I realised I was blessed

To know someone so smart and kind

Who laughed when I did jest

Oh yes my love she knows me well

And shares with me a kiss

That carries me far, far away on a sea of bliss

dedicated too Janet

The snire

The Snire

In the marshes of burning fire is the burrow of the snire

The snire is a gentle beast

It lives on corn and starch and yeast

It burns with passion

(just like me)

for someone that makes him happy

he really likes to run about

and doesn’t want to sit and pout

his loving gentle soft embrace will melt your heart

and make it race

he just wants to make you glad

but…

although the snire is a gentle beast

his looks strike fear

like the monster beast

so often the snire is sad not glad

for shallow woes and shallow ways is what makes up most lives today

treat people the way u want to be treated please!!

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Hey i'm captain cheese i enjoy swimming skiing and gaming i only have a pc (no ps2 ect).
I have the most loyal friends on the planet. I also broke my thumb and wrist skiing. It hurt but was crazy fun

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toad19 Report | 08/15/2009 10:06 am: lol I take that as a no, XD Oh well, I guess I can live with that. razz
blue_eyed_cutie32 Report | 08/14/2009 9:18 am: hey
toad19 Report | 08/10/2009 7:53 am: Heyy, how are you ? I haven't heard from you in a long. I was wondering if you'd be able to take off the poem I wrote? :$ Please?
audiimars Report | 04/05/2009 1:23 am: hey...
how are you...
audiimars Report | 01/09/2009 5:11 am: oh... that sucks... 8(
audiimars Report | 01/08/2009 2:10 am: lol...
so what's up...
audiimars Report | 01/03/2009 10:57 pm: oh...
yah.. that's really boring...
i couldn't even consider that a vacation...
sorry, i'm supposed to make u feel better...
audiimars Report | 01/02/2009 11:50 pm: ooohhh...
u've done nothing but bore yourself?
i thought you're on a vacation?
isn't that supposed to be fun?
audiimars Report | 01/01/2009 3:17 am: heya captaincheese!
what u been up to??
lol... haven't heard from u for a while...
and ahmm... happy new year!
toad19 Report | 08/21/2008 10:43 am: you are but it got cover acidently

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I believe

I believe we are meant to be

That our love will last eternally

And in this fact I chance to hope

That we will meet

That’s why I wrote

I love you

poem by lewis carroll

The Beaver brought paper,portfolio, pens,

And ink in unfailing supplies:

While strange creepy creatures came out of their dens,

And watched them with wondering eyes.

So engrossed was the Butcher, he heeded them not,

As he wrote with a pen in each hand,

And explained all the while in a popular style

Which the Beaver could well understand.

"Taking Three as the subject to reason about--

A convenient number to state--

We add Seven, and Ten, and then multiply out

By One Thousand diminished by Eight.

"The result we proceed to divide, as you see,

By Nine Hundred and Ninety Two:

Then subtract Seventeen, and the answer must be

Exactly and perfectly true.

"The method employed I would gladly explain,

While I have it so clear in my head,

If I had but the time and you had but the brain--

But much yet remains to be said.