Welcome to Gaia! ::

Gaia Forums » MISC Forums » Forum & Sticky Archive » Works in Progress
<3 </3
Reply
1 2 >

Offline
User Image


that's my own invented character



and this is skuld from Oh! My Goddess! smile


User Image



besides the shape of the face, and the dull eyes,

can you tell me how to improve my drawing?

Offline
lol

Offline
Picture Post forum if you really want people to crit your work. You won't get too many replies here. ^___^ Hope it helps!

Offline
wink

Offline
Work on the anatomy. blaugh
And the wings on the first piece looks.... strange.

Offline
you just need to fix the wings

Offline
anatomy.... ^__^

Offline
Check your proportions and I doubt those wings could support her weight. I think the clothes might be your strongest point. The hair bugs me too. It needs more flowiness. Not bad though.

Offline
the wings are an awsome idea, just work on the actual drawing some more... they seem lopsided. and the eyes arn't level... that would bug the heck out of me.

is that a cape behind her? it look great, but i think there would have to be waves and folds in it... unless there is supposed to be a wire keeping it stiff xp

and the hand creep me out... but other wise, it;s awsome^^ and i really like the sendong one, i havem't looked close at it yet though. the other one was just stuff that jumped out...

Offline
i dont think those wings would help her fly.and in the first picture her arms seem stiff. domokun
thats what i think you should work on other then
that i think its fantastic. :]

Offline
thanks!
I draw hands horribly crying
I'm very bad at drawing the body T.T
can anyone suggest me a good teaching thing?

Offline
Perhaps college art classes.

Of course the 6 years of drawing indicates you've been drawing since you were six, right?

Just have fun until then.

Offline
crying
i started at 7.
I'm 4 days till i;m 13 ^_^

Offline
the first one looks really good..

i can imagine it being close to finish.. the wings for all i care can remain the way they are.. if at the end they will look fading to transparent.. kinda like ghostly angelic wings... i can very well picture me that..

one thing though.. is the picture skewed or is she really so thin?

makes her look like a stick .. with wings.. biggrin

other then that.. very cool! smile

Offline
The wings in the first one are a bit odd.

But you should stick to creating your own charecters. WHY??? Because if you draw your own charecters, no one can tell you if its bad or good because they wouldn't know what you wanted it to look like. You draw 'wesome.
Gaia Forums » MISC Forums » Forum & Sticky Archive » Works in Progress

Quick Reply

Submit
Manage Your Items
Other Stuff
More
Get GCash
Offers
More
Get Items
More Items
More
Where Everyone Hangs Out
Other Community Areas
  • Guilds
    fan clubs for the stuff you love
  • Chat
    chat in real time with other Gaians
  • Art Arenas
    browse & rate gaian art galleries
  • Clans
    play zOMG with others
More
Virtual Spaces
Fun Stuff
More
Gaia's Games
Mini-Games
More
Play with GCash
Play with Platinum
More