But she always makes up for her bad qualities and habits by being loyal and helping them out. See, they're all super girls, so like any other superhero/magical girl team, they have different missions and adventures to handle.
Here's an example of what Leelee is like:
Leelee goes to Sara's house.
Leelee: *Shyly* Hey, Sara. Can I....have a-a little iced tea...?
Sara: Sure. smile
Leelee: *Pours herself a big cup, using half of Sara's mom's iced tea gallon*
*Leelee sits down on the couch next to Sara*
Leelee: Oh, by the way, Sara, I brought it. The notes on how to win this operation.
Sara: Thanks, Leelee. *Warm smile*
It's weird, cuz I'm growing to hate my MC even more and more and I'm just thinking of making the second redhead the MC, or Sara the MC.
THE main character is Leelee, and...She just doesn't have a personality. She only goes to the other girls' houses to eat their food and snacks, show them her fav videos on youtube, and she can be really loyal and nice and funny and caring.
But when her friends have trouble in their lives, she only gives them advice. It's not that she doesn't care, it's just that she'd rather not get involved.
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Good quality: She brought what they needed.
Here's an example of what Leelee is like:
Leelee goes to Sara's house.
Leelee: *Shyly* Hey, Sara. Can I....have a-a little iced tea...?
Sara: Sure. smile
Leelee: *Pours herself a big cup, using half of Sara's mom's iced tea gallon*
*Leelee sits down on the couch next to Sara*
Leelee: Oh, by the way, Sara, I brought it. The notes on how to win this operation.
Sara: Thanks, Leelee. *Warm smile*
THE main character is Leelee, and...She just doesn't have a personality. She only goes to the other girls' houses to eat their food and snacks, show them her fav videos on youtube, and she can be really loyal and nice and funny and caring.
But when her friends have trouble in their lives, she only gives them advice. It's not that she doesn't care, it's just that she'd rather not get involved.
Should I make her fall for her, make her hardcore in lesbian love, or just a crush, or just subtext?