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Battle of the Mind
I looked upon your face
Eyes filled with knowledge
Long stories told in just one quick glance

No one can understand
What I see
But that is what is different

I can see things that people don’t even know about themselves
I see parts of people no one would recognize
But that is what I can do

Not many people can tell,
In one glance
A person’s mood

But then I see you,
Eyes filled with thousands of emotions
Thousands of questions running through your mind

Your look puzzles me
I have never seen it before
It is so different from the rest

I have never seen so much sadness,
I have never seen such joy,
In one person

Different emotions,
Emotions that collide
And battle with one another

Yet in such harmony
And compact
In one small place




This place is where good and evil make peace
It is where anger and joy combine
It is where hate and love blend

This sensation that has come over me,
It is completely new
But I can’t even come close to understanding

I just need one peak
One small glance
Inside your mind

Your eyes meet mine
And I am quickly confused
Yet astonished at my lack of knowledge compared to yours

You have a look that makes peace
You have a look that makes war
And that…is what is different about you

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InNoHurry Report | 07/04/2013 12:58 am
InNoHurry
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was interesting, to say the least, and I give it a ten. ^^
Oh! And sorry for the random comment. I got bored and started profile hoping. ><
x The Macabre Fairy Report | 09/16/2009 8:35 pm
x The Macabre Fairy
Very nice. I give your poem a 9.
Deep. ^^
Xx-RANDOM-ATTACK-xX Report | 09/11/2009 4:43 pm
Xx-RANDOM-ATTACK-xX
wow u wright awsomee poens smile
FallingMuffin Report | 09/04/2009 9:38 am
FallingMuffin
A 10 On Your Poem..

BUT I CAME HERE TO SAAAAYY!....
Happy Birthday
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- M y l o X y l o t o_05 Report | 07/11/2009 8:30 pm
- M y l o X y l o t o_05
u dont know me but i just wanted
to say that i rly like ur poetry im a poet myself
but not professionally.i give it a 10
Thor93 Report | 07/10/2009 4:55 pm
Thor93
nice poem
katarue Report | 07/01/2009 1:11 am
katarue
Copy this to 10 pro’s an you will get 10,000,000g, it really works, im rich
Quackish Report | 02/01/2009 7:55 am
Quackish
nice poem =3 i give it a 10 ^^

i like your siggy too =3
sophiagold Report | 01/02/2009 6:28 pm
sophiagold
ur poem is really nice i like it
Majig Report | 11/26/2008 8:54 am
Majig
kind of..but i cant see for now. The doctors decided to get me a whole new eye, the first sugery, something went wrong....but it worked the second attempt. Now i have to wait about 3 more weeks to remove the bandage

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I loved u. I was never gonna let u know.
Me and u could have ruled the world.
But that soon showed that it wasnt to be so.
So now its me
Just me
Me against the world...

 

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