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My boyfriend just broke up with me...and I thought he was different than other guys but I was wrong...I should have listened to my friends...they warned me not to get to close and I did and look where I ended up...back in my depressind shell or sorrows and deciet....this is the poem I wrote and sent to him and so here it is... I would like your input on what you like or dont like about it...I've written alot better poems than this but I still like this one...kk...


My heart is broken
It is inked in a little lie called love
It was torn by your deciet
Slipping away shove by shove

I thought that you were different
I thought you were someone I could trust
Now I see you are just the same as everyone else
Leaving my heart in the rain to rust

Just the other day
Everything was fine
I had nothing to worry about
Not a dark or sad thought on my mind

But now my heart aches
Like no-one could ever cure
The fresh pain you've just put me through
tainting my tthought dark, that were once pure

Im sorry to dissapiont you
but im a loss, not a gain
And to ever have loved you
I am now put to shame

I thought you were perfect
I thought you were the one
But now i realize im just stupid enough
that i was probably just used for your fun(sexual entertainment)

Im sorry that I bothered you
im sorry i ever cared
for now im drowning and choking in my sorrows
that are now being shared

so sorry you wont get a second chance
dont ask cuz i wont be there
im sorry if you want to know
because i wont tell you where