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Angeyshinobi123

Report | 09/18/2011 6:46 pm

Angeyshinobi123

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Felaria

Report | 04/16/2011 2:54 pm

Felaria

Thats actually kinda cool.
Can't be done, college require every class to have some group projects to help get tstudents used to working with others.
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 8:36 pm

Felaria

Well, you have detail, but I think that authors assume that the reader has some background knowledge.
You describe places in detail, but the move on to actions and dialogue to break it up.
Having the chapeters close together you make it seem alot more heavy.

Luckily I know a bit about spain,but we need to work togethre, if it was a solo project it'd already be done.
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 8:30 pm

Felaria

Its about the political status of Spain.
Hmmm....I'll reread it some time and see if I can help you at all....
? Okay then.
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 8:24 pm

Felaria

Its good, just needs work, something to break it up a little.
Don't really know...hopefully we'll meet at some point since theres onlytwo/three weeks left.
No you haven't yet.
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 8:16 pm

Felaria

Maybe if you stretched out the the chapters between areas/places? It could help break it down so there is less coming all at once. The guy's name is Sam.
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 8:05 pm

Felaria

The main person in it hasn't agreed to meet yet. Your story isn't too bad....but there's so much your trying to put in all at once and it kinda get overcrowded by detail.
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 8:02 pm

Felaria

You mean your novel stry thing in Anasa? Projects are okay, some are group things, and my group hasn't meet yet, not even once stare
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 7:57 pm

Felaria

Well of course now's the time to bombard us with projects and exams/
Felaria

Report | 04/15/2011 5:58 pm

Felaria

True,I have classes, but they end early in the day.