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Report | 09/14/2008 3:35 pm

The Muncho

[wait you couldnt see her eyes i thought]



Muriel looked up at her neighbor to see a stern face, muriel turned around and saw a man, dressed in the same metal outfit as the female visitor.

he pointed a finger at the neighbor and he flew back, electricity surging through him.



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Washington DC, 20 miles.

The space woman took off her helmet

she looked human

though she had pale, blue skin, and what can only be described as war paint on her face.

her long green hair blew in the wind.



she took a deep breath and looked to her left, a ball came and rolled to her feet, she saw a few kids stopped at the side of the road.

she looked at them and picked up the ball...
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Report | 09/14/2008 3:19 pm

The Muncho

[oops, i misunderstood, eitherway they both are dead now lol]



A helicopter was heard overhead, the woman from space looked up and shook her head.

She pointed a finger at it and its blades stopped spinning.

As the helicopter went down squads of police cars surrounded her.





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Muriel reached their neighbors house and collapsed on the porch, hearing the noise the neighbor came outside to check

"Muriel, what.. did... whats going on?"
Abuse your Illusions's avatar

Report | 09/14/2008 3:11 pm

Abuse your Illusions

lolIt is pretty good.

You guys are so creative..I'm just so crap at being nosy.

Its taking me ages to swap through profiles but I'm too engaged in the story.



Its too hard to give up.
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Report | 09/14/2008 3:05 pm

The Muncho

Accepting what was happening Ras and Reg tackled the woman.

after a minute of wrestling she stood up and brushed herself off.



She slowly began to walk toward the highway that was across from the farm.

She took out a devise from her belt, looked at it, an arrow spun around and settled in one location, she set off south.



As she walked Muriel and her daughter ran out to the field where their family lay, Reginald and Rasputins bodies lay twitching from the electricity, their eyes rolled up, gasping hard for air.



The space woman turned back, touched the side of her helmet and began walking again.

The s**t she apparently came in exploded into a fireball engulfing everything in its path.



She looked down at her compass devise and continued south.
Abuse your Illusions's avatar

Report | 09/14/2008 3:00 pm

Abuse your Illusions

Sup..





Just being nosy so i can read the story User Image
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:53 pm

The Muncho

Rasputins wife and daughter ran out of the house to see the commotion.

"WHAT IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON HERE?" the wife yelled.

Alarmed the metalic visitor drew a weapon from her belt.

"Do 10001001zzzDo not come aany... 10010 zz zz closer" She said
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:46 pm

The Muncho

Reginald reached out a hand to the girl, as he said "Who.. are.. you?"

As he touched her suit his he felt an intense burning in that hand.

"AHHHH" he screamed



reacting on instinct, Rasputin fired a shot from his gun....
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:37 pm

The Muncho

The new being stepped out of the darkness.

A tall slender build, obviously female, she looked around carefully.



As she walked a clunking sound was made, she was covered in metal, head to toe, strange beeps and clicks could be heard from behind her emotionless mask.



"100110011101-donde?100101001-Where am i?" she asked.



Reginald stumbled back in disbelief.
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:30 pm

The Muncho

Rasputin went to reach to pull part of it out of the grounf

"DAD WAIT-!" his son began but was cut short by another jolt of electricity that was sent out of the pod.



Rasputin fell to the ground and Reginald ran to his side.

"I'm ok boy.. dig..." Ras said.



Reg went back and took another c***k of frozen dirt from the object.



"Dad... this is... its.. not from earth"



As he said this the sound of a an opening door was heard, steam filled the area and a dark figure emerged from the pod.
Jun Is Valhalla Queen's avatar

Report | 09/14/2008 2:29 pm

Jun Is Valhalla Queen

doing homework all weekend



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have to leave in 15 minutes for band practice
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:25 pm

Jun Is Valhalla Queen

oh User Image
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:23 pm

The Muncho

"Paper wins again old man." Reginald said tossing the glove at his father.



Go ahead, ill start trying to get through the dirt, you lift it."



He begins to strike the ground with his shovel.
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:17 pm

The Muncho

He went to touch it and was suddenly hit with a jolt of electricity.

"what the hell?" he wondered..

He stood up and ran to his shed, he grabbed a pair of gloves, shotgun, shovel and yelled for his son to come help.



They stood above the object, neither of them wanting to touch it next.



"Rock paper scissor..." the son said.
Jun Is Valhalla Queen's avatar

Report | 09/14/2008 2:14 pm

Jun Is Valhalla Queen

sonny is not my name User Image
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:12 pm

The Muncho

This farmer was trying to turn the soil in his field, but living in such a cold environment the shovel wouldnt break through.

He looked around for a minute wondering what to do

out of the corner of his eye he saw a small shining object on the ground some 20 feet away...
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:07 pm

The Muncho

haha nice

theres nothing on tv here

im boreddddd
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Report | 09/14/2008 2:06 pm

The Muncho

watching family guy?
Bee is for Bumble's avatar

Report | 09/14/2008 10:40 am

Bee is for Bumble

Today I am grilling out therefore I will not be eating cereal User Image
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Report | 09/14/2008 10:22 am

opalescences

OMG I HAVEN'T SEEN THAT IN FOREVERRR.





I REMEMBBERRRR.
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Report | 09/14/2008 10:10 am

Zemmiphobe 007

I'm bad at giving excuses User Image

I just want to move away from heree..
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