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Post: 29298759_1 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 10:48:58 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 10:48:58 +0000

that's my own invented character

and this is skuld from Oh! My Goddess! smile

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besides the shape of the face, and the dull eyes,

can you tell me how to improve my drawing?

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Post: 29298759_2 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 10:54:06 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 10:54:06 +0000

lol

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Post: 29298759_3 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 10:55:17 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 10:55:17 +0000

-EDIT- hm..for te first one the..err..wing? im guessing, the feather ooking things r consistant in shape..i mean i know its upposed to be wavy but its still awkward..for th second the proportions a bit off on the lower half..and lastly the fingers r...scary..-.-;; ,but other than that gj =D..oh..i just noticed..the top one the back foot is angled too much..eheh..srry..^^;;

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Post: 29298759_4 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:12:13 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:12:13 +0000

What FFCloudx said about the wings...

and also, her arms seem too short, and uneven.

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Post: 29298759_5 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:26:07 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:26:07 +0000

Verry cute concepts, I love the first picture, it's creative.

As other people have pointed out though their are a few mistakes than any anime artist can easily make. For example, the arms are a bit to short for thr rest of her proportions, this makes the torso look to long and in turns throws off the entire equilibrum of the body.

Another thing I noticed was the head shape, I myself sometimes have a hard time at this, but find it easily correctable by simply drawing a circle to start with and than slowly shape it untill it looks right. This will also help you get the eyes equal wich, in front view, is hard to get just right.

Besides thoses commonly made mistakes the art is quite cute.

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Post: 29298759_6 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:49:21 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 11:49:21 +0000

wow!!!!
amazing!!!
I love it!!!!

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Post: 29298759_7 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 12:12:44 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 12:12:44 +0000

You should get some books on anatomy and preportion. The skill is there, but the technique is not!

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Post: 29298759_8 created on Fri, 06 Jul 2007 12:15:18 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Jul 2007 12:15:18 +0000

Really I think the only thing that is gonna help you is practice. You seem to have the basic idea on how to draw, which is much more than can be said for many people.

As such, you simply need to keep drawing to refine your talents. No amount of tutorials or advice is likely to help you as much as lots and lots of practice.

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Post: 29298759_9 created on Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:00:37 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:00:37 +0000

thanks!
THank you so much!

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Post: 29298759_10 created on Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:04:23 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:04:23 +0000

scream

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Post: 29298759_11 created on Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:06:00 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:06:00 +0000

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Looks like you traced Dx
that IS tracing paper after all.

Another sign that makes it seem like you traced is how you drew the hearts and text. they are at a much lower level than the art you're claiming is yours.

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Post: 29298759_12 created on Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:09:53 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:09:53 +0000

Their really cute. ^^ I'd love to commish you!

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Post: 29298759_13 created on Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:20:47 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:20:47 +0000

Neko_Amber

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you know what
I just scribbled the heart
why would I post something that I traced and ask how I draw?
why would I open a shop if they won't pay me after I sent them the art?

why would I add a stupid heart if I don't draw good?!
I would spill it all if I draw bad!

I'M NOT STUPID!!!!

I hate the kind of people like you
that just blame others with out even using your brain
I'm sorry

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Post: 29298759_14 created on Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:22:34 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:22:34 +0000

and oh yeah
that is TEST SCRATCH PAPER
why it looks like that is because I took a picture
not scan

my dad is a teacher
and he took it for me

do you have a problem?

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Post: 29298759_15 created on Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:25:49 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Jul 2007 05:25:49 +0000

LisrenLin

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dear you're the one with the problem.
If you can't take people's honest opinions don't ask for them.
I have every right to think you traced and you have no reason to hate me for it
I had no way to know if you did or not and from what i could see it seemed as if you did.
You my friend need an attitude adjustment.

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