i know you dount know me but can you tell me what you think of my story
“Why did it have to be me” “Why did it have to be me?” the dying boy said a voice whispered to him “it seems you need to go back to where you are” and slowly, the boy smiled even though he was loosing his life rapidly. He died in an instant then he leaves his body and sees himself dying slowly.
“I just want to call her and tell her I love her but maybe I’m not the one who is destined for her or maybe I will hurt more if she know how I felt for her” “but I want her to know how I felt for her just for a while so I can,, I can rest in peace.
“Maybe this is for the beast” “know don’t toke like that” I turned my head and I sow “Athena how are you here” “come on you don’t think that I was waking with you for nothing” “but your dead” “I know and you will be to that is the only resin you can see me” “so I guess this is it then” “ tack my hand blaine and I will show you your life” “I don’t think I won’t to see my life” “you have no chose ether you come with me or you go with him” “how?” “Him” and there he was death just as anyone would see him nothing but bones and eyes as red as the fire of hell he came closer and out of fear I grab Athena’s hand and then I sow a white light and then nothing “where are we” “hold on where not there yet.”
There they where the golden gates of haven “are we rely in haven” “no where at Disneyland what do you think” then I sow her “mom” tears came to her eyes and she told me that she was happy that I was with her but it wasn’t my time “ mom no I’m not leaving not after all this I cant lose you again” “I’m sorry blaine but your time has not come yet” “mom don’t make me go back” “its not in my hands son” then with those words side it felt like I was being pulled back I tried to hold on to my mom but she let go “mom no” she’s gone again after 10 years I filly sow her and she was gone just like that there where going in to a blare and then I heard it the crying of some grill I turned my head and I sow my sister “Courtney I haven’t seen you cry like that since mom died she look up and hug me hard your choking me she let go and she was glade to see me awake I looked around and I sow that Travis and his wife where there sleeping Courtney said they got here as fast as they cued “you where all over the news” “really well it doesn’t surprise me I mean I’m the one stopped the gangs, where’s Ashley” “She went to go get some coffee she was so scared for you” after minute or tow Ashley came in and sat next to me “the doctor said that when you got here you where all ready dead but they still tried and after awhile they where going to give up but then they got a pals and you where alive” she looked down and started to cry “I thought I was going to lose you” “but you didn’t I’m still here” “I know I just cant think of losing you” shortly after I left the hospital and changed my life so I have this to say to you all do better in your life because you will never know when this will be your last days on earth
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“Why did it have to be me” “Why did it have to be me?” the dying boy said a voice whispered to him “it seems you need to go back to where you are” and slowly, the boy smiled even though he was loosing his life rapidly. He died in an instant then he leaves his body and sees himself dying slowly.
“I just want to call her and tell her I love her but maybe I’m not the one who is destined for her or maybe I will hurt more if she know how I felt for her” “but I want her to know how I felt for her just for a while so I can,, I can rest in peace.
“Maybe this is for the beast” “know don’t toke like that” I turned my head and I sow “Athena how are you here” “come on you don’t think that I was waking with you for nothing” “but your dead” “I know and you will be to that is the only resin you can see me” “so I guess this is it then” “ tack my hand blaine and I will show you your life” “I don’t think I won’t to see my life” “you have no chose ether you come with me or you go with him” “how?” “Him” and there he was death just as anyone would see him nothing but bones and eyes as red as the fire of hell he came closer and out of fear I grab Athena’s hand and then I sow a white light and then nothing “where are we” “hold on where not there yet.”
There they where the golden gates of haven “are we rely in haven” “no where at Disneyland what do you think” then I sow her “mom” tears came to her eyes and she told me that she was happy that I was with her but it wasn’t my time “ mom no I’m not leaving not after all this I cant lose you again” “I’m sorry blaine but your time has not come yet” “mom don’t make me go back” “its not in my hands son” then with those words side it felt like I was being pulled back I tried to hold on to my mom but she let go “mom no” she’s gone again after 10 years I filly sow her and she was gone just like that there where going in to a blare and then I heard it the crying of some grill I turned my head and I sow my sister “Courtney I haven’t seen you cry like that since mom died she look up and hug me hard your choking me she let go and she was glade to see me awake I looked around and I sow that Travis and his wife where there sleeping Courtney said they got here as fast as they cued “you where all over the news” “really well it doesn’t surprise me I mean I’m the one stopped the gangs, where’s Ashley” “She went to go get some coffee she was so scared for you” after minute or tow Ashley came in and sat next to me “the doctor said that when you got here you where all ready dead but they still tried and after awhile they where going to give up but then they got a pals and you where alive” she looked down and started to cry “I thought I was going to lose you” “but you didn’t I’m still here” “I know I just cant think of losing you” shortly after I left the hospital and changed my life so I have this to say to you all do better in your life because you will never know when this will be your last days on earth