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heres my lifes work i hope you like

why god why
i sit here asking why god why,
why would you let me cry,
why would you let my cousin die,
why would let the love of my life sigh,
why god why would you make me hurt inside,
have all this pain never to subside,
let the little children cry make them empty hollow and tryed,
im supposed to abide to all the rules you lied!
i know i should have died why i was born im sorry to make you forelorn
even my mother wishes i was never born!
all i ever do is ask why god why help the people to get bye
dont let so many die,
dont make the children cry,
help the mothers to find love inside,
help all those who need,
stop making the forsaken bleed,
they did not heed,
im sorry they did not read,
even know ive heard them plead,
god i know you bleed,
but why are you so mean not just to me but we.
LIFE AFTER DEATH

i see these things
a hollowed soul torcherd scream
in the depths of the ream
evil things chasing me many horrible, mean
as i run they poke fun
scratching clawing at me
to hurt, destroy me kill me
but as they will try i will never die
for i posses the skill and
have the will to live forcefully
while existing feabley trying to wake me
scornfully screaming in my ear
though never to hear
shakely to break down in tears
as all my fears have been realized
my body has expired
i start to perspire as i stand next to it
i find my life has just ended
regretfully i stand mended wondering
why is my soul is still suspended on this plain of
life after death

in this book is my poem word and thoughts


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Reporting_Staff

Report | 05/09/2007 5:41 pm

Reporting_Staff

what the?
Bakuyru

Report | 05/09/2007 1:11 pm

Bakuyru

looks like someones over confident, over confidence will lead you to your downfall
Sorrows_Fallen_Angel

Report | 05/09/2007 12:34 pm

Sorrows_Fallen_Angel

IF U CRY, I CRY!
IF U FIGHT, I FIGHT!
IF U JUMP OFF A BRIDGE,
OH HELL IM COMING!

if u are a true friend send this to 10 people including the person that send it 2 u

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forgottensoul84

Report | 05/09/2007 11:23 am

forgottensoul84

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forgottensoul84

Report | 05/09/2007 11:22 am

forgottensoul84

hey...^^...
Reporting_Staff

Report | 05/09/2007 4:52 am

Reporting_Staff

*sighs* can't you two just get along?
jinx angel

Report | 05/08/2007 7:09 pm

jinx angel

I love your new poem!
Bakuyru

Report | 05/08/2007 2:46 pm

Bakuyru

stare
Reporting_Staff

Report | 05/08/2007 2:37 pm

Reporting_Staff

Bakuyru be nice
Toshiba Geek Squad

Report | 05/08/2007 3:56 am

Toshiba Geek Squad

hola