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My sinful Synphony
Verse
I’m standing here, fighting my shadow as it tears free from behind my flesh
This feeling of raw anger brings fourth intents of death
Your cruelty pains me deep inside by a simple deny
Yet what hurt’s the most is that I can under stand why…
As I wrestle with myself, who do I aim this knife at?
The strings on my wrist had long been severed
Your wings enveloped your soft back
As I contend with the growing fear the word ‘never’
Pre
So take your seats, let me bleed
And welcome to my Synphony
Chorus
Is it wrong of me? Is it wrong of me?
As I stand here grippin a 58’ V?
Even in all my rage, on our stage. You’re the one with the key.
Set you free? Set you free?
You’re the one holding a 51’ Caster
You are without a master in our bloody Synphony.
2nd Ver
I’ll do what’s right, another burial below my skin.
Strings echoing their tones of fate, but what if
They really were the human voice with no words?
So then that would make you a mournful song bird.
I trust you with everything so I hand you this knife
I want to rip off this mask and for your own life.
If this is what’s required, then take my wrist and play me
I promise I’ll sing for you as we harmonize our symphony
[ Epic guitar solo/duet of massive proportions ]
pre
In my anger and your sadness bleed
And together let’s paint a symphony.
Is it wrong of you, is it wrong of you?
As you let that caster ring true
To only want to save everyone from yourself?
Is it wrong of me? Is it wrong of me?
To let this anger fester on the choice I made?
Break down
No this isn’t the end.
Let’s just let every one know
What this sadist’s play is about.
My anger to the message
Your sadness to melody
This is our show we can put on for the world
A bloody synphony
chrous
Is it wrong of me? Is it wrong of me?
As I stand here grippin a 58’ V?
Even in all my rage, on our stage. You’re the one with the key.
Set you free? Set you free?
You’re the one holding a 51’ Caster
You are without a master in our bloody Synphony.
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can you PM me your email address? i've tried several variations of the one you gave me, but to no avail, i'm bad at guessing these things.
I like it! i don't know if i should comment on it though considering it is in a really rough state...
Maybe when more drafts are out i'll make a few suggestions, but really now, it's your brainchild.
My commentary is often objective and general, I see it as it is and envision its potential.
I'm not sure if that's what you want out of this so that's why i'm kinda unsteady. Don't wanna piss you off or something... Dx
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ryH1TB4gEUY
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I7vKrBDXx_s
tell me what you think! ^_^
http://media.teamxbox.com/games/ss/869/1118882982.jpg
http://www.flickr.com/photos/fhf-org/3555375069/in/set-72157618658088056/
and *cough*................she prolly looks better =P