i redid my original tear. this is on the arena 2 now
The Tears and The Silver Fish
Standing still knee deep in the freezing waters of the ocean. I look down and see goose bumps start to rise out of my skin. I decide to return my gaze to the setting sun, but then I see something. A shining silver. Probably a fish. Then I look back up, the sky now a faint peach color. The slowly retreating water felt wonderful, yet it couldn't lift this veil of sadness that was around me. Then slowly out of my left eye comes a tear. The silver drop slides down my face and off my cherry red lips into the sea. Sliding gracefully as well as silently into the salty water causing a small ripple. I watch my tear as it slides into the water and melts into the ocean. Now another tear falls into the water slowly melting and disappears with the retreating tide. I can't hold back. Now tears a falling back in the water, slowly ruining my make-up. I fall into a soundless sob. I can see the fish coming towards me through my tears. I feel something touch my foot. Instantly sending a chill up my back, a small giggle comes out of me. The fish was trying to lighten my mode I thought, yeah right. But still the fish continues to tickle my foot.
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but sorry pass it on plz
The Tears and The Silver Fish
Standing still knee deep in the freezing waters of the ocean. I look down and see goose bumps start to rise out of my skin. I decide to return my gaze to the setting sun, but then I see something. A shining silver. Probably a fish. Then I look back up, the sky now a faint peach color. The slowly retreating water felt wonderful, yet it couldn't lift this veil of sadness that was around me. Then slowly out of my left eye comes a tear. The silver drop slides down my face and off my cherry red lips into the sea. Sliding gracefully as well as silently into the salty water causing a small ripple. I watch my tear as it slides into the water and melts into the ocean. Now another tear falls into the water slowly melting and disappears with the retreating tide. I can't hold back. Now tears a falling back in the water, slowly ruining my make-up. I fall into a soundless sob. I can see the fish coming towards me through my tears. I feel something touch my foot. Instantly sending a chill up my back, a small giggle comes out of me. The fish was trying to lighten my mode I thought, yeah right. But still the fish continues to tickle my foot.