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13/01/05 For all you Spilled Inc. fans, there will be a FREE SHORT STORY from either Lilithia or DNA_Guru for the FIRST POSTER on Page 45! domokun heart
11/01/05 Finally! Hooray! Our new banner is up! Thus this brings us to Version 1.4 - the banner was made by Aeris WV, thankyou so very for taking in our request for the banner!
10/01/05 Welcome post now has NAVIGATION so it makes it easier for those who hate to scroll. whee heart
06/01/05: OFFICIAL OPENING: As we couldn't wait to open up... obviously we did so... And we also added a new writer: DNA_Guru! We won't accept any new members until further notice.
05/01/05: We, Joshua Watanabe, Atarashii and Lilithia are setting up the association... Hopefully we'll be able to launch it in public soon!
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Beneath follows a couple of terms we writers will use. They concern genres and ratings. Each writer will have a list in their post under 'Genres' where they will state what genre they are willing to write!
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Stealing words is at least as bad as stealing drawings. Therefore make sure you get approval from the authors to publish or post their stories on Gaia and other sites.
Writing is a serious job to us. Therefore, be respectful and nice to the artists. Don't flame, harass or annoy them!
Our writers are asked to collaborate closely with the person who commissioned them to make sure they understand what the customer wants. Everything that might help to get the authors on track is welcome: drawings, jottings, sketches, songs or music...
Our writes always have the right to not accept an order if they feel they are not up to it.
Please understand you cannot retract your purchase. It would be unfair towards the writer if they have started on your commission already.
If you find 'Art Trades' in an artist's post, that simply means they are up for art trades. PM the writer of your choice with samples of your art and let them decide how much they think it can be traded for.
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</center>Beneath follows a couple of terms we writers will use. They concern genres and ratings. Each writer will have a list in their post under 'Genres' where they will state what genre they are willing to write!
Ratings:
- General (G): Suitable for all ages. This signifies that the story contains nothing most parents will consider offensive for even their youngest children to see or hear. Nudity, sex scenes, and scenes of drug use are absent; violence is minimal; snippets of dialogue may go beyond polite conversation but do not go beyond common everyday expressions.
Parental Guidance (PG): Some material may not be suitable for the most youngest among us. This signifies that the story may contain some material parents might not like to expose to their young children. Explicit sex scenes and scenes of drug use are absent; nudity, if present, is seen only briefly, horror and violence do not exceed moderate levels.
PG13 : Some material may be inappropriate for children under 13. This signifies that the story may be inappropriate for pre-teens. Rough or persistent violence is absent; sexually-oriented nudity is generally absent; some scenes of drug use may be seen; one use of the harsher sexually derived words may be heard.
Restricted (R): This rating signifies that the story contains some adult material. An R may be assigned due to, among other things, a story's use of language, theme, violence, sex or its portrayal of drug use.
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- angst - describes a story as having sadness and depressing elements.
A/A (also action/adventure) - describes a story in which there are fight scenes and often elements of the heroic journey.
dark - describes a story that is darker than angst, usually. involving violence, twisted characters, and the most horrible of horrible things.
comedy - describes a story that is comical in every sense of the word.
fluff - describes a story that is mostly sweet. Usually a humor fic, fluff has no major character development.
waff - fluff, especially the feel-good kind. Stands for 'warm and fuzzy feeling.'
romance - describes a story where the main focus of the story concerns a romantical relationship between characters.
slash - describes a story including a homosexual relationship, either male or female. Slash fanfic doesn't necessarily include graphic sex or have homosexuality as the focus of the story.
smut - describes a story including graphic sex, be it homo- or heterosexual.
yaoi - describes a story where the main focus of the story concerns a male homosexual relationship. This can be slash or smut.
yuri - describes a story where the main focus of the story concerns a female homosexual relationship. This can be slash or smut.
cookie - a teaser for a longer story (synonym for sample), or a story that is pretty short on its own.
limited novel length - a novel length story is a story that is as long as a 'real life novel,' or close to it. None of our writers will probably be able or up to something like this, except if you wish to pay them with a very high amount of gold or items. And even then it will be a limited version of a novel length story. Don't expect 300 pages, more something like up to 50...
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2. Should the written piece be prose or poetry? Don't request poetry from a writer if he or she hasn't given samples in their post. It means they don't write poetry
3. What genre do you want? You can request romance, drama, comedy, angst, and more. (See each writer's post <- coming soon)
4. Which characters do you want to be involved in the work? What place should it be at, what time? You can post a reference drawing, you can post short descriptions... Basically, everything you can find to help to writer get the picture.
5. Fill in the price you're ordering for.

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There are two ways of handling an order:
- 1. The author will be informed through PM by me if there is someone requesting their art. He or she will have to contact you for details and start the trade with you. Confirm the trade with half the amount of the full price. The writer will then complete the trade and start working on the story.
Once he or she is finished he will let you know through PM and send you a sample. The writer will again start a trade with you. Confirm with the other half of the payment. You will receive the full commission after he or she got his payment.
2. Basically it's the same procedure, only you confirm the trade with the full amount of gold and the artist doesn't complete the trade before he or she finished the order.
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3. What genre do you want? You can request romance, drama, comedy, angst, and more. (See each writer's post <- coming soon)
4. Which characters do you want to be involved in the work? What place should it be at, what time? You can post a reference drawing, you can post short descriptions... Basically, everything you can find to help to writer get the picture.
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None at the moment!

1. Kia Ryou
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Currently working for Maria Bird!



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4K - around 500 words
8K - around 1000 words
12K - around 1500 words
And so on...
8K - around 1000 words
12K - around 1500 words
And so on...
Joshua
I work with amount of words and I know my prices are considerably high, but I can justify them because I put a lot of time and effort in it and I only want it to be perfect just for you...
I am an 'ent' in writing. I tend to write rather slow and as detailed as J.R.R. Tolkien does. So don't expect a full story in 500 words. I'm good at conveying moods and depicting places and that means I need space and words to do so. As I said before, I'm an 'ent'.
I am an 'ent' in writing. I tend to write rather slow and as detailed as J.R.R. Tolkien does. So don't expect a full story in 500 words. I'm good at conveying moods and depicting places and that means I need space and words to do so. As I said before, I'm an 'ent'.

The Lost Episodes... An Arsenic & Cyanure Tale
There they were. The door had closed behind them with a thunderous bang. And this time it would not open again. This time, it would stay locked for him forever. He could have left the place three years ago, when he legally became an adult. But Josef managed to stay there filling the position of counsellor, which had not been filled for over six years, since he was part of the reason why the former adviser left the building and why no one else would volunteer to take the job. Everyone knew he tricked he director of the orphanage into the job, and all of them, even the few unwitting soon-to-be parents that had come to adopt one of the lot, stayed away from his dark and gloomy office. All, but one person...
He himself was not very sure why he kept sticking around in that old place, yet somehow, in all his denials, he could feel it had something to do with her. And he did not even like her!
Chloe had been crying again, and for the umpteenth time, came running down his office. She slammed the glass door shut with surprisingly much vigour in that small body of hers, which almost made the glass rattling like a tambourine. Josef was reading the daily paper by the light of his desk lamp. She sat down in the dimly shaded room and simply cried on. At first he had tried to ignore her by reading on but after about ten minutes the disregard did not pay off and did not change the situation at all.
'Shut up,' he said rather irritated as a sort of last resort.
That always seemed to do it; the girl hushed immediately. He went on reading and flipping one of the pages.
'You can go now.'
'But I don't w-'
'Norman!' Josef suddenly boomed out.
The girl looked up petrified. 'No...'
'Yes, I've had enough of you!'
A tall, muscular man came into the office, followed by a much smaller man carrying one of those dirty white psychiatric jackets.
'Josef...' the girl said silently and obviously taken aback. But he turned his head away and carried one reading the paper.
Norman grabbed Chloe by her shoulders and forcefully turned her around before starting to push her out of the office.
'Get your hands the hell off of me!' she cried out when they reached the door.
'Hey...' Josef looked up and heard the voice.
The little man came closer to the rebellious girl threatening her with the jacket.
'Oh no you won't,' Chloe spit out at him. 'And you... Get your filthy hands off of me!' She shot a nasty look at Norman.
'Get his hands off of her!'
Out of the blue, Josef jumped up, grabbed the deep reddish coloured heavy presse-papier on his desk and aimed it at the right temple of Norman before throwing it with all his power and hitting the very unfortunate male nurse. The moment Norman lost his grip on Chloe, only to fall and loose his consciousness, she swung forward and placed her tiny fist right between the eyes of the little man.
And so this incident caused them to loose their 'home'.
Read the full chapter here
He himself was not very sure why he kept sticking around in that old place, yet somehow, in all his denials, he could feel it had something to do with her. And he did not even like her!
Chloe had been crying again, and for the umpteenth time, came running down his office. She slammed the glass door shut with surprisingly much vigour in that small body of hers, which almost made the glass rattling like a tambourine. Josef was reading the daily paper by the light of his desk lamp. She sat down in the dimly shaded room and simply cried on. At first he had tried to ignore her by reading on but after about ten minutes the disregard did not pay off and did not change the situation at all.
'Shut up,' he said rather irritated as a sort of last resort.
That always seemed to do it; the girl hushed immediately. He went on reading and flipping one of the pages.
'You can go now.'
'But I don't w-'
'Norman!' Josef suddenly boomed out.
The girl looked up petrified. 'No...'
'Yes, I've had enough of you!'
A tall, muscular man came into the office, followed by a much smaller man carrying one of those dirty white psychiatric jackets.
'Josef...' the girl said silently and obviously taken aback. But he turned his head away and carried one reading the paper.
Norman grabbed Chloe by her shoulders and forcefully turned her around before starting to push her out of the office.
'Get your hands the hell off of me!' she cried out when they reached the door.
'Hey...' Josef looked up and heard the voice.
The little man came closer to the rebellious girl threatening her with the jacket.
'Oh no you won't,' Chloe spit out at him. 'And you... Get your filthy hands off of me!' She shot a nasty look at Norman.
'Get his hands off of her!'
Out of the blue, Josef jumped up, grabbed the deep reddish coloured heavy presse-papier on his desk and aimed it at the right temple of Norman before throwing it with all his power and hitting the very unfortunate male nurse. The moment Norman lost his grip on Chloe, only to fall and loose his consciousness, she swung forward and placed her tiny fist right between the eyes of the little man.
And so this incident caused them to loose their 'home'.
Read the full chapter here

- all ratings
angst
A/A
dark
fluff
waff
romance
slash
yaoi
DECENT smut
cookies [5K each]
novel length [DJ's, Angelic + Nightmare Mini's, Bunnies]

None at the moment!

1. Kia Ryou
2.
3.
Currently working for Maria Bird!

kiriko
I didn't like the story. I LOVED IT !!! the charas are perfectly written, it's cool, the style is great ( well this I know when I commissionned you XP ) and I want another story even more blaugh !!!

Interesting Facts
Age: 23
Pseudonym: Soronrille
Location: Belgium
Website: [x]
Joshua is a musicologist in real life and he's keeping himself busy with an interim job teaching music history and music culture. Next to that he's trying to finish a non-fiction and fiction book but he claims he's so addicted to Gaia and such a very big art whore that he seem to be distracted most of the time. Joshua is passionate about a few things in life, which are writing, film music and a few people close to him. He likes to watch movies, listen to scores all day long and he plays the piano.
Joshua got so moved by the movie Alexander, especially by the relationship between Alexander and Hephaistion that he wanted this to be mentioned here. And next to that he thinks the characters Darius and Olympia are very interesting... Last but not least, he has this thing with eagles. Wearing a golden eagle (old American coin) on his necklace he gave himself the pen name 'Soronrille' which basically is Quenya for Brilliant Eagle. And of course the eagle has an important part in both The Lord of the Rings and Alexander.
Pseudonym: Soronrille
Location: Belgium
Website: [x]
Joshua is a musicologist in real life and he's keeping himself busy with an interim job teaching music history and music culture. Next to that he's trying to finish a non-fiction and fiction book but he claims he's so addicted to Gaia and such a very big art whore that he seem to be distracted most of the time. Joshua is passionate about a few things in life, which are writing, film music and a few people close to him. He likes to watch movies, listen to scores all day long and he plays the piano.
Joshua got so moved by the movie Alexander, especially by the relationship between Alexander and Hephaistion that he wanted this to be mentioned here. And next to that he thinks the characters Darius and Olympia are very interesting... Last but not least, he has this thing with eagles. Wearing a golden eagle (old American coin) on his necklace he gave himself the pen name 'Soronrille' which basically is Quenya for Brilliant Eagle. And of course the eagle has an important part in both The Lord of the Rings and Alexander.
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Snippet of Fire Emblem slash fic
The soft trill of a flute drifted on the evening breeze before fading as the wind stirred.
Oblivious to the presence of another, Nilus blew into his instrument once more, fingers moving dexterously along the cylindrical base. There came from the instrument a light, haunting sound; one that seemed to cause the entire atmosphere to wilt with unspoken sorrow.
He continued to play, even as he heard footsteps nearing and leaves cracking underneath the other's boots.
He continued to play, even as he felt a hand touch his face and fingertips brush against his cheek.
"Nilus."
The tune faded at the sound of the other's voice, hands lowering the flute as eyes opened. Crimson flickered over to meet amber, and for a moment, the two just stared at one another.
"Nilus."
Matthew frowned as he drew back from the bard, hands rising and unclasping his cloak before he slipped it off, offering it towards the other.
"It's cold out tonight." He paused. "It won't do to have you get ill . . ."
Nilus stared at the proffered cloak, teal bangs falling over his eyes as he looked off to the side, "It doesn't matter . . ."
Oblivious to the presence of another, Nilus blew into his instrument once more, fingers moving dexterously along the cylindrical base. There came from the instrument a light, haunting sound; one that seemed to cause the entire atmosphere to wilt with unspoken sorrow.
He continued to play, even as he heard footsteps nearing and leaves cracking underneath the other's boots.
He continued to play, even as he felt a hand touch his face and fingertips brush against his cheek.
"Nilus."
The tune faded at the sound of the other's voice, hands lowering the flute as eyes opened. Crimson flickered over to meet amber, and for a moment, the two just stared at one another.
"Nilus."
Matthew frowned as he drew back from the bard, hands rising and unclasping his cloak before he slipped it off, offering it towards the other.
"It's cold out tonight." He paused. "It won't do to have you get ill . . ."
Nilus stared at the proffered cloak, teal bangs falling over his eyes as he looked off to the side, "It doesn't matter . . ."
Snippet of Fire Emblem fic
With the fall of night, the forest had grown quiet, save for the rustle here and there from the animals living within its depths. Darkness shrouded the ground, shadows dancing amongst the foliage.
None of this meant much to the lupine sprawled out on the forest's ground, his sides heaving with each rise and fall. Blood had pooled underneath the ebon creature's form, gashes torn through its fur. Eyes of a rich emerald shade stared at the nearest tree's trunk, darkened with pain and silent agony.
One ear twitched at the sound of approaching footsteps and crackling leaves, and for a brief moment the wolf thought about rising to his feet . . . the notion soon fled as another stab of pain caused his muscles to tense and a soft whimper to escape from his maw.
The footsteps grew louder as whomever they belonged to drew nearer, before stopping right beside the other.
None of this meant much to the lupine sprawled out on the forest's ground, his sides heaving with each rise and fall. Blood had pooled underneath the ebon creature's form, gashes torn through its fur. Eyes of a rich emerald shade stared at the nearest tree's trunk, darkened with pain and silent agony.
One ear twitched at the sound of approaching footsteps and crackling leaves, and for a brief moment the wolf thought about rising to his feet . . . the notion soon fled as another stab of pain caused his muscles to tense and a soft whimper to escape from his maw.
The footsteps grew louder as whomever they belonged to drew nearer, before stopping right beside the other.

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comedy
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Chibizoo
People like to mention how excellent, competent writers have a certain flair to their words; a zing that enunciates every passage with a sparkle. Arii-san would be the antithesis. She does not fling her words with loud declarations or intense emotions, but works at her pieces slowly. The disappointment in a blind child searching for a loved one. The humble trill of a piper wringing his notes in the biting spring air. Her words are simple; and it is this simplicity that brings her stories to life. Granted, her passages do not sparkle with animated life, but instead, pulsate with reality and humility. Read her fics and you too will become riveted in the wordless empathy Arii is able to express so flawlessly.
Seiryuu
Atarashii has a very lovely and flowing writing style, one that never seems forced. She treats her writing seriously, and takes care in making sure her readers are never disappointed. 3nodding

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For a somewhat fan based twist on something I love, I have written a Battle Royale/GaiaOnline spinoff called "Pupil's Dispute" which I am still currently writing the 5th chapter. Below is an piece from this very story. whee
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1. Orion Skyland
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Hey everyone! biggrin Welcome to my section of the shoppe. 4laugh
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*1k {Poetry only!}
*2.5-5K {Depends on complexity & length.}
* Sealed Letters {Different depending on the amount of writing.}
*10+ {For crazy huge stories. Talk to me for more details if interested.}
REMEMBER I DON'T CARE FOR WORD COUNT. domokun
*2.5-5K {Depends on complexity & length.}
* Sealed Letters {Different depending on the amount of writing.}
*10+ {For crazy huge stories. Talk to me for more details if interested.}
REMEMBER I DON'T CARE FOR WORD COUNT. domokun
Lilithia
I'm an <b>extremely</b> passionate writer. I price my writing around 2-2.5K for a full <b>short</b> story. I'm a fast writer too. I <b>don't really care</b> much for <b>word count</b>, as long as it's considered short by my standards.
I really enjoy writing romantic love stories. I consider writing then fun! So if you want a love story, I'd be honoured to be your writer. I'm not only limited to love themes though, they're just a favourite topic of mine.
If you want me to write a <b>longer</b> story for your reading pleasure in your commish, or perhaps a continuation to a short story I have written for you previously - I can do that too.
Please contact me for inquiries & specifications.
I really enjoy writing romantic love stories. I consider writing then fun! So if you want a love story, I'd be honoured to be your writer. I'm not only limited to love themes though, they're just a favourite topic of mine.
If you want me to write a <b>longer</b> story for your reading pleasure in your commish, or perhaps a continuation to a short story I have written for you previously - I can do that too.
Please contact me for inquiries & specifications.

Lilithia's Original Story Soar* - {Chapter One} Welcome to Vaelen*
Lia Xu sat at the window seat of the bus. It was her first day at Vaelen International Grammar School and she was mortified. Vaelen was a well known rich private school, which she had gotten into on scholarship, and the fact that her mother had rich connections, literally.
She had only wished she had gone to the same school as Rae, her younger sister. Rae was extremely talented at the violin, and was attending a school that specialized in the creative arts such as photography, painting and music; and Lia was jealous.
Since Lia was studying somewhat the same courses as her sister, she had hoped they'd go to school together at the same institution. However, she was wrong. For that, she missed her sister and had wished she wasn't starting on a new road all alone.
Lia sighed at the sight of the buildings and houses she watched pass her by through the window. She was extremely nervous. What would these people be like? What would life at Vaelen be? Were these people nice?
Lia was not rich, though her parents were not that poor either. Her mother was a secretary and her father was an engineer. But compared to the students at the school, she was probably seen as poor. All the students at Vaelen International Grammar School were sons and daughters of businessmen, lawyers and some even from famous families, fortunate to be born under such a rank.
Digging into her pockets, she took out a crumpled piece of paper which she had written the details of her dorm room that she would be staying in. Her mother had insisted that Lia stay at the school dormitories as it would be easier for Lia to access at the school. Thus, this is why Lia had hoped for her sister to come, but yet her hopes and anticipations had failed her.
Before Lia could depress about anything else, the bus reached it's destination. Thanking the bus driver, she quickly hopped off and headed towards the office, not hesitating to admire the beauty and immenseness of the school.
As she reached the office, a secretary noticed her and welcomed her in.
"Welcome to Vaelen International Grammar School." the young lady mechanically chirped. "Would you please fill in some forms to confirm your arrival?"
Lia blinked at this question, she had never had to do this for any other school, however this school was obviously different, it was a private school after all.
"Yes alright, where are the forms?"
The secretary coldly handed Lia the forms with a pen, then quickly continued on with her work.
As Lia sat at a seat and filled the forms in, she noticed a group of eight boys walking through the halls of the office. Lia stopped to study them. They walked with an aggressive, compelling air about them. To Lia's surprise, the secretary noticed them in an instant and seemed somewhat intimidated by them.
Confused, and hoping to leave before any conversation erupted, Lia handed the now completed forms back towards the secretary, who exchanged them with her timetable. Once she obtained her timetable, she left the office hurrying towards her first class at Vaelen International Grammar School.
If you're interested in reading the rest of Soar* so far, please check it out here.
She had only wished she had gone to the same school as Rae, her younger sister. Rae was extremely talented at the violin, and was attending a school that specialized in the creative arts such as photography, painting and music; and Lia was jealous.
Since Lia was studying somewhat the same courses as her sister, she had hoped they'd go to school together at the same institution. However, she was wrong. For that, she missed her sister and had wished she wasn't starting on a new road all alone.
Lia sighed at the sight of the buildings and houses she watched pass her by through the window. She was extremely nervous. What would these people be like? What would life at Vaelen be? Were these people nice?
Lia was not rich, though her parents were not that poor either. Her mother was a secretary and her father was an engineer. But compared to the students at the school, she was probably seen as poor. All the students at Vaelen International Grammar School were sons and daughters of businessmen, lawyers and some even from famous families, fortunate to be born under such a rank.
Digging into her pockets, she took out a crumpled piece of paper which she had written the details of her dorm room that she would be staying in. Her mother had insisted that Lia stay at the school dormitories as it would be easier for Lia to access at the school. Thus, this is why Lia had hoped for her sister to come, but yet her hopes and anticipations had failed her.
Before Lia could depress about anything else, the bus reached it's destination. Thanking the bus driver, she quickly hopped off and headed towards the office, not hesitating to admire the beauty and immenseness of the school.
As she reached the office, a secretary noticed her and welcomed her in.
"Welcome to Vaelen International Grammar School." the young lady mechanically chirped. "Would you please fill in some forms to confirm your arrival?"
Lia blinked at this question, she had never had to do this for any other school, however this school was obviously different, it was a private school after all.
"Yes alright, where are the forms?"
The secretary coldly handed Lia the forms with a pen, then quickly continued on with her work.
As Lia sat at a seat and filled the forms in, she noticed a group of eight boys walking through the halls of the office. Lia stopped to study them. They walked with an aggressive, compelling air about them. To Lia's surprise, the secretary noticed them in an instant and seemed somewhat intimidated by them.
Confused, and hoping to leave before any conversation erupted, Lia handed the now completed forms back towards the secretary, who exchanged them with her timetable. Once she obtained her timetable, she left the office hurrying towards her first class at Vaelen International Grammar School.
If you're interested in reading the rest of Soar* so far, please check it out here.
For a somewhat fan based twist on something I love, I have written a Battle Royale/GaiaOnline spinoff called "Pupil's Dispute" which I am still currently writing the 5th chapter. Below is an piece from this very story. whee
Pupil's Dispute {Chapter Four} - by Lilithia
Howell MacKenzie {Male Student No. 1} hid behind some bushes as he stopped to check his day pack. Looking to the sky, he gazed at the vast wash of black. He did not know what time it was, but it seemed like early morning. Checking his wash he confirmed his guesses were right.
Still digging his hands in his bag, he found something soft and plastic. It squeaked as his pressed his hands on it. Pulling it out the object carefully to study it, he realized what weapon he had been given. It was a blow up giant plastic hammer.
That b*****d. How am I supposed to fight with this stupid thing?
Checking his bag once more he found something that Gambino hadn't mentioned would be in the day pack, it was a thin black flashlight.
If I can get close, I could probably knock someone on the head with this. This isn't even my appointed weapon. Pathetic.
Ten metres away from Howell, another student hid behind some bushes. Elisabeth Alyster {Female Student No. 1} was checking her bag for her own individual weapon.
She expected a gun, that's right, a gun. But what she found within her day pack was not what she had in mind. Taking the item out, she grinned with glee when she recognized what it was.
This could be useful.
It may not have been a gun, and it may not have been a blade, but it was something.
This is going to be fun.
Lilithia Tsukiko {Female Student No. 2} ran as fast as her short legs could carry her. Her leg warmers were falling onto her ankles but it wasn't important. What was important was the fact that she had to get away, far away from the establishment where Gambino and her classmates were as quickly as possible.
On the way out she had been told by a soldier that if she did not hurry, she would be killed very soon.
The building that Gambino and the soldiers were was going to be a permanent forbidden zone soon, and she didn't want to stay to see what her collar would do, so she ran.
Lilithia carried two bags with her, one was her day pack which she carried over her left shoulder, the other was her black school bag which she carried on her back.
Although Lilithia wasn't the best runner in the class, she had been told by the class� best track athlete, Kairos McKann {Female Student No. 11} that she could run, especially when she was angry.
Kairos once had a fight with Lilithia, Lilithia couldn't remember what it was about but it had pushed Lilithia to run away from Kairos. She was crying and extremely angry.
Kairos was the best runner in the class, but even Kairos couldn't catch up with Lilithia.
Stopping to catch her breath, she felt a large light fall upon her for a second, then disappear. Shocked and frightened, Lilithia sped behind some trees, but then realizes foolishly what she had done. It was the light from the lighthouse, Lilithia was not far off.
She had only hoped Lea had read the note she had squeezed into Lea's hand before she left.
Back at the underground establishment, Lea Farber {Female Student No. 20} sat in her seat, the fatigue was getting to her. She didn't get much sleep the night before as she had gone out the night before to attend the Muse concert which she had wanted to go to for a long, long time.
Opening up the palm of her right hand, she realized Lilithia had handed her a note. But because of their odd handshake, the piece of paper was crumpled up.
Looking up at Gambino, she realized he was too preoccupied to notice what she was doing out of the entire class, so she uncrumpled the white torn piece of paper.
<center>Miki & I are going to be at the lighthouse. If you see Miki, give her a 'double side' wave. You know how to do it, I've taught you before. She'll know that you're with me.</center>
Lea put the note away after reading it. The lighthouse eh? It's a date.
It was only unfortunate that she was one of the last of the class to leave. Would it still be the same by then?
By then the students would probably be waiting for the likes such as her to come out, and shoot for just taking one step outside.
Xikrai Filinus {Male Student No. 4} a somewhat rebellious student as far as his looks went crept through the bushes carefully. He was one of Zuna's gang, but was funnily enough despite the look of his fire red messy locks, and his black leather clothes, was one of the nicest people of the gang.
He joked around quite a lot. Sometimes however, his jokes would be taken too seriously, and he'd get in trouble. Most of the time though, his gang got his jokes, but anyone else out of his gang never understood his jokes. His looks still ruled overrall.
A lot of the students from the other classes in the same year level would swoon over him whenever he'd walk by.
But this wasn't school, this was a game. The game. His looks weren't going to save him now, he was definitely sure of that.
Pointing his small semi automatic gun in front of him, he made sure that he didn't make any foolish decisions that would make him waste bullets, although he had already checked his day pack had enough bullets to last him for a week of the game.
Before Xikrai could a step further, he felt a loud "Whoosh!" then a "Crack!" followed by a stinging sensation of pain upon his back. Turning around he faced his opponent. It was Elisabeth Alyster {Female Student No. 1} holding a long black whip in her hand.
Reaching to touch his back with his left hand, Xikrai realized he was bleeding.
"Your good looks aren't going to save you now." Elisabeth stated in a cold almost monotone voice, cracking her whip once more hitting Xikrai in the face.
Xikrai moaned in pain now touching his face with his left hand which still had blood on it from touching his back. But then he realizes he had blood on his right hand too which he held close to his chest.
His face was now bleeding, and the blood was dripping off like tears. Elisabeth Alyster had scarred his face. His perfect face. Xikrai was now enraged.
"You ******** b***h!" he growled angrily.
He lifted his gun to shoot at Elisabeth with his right hand, while he covered his now scarred face with his left hand. He missed.
Elisabeth had quickly cracked her whip once more just after Xikrai had finished his sentence, the whip hitting at his right hand, the gun flying out of his hand.
Elisabeth then jumped on Xikrai before Xikrai could reach his gun. She may have been a girl, but she had an incredible strength. He had forgotten Elisabeth was an excellent gymnast.
Being in Zuna's gang, he had never attended a single session of gym class, and thus never knew how dangerous and capable Elisabeth was. She held Xikrai down and attempted to strangle him with her whip.
"Remember the school dance this year? You said you'd like to be ******** by my group? REMEMBER?" she hissed through her teeth.
With her free hand for a slight second, she quickly retrieved the gun and pointed it directly at Xikrai's forehead. She pulled the trigger.
"There. Now you're ********."
45 Students Remaining
Still digging his hands in his bag, he found something soft and plastic. It squeaked as his pressed his hands on it. Pulling it out the object carefully to study it, he realized what weapon he had been given. It was a blow up giant plastic hammer.
That b*****d. How am I supposed to fight with this stupid thing?
Checking his bag once more he found something that Gambino hadn't mentioned would be in the day pack, it was a thin black flashlight.
If I can get close, I could probably knock someone on the head with this. This isn't even my appointed weapon. Pathetic.
Ten metres away from Howell, another student hid behind some bushes. Elisabeth Alyster {Female Student No. 1} was checking her bag for her own individual weapon.
She expected a gun, that's right, a gun. But what she found within her day pack was not what she had in mind. Taking the item out, she grinned with glee when she recognized what it was.
This could be useful.
It may not have been a gun, and it may not have been a blade, but it was something.
This is going to be fun.
Lilithia Tsukiko {Female Student No. 2} ran as fast as her short legs could carry her. Her leg warmers were falling onto her ankles but it wasn't important. What was important was the fact that she had to get away, far away from the establishment where Gambino and her classmates were as quickly as possible.
On the way out she had been told by a soldier that if she did not hurry, she would be killed very soon.
The building that Gambino and the soldiers were was going to be a permanent forbidden zone soon, and she didn't want to stay to see what her collar would do, so she ran.
Lilithia carried two bags with her, one was her day pack which she carried over her left shoulder, the other was her black school bag which she carried on her back.
Although Lilithia wasn't the best runner in the class, she had been told by the class� best track athlete, Kairos McKann {Female Student No. 11} that she could run, especially when she was angry.
Kairos once had a fight with Lilithia, Lilithia couldn't remember what it was about but it had pushed Lilithia to run away from Kairos. She was crying and extremely angry.
Kairos was the best runner in the class, but even Kairos couldn't catch up with Lilithia.
Stopping to catch her breath, she felt a large light fall upon her for a second, then disappear. Shocked and frightened, Lilithia sped behind some trees, but then realizes foolishly what she had done. It was the light from the lighthouse, Lilithia was not far off.
She had only hoped Lea had read the note she had squeezed into Lea's hand before she left.
Back at the underground establishment, Lea Farber {Female Student No. 20} sat in her seat, the fatigue was getting to her. She didn't get much sleep the night before as she had gone out the night before to attend the Muse concert which she had wanted to go to for a long, long time.
Opening up the palm of her right hand, she realized Lilithia had handed her a note. But because of their odd handshake, the piece of paper was crumpled up.
Looking up at Gambino, she realized he was too preoccupied to notice what she was doing out of the entire class, so she uncrumpled the white torn piece of paper.
<center>Miki & I are going to be at the lighthouse. If you see Miki, give her a 'double side' wave. You know how to do it, I've taught you before. She'll know that you're with me.</center>
Lea put the note away after reading it. The lighthouse eh? It's a date.
It was only unfortunate that she was one of the last of the class to leave. Would it still be the same by then?
By then the students would probably be waiting for the likes such as her to come out, and shoot for just taking one step outside.
Xikrai Filinus {Male Student No. 4} a somewhat rebellious student as far as his looks went crept through the bushes carefully. He was one of Zuna's gang, but was funnily enough despite the look of his fire red messy locks, and his black leather clothes, was one of the nicest people of the gang.
He joked around quite a lot. Sometimes however, his jokes would be taken too seriously, and he'd get in trouble. Most of the time though, his gang got his jokes, but anyone else out of his gang never understood his jokes. His looks still ruled overrall.
A lot of the students from the other classes in the same year level would swoon over him whenever he'd walk by.
But this wasn't school, this was a game. The game. His looks weren't going to save him now, he was definitely sure of that.
Pointing his small semi automatic gun in front of him, he made sure that he didn't make any foolish decisions that would make him waste bullets, although he had already checked his day pack had enough bullets to last him for a week of the game.
Before Xikrai could a step further, he felt a loud "Whoosh!" then a "Crack!" followed by a stinging sensation of pain upon his back. Turning around he faced his opponent. It was Elisabeth Alyster {Female Student No. 1} holding a long black whip in her hand.
Reaching to touch his back with his left hand, Xikrai realized he was bleeding.
"Your good looks aren't going to save you now." Elisabeth stated in a cold almost monotone voice, cracking her whip once more hitting Xikrai in the face.
Xikrai moaned in pain now touching his face with his left hand which still had blood on it from touching his back. But then he realizes he had blood on his right hand too which he held close to his chest.
His face was now bleeding, and the blood was dripping off like tears. Elisabeth Alyster had scarred his face. His perfect face. Xikrai was now enraged.
"You ******** b***h!" he growled angrily.
He lifted his gun to shoot at Elisabeth with his right hand, while he covered his now scarred face with his left hand. He missed.
Elisabeth had quickly cracked her whip once more just after Xikrai had finished his sentence, the whip hitting at his right hand, the gun flying out of his hand.
Elisabeth then jumped on Xikrai before Xikrai could reach his gun. She may have been a girl, but she had an incredible strength. He had forgotten Elisabeth was an excellent gymnast.
Being in Zuna's gang, he had never attended a single session of gym class, and thus never knew how dangerous and capable Elisabeth was. She held Xikrai down and attempted to strangle him with her whip.
"Remember the school dance this year? You said you'd like to be ******** by my group? REMEMBER?" she hissed through her teeth.
With her free hand for a slight second, she quickly retrieved the gun and pointed it directly at Xikrai's forehead. She pulled the trigger.
"There. Now you're ********."
45 Students Remaining
<center>Lilithia also writes poetry as well! Here are some examples of her poetry.</center>
The Mirror of My Dreams - by Lilithia
<center>I wish I knew,
More than I do.
I wish time was right,
So I could see you.
There are so many things,
I could do...
So many things in this world,
I could do for you.
I could whisper sweet nothings,
In your ear.
I could serenade you lullabies,
& wipe away your tears.
We could sit together in the gardens,
Look deep to each other's eyes.
Stand still within the cities,
& watch time pass us by.
We could dance wildly,
Beneath the moonlight.
Sail across the stars...
Point out constellations like Orion,
& planets like Jupiter & Mars.
We could talk for hours,
Laugh together happily...
But I'm still stuck,
In yesterday's sleep.
We could hold each other close,
In our hearts,
For all eternity...
But I cannot stall forever,
This won't be.
Is this scaring you!?
Are my words scaring you!?
Or are you smiling to yourself,
Happily as you go...
Thinking you yourself,
"Whenever it will be,
Won't you please let me know!?"
Living in your eyes,
Are but just dreams.
I won't ever forget you...
You're the mirror of my dreams.</center>
More than I do.
I wish time was right,
So I could see you.
There are so many things,
I could do...
So many things in this world,
I could do for you.
I could whisper sweet nothings,
In your ear.
I could serenade you lullabies,
& wipe away your tears.
We could sit together in the gardens,
Look deep to each other's eyes.
Stand still within the cities,
& watch time pass us by.
We could dance wildly,
Beneath the moonlight.
Sail across the stars...
Point out constellations like Orion,
& planets like Jupiter & Mars.
We could talk for hours,
Laugh together happily...
But I'm still stuck,
In yesterday's sleep.
We could hold each other close,
In our hearts,
For all eternity...
But I cannot stall forever,
This won't be.
Is this scaring you!?
Are my words scaring you!?
Or are you smiling to yourself,
Happily as you go...
Thinking you yourself,
"Whenever it will be,
Won't you please let me know!?"
Living in your eyes,
Are but just dreams.
I won't ever forget you...
You're the mirror of my dreams.</center>
Impossible {To Be Somewhat Like You} - written by Lilithia
<center>We as humans, all have our flaws.
We all have our talents, and gifts.
Yet behind these eyes, where my tears lie,
I wish there was more to me.
I wish I could draw like you,
Do all the wonderful things that you can do.
Whilst all along I sit and wait,
For something beautiful, I too can create.
Alas, I cannot, for it is not meant to be.
Why can't I draw like you?
All the while, all my life,
I have been pushed down.
Knocked around, back and forth,
In the crowd, I am crushed,
I am alone, and it hurts.
Being mislead, misguided and abused,
So many things now, I wish back then I knew.
Told I have no hope in achieving my dreams,
Being guided and forced into other means.
Please tell me, what is wrong with me?
Why can I not paint like you?
Why can I not draw the way that you do?
Why can I not ever make,
Such a beauty in my mind,
Which will never escape?
Of course words can only go so far,
Until descriptions only leave a scar.
I feel it's not the same when I write,
Words are words, which I simply type.
Why can' I be gifted too?
In the end, I am just a small girl,
In this big, and taunting world,
Wishing for things to come forth free,
But knowing these will never be.
There is such thing as impossible.</center>
We all have our talents, and gifts.
Yet behind these eyes, where my tears lie,
I wish there was more to me.
I wish I could draw like you,
Do all the wonderful things that you can do.
Whilst all along I sit and wait,
For something beautiful, I too can create.
Alas, I cannot, for it is not meant to be.
Why can't I draw like you?
All the while, all my life,
I have been pushed down.
Knocked around, back and forth,
In the crowd, I am crushed,
I am alone, and it hurts.
Being mislead, misguided and abused,
So many things now, I wish back then I knew.
Told I have no hope in achieving my dreams,
Being guided and forced into other means.
Please tell me, what is wrong with me?
Why can I not paint like you?
Why can I not draw the way that you do?
Why can I not ever make,
Such a beauty in my mind,
Which will never escape?
Of course words can only go so far,
Until descriptions only leave a scar.
I feel it's not the same when I write,
Words are words, which I simply type.
Why can' I be gifted too?
In the end, I am just a small girl,
In this big, and taunting world,
Wishing for things to come forth free,
But knowing these will never be.
There is such thing as impossible.</center>
Childhood - written by Lilithia
<center>Ducking from my father's swings,
Crying aloud at his blows.
Crawling in my cupboard from my mum's yells,
To grow up to be a whore.
Stealing toys from the stores,
Things my parents never bought for me.
Suffering from depression,
Being sexually harassed, & felt,
With nobody believing me.
Souly fending for myself,
Shaking inside my aching heart.
One sibling disabled, the other overrated,
& myself being all alone.
Disorientated, & detached I am,
Never really calling this house my home.
Running away from meeting the pain,
Only to have come on "home" back again.
Inside dreaming of many things.
The stars, a book, & a stage to sing.
Wondering who'd come to see if I fell,
& how many would come to wish me well.
& every day beaming a charming smile,
With people wondering the life of this happy child.
Jealously flying at this little girl,
Who had suffered much worse - yet already in this world.
This was my childhood,
& all the while,
I never really got to be a child.</center>
Crying aloud at his blows.
Crawling in my cupboard from my mum's yells,
To grow up to be a whore.
Stealing toys from the stores,
Things my parents never bought for me.
Suffering from depression,
Being sexually harassed, & felt,
With nobody believing me.
Souly fending for myself,
Shaking inside my aching heart.
One sibling disabled, the other overrated,
& myself being all alone.
Disorientated, & detached I am,
Never really calling this house my home.
Running away from meeting the pain,
Only to have come on "home" back again.
Inside dreaming of many things.
The stars, a book, & a stage to sing.
Wondering who'd come to see if I fell,
& how many would come to wish me well.
& every day beaming a charming smile,
With people wondering the life of this happy child.
Jealously flying at this little girl,
Who had suffered much worse - yet already in this world.
This was my childhood,
& all the while,
I never really got to be a child.</center>
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Lilithia is a wonderful, creative writer! Her many stories, the one that I read; Soar. Very interesting, well-thought out original story that keeps me on the edge of my seat. The reason I enjoy Soar, is because its a great story that anyone can relate to. The Main character is so well developed that you can understand her...all the characters are so real that you feel for them. Once you start reading her stories or writings you can't stop...every paragraph keeps you tuned in, because you want to know what happens next! An excellent and wonderful writer!! heart
Hakura
Lilithia is a wonderful writer who obviously puts a lot of heart into her work. Her characters have very real personalities and feeling, and her plot lines are impressive in the amount of thought that goes into it. I'm a fan, and I know she has many others, as well as her own guild for the readers. I love her work, and know her to be a genuinely wonderful person who wants to please her loyal readers.
Zen_Gentleman_Lifeguard
Lilithia has a rather large following, and for good reason. The amount of detail she puts into her story writing, character descriptions and plot show great thought and innovation. Modern influences like "Battle Royale" and "Dashboard Confessional" give her an edge, as her work can show some darker twists, but don't be fooled. Lilithia's work is more romantic than cynical, and would be classified, but not limited too, as High School drama.
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Desert-Penguin
Lilithia is a passionate writer. She also holds a high degree of professionalism, which is rare amongst writers.
El_Taco
Lilithia is a fantastic writer. She has the ability to weave a story in such a way that the reader finds himself/herself immediately engulfed. Her talent shines through in every word. There's nothing else to say other than, damn, this girl can write.
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About Lilithia
<img src="http://www.moon-child.org/lilithia.jpg" width=53 align=left>Lilithia is an extremely outgoing, bubbly & passionate all round artist. She is a singer, a song-writer, a photographer, a webdesigner, a poet & of course a story writer. She is 20 years of age, half Malaysian-Chinese & Filipina, & is currently living in Melbourne, Australia.
Lilithia dreams of becoming a <b>singer/songwriter</b> someday, & to at least publish one fiction novel of her work. She <b>owns</b> the domains www.lilithia.net & www.moon-child.org - plus she also has a <b>fansite</b> for her singing & songwriting at http://cherish.truedestinies.com for those interested to hear.
Her favourite obsessions are Battle Royale, Dashboard Confessional, Zodiac P.I. & RahXephon.
Lilithia dreams of becoming a <b>singer/songwriter</b> someday, & to at least publish one fiction novel of her work. She <b>owns</b> the domains www.lilithia.net & www.moon-child.org - plus she also has a <b>fansite</b> for her singing & songwriting at http://cherish.truedestinies.com for those interested to hear.
Her favourite obsessions are Battle Royale, Dashboard Confessional, Zodiac P.I. & RahXephon.
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The Aftermath
It had been a bloody day on the battlefield. Sohaku stood amongst the bodies of the fallen samurai. Some were still clutching their swords as though they were still alive.
The foreigners had decimated the samurai ranks with volley after volley of musket fire. Sohaku spoke to himself. "This would never have happened 200 years ago." One of Sohaku's lieutenants who had survived the massacre appeared at his side. "My lord, we have lost more than two thirds of our forces. The other third are wounded or badly injured." Sohaku stood silently as if he were blocking out all things around him. He could not live with this defeat, this dishonor. He took the hilt of his wakizashi, unsheathed it, and plunged it into his gut, thrusting upwards. His body remained in a knelt position. His vassal looked on in disbelief. The lord had died, in front of his own eyes. Then suddenly a musket ball tore through his chest.
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A British infantryman stood over the man clutching his chest in agony. He thought it best to see him in his present state than it was before shooting him. The samurai carried with him a prize the man could have as a trophy or even an ornament, just to say he was there when the power of the oldest warrior class in the world had fallen. The Englishmen took the longer of the samurai's two swords and put it in his own belt. It was a pity really. To see such brave men, that he considered his equal, face down in the mud.
Dark clouds loomed overhead. The man heard thunder. Suddenly the sky erupted with rain.
The infantryman looked at the ancient warrior once again. He was the last of his kind to march into battle. A sense of admiration surrounded the soldier. "Perhaps I will be the last to see the valor of men,� the man mumbled.
He proceeded back to the main force. " But on the other hand, maybe not" a soft smile became the man's face. He walked off to meet his own comrades. He had to tell them not only of his prize, but the sense of admiration he now felt for these Japanese warriors.
The foreigners had decimated the samurai ranks with volley after volley of musket fire. Sohaku spoke to himself. "This would never have happened 200 years ago." One of Sohaku's lieutenants who had survived the massacre appeared at his side. "My lord, we have lost more than two thirds of our forces. The other third are wounded or badly injured." Sohaku stood silently as if he were blocking out all things around him. He could not live with this defeat, this dishonor. He took the hilt of his wakizashi, unsheathed it, and plunged it into his gut, thrusting upwards. His body remained in a knelt position. His vassal looked on in disbelief. The lord had died, in front of his own eyes. Then suddenly a musket ball tore through his chest.
<center>********** </center>
A British infantryman stood over the man clutching his chest in agony. He thought it best to see him in his present state than it was before shooting him. The samurai carried with him a prize the man could have as a trophy or even an ornament, just to say he was there when the power of the oldest warrior class in the world had fallen. The Englishmen took the longer of the samurai's two swords and put it in his own belt. It was a pity really. To see such brave men, that he considered his equal, face down in the mud.
Dark clouds loomed overhead. The man heard thunder. Suddenly the sky erupted with rain.
The infantryman looked at the ancient warrior once again. He was the last of his kind to march into battle. A sense of admiration surrounded the soldier. "Perhaps I will be the last to see the valor of men,� the man mumbled.
He proceeded back to the main force. " But on the other hand, maybe not" a soft smile became the man's face. He walked off to meet his own comrades. He had to tell them not only of his prize, but the sense of admiration he now felt for these Japanese warriors.
Spontaneous Story 1
The fluorescent lights hummed to life. At last he was alone. The darkness had surrounded him for too long. The nauseating darkness. The man looked around the room. He saw only his deepest fear, that of which was witnessing murder. The unblinking eyes of a young women stared back at him. The man fell to his knees. He had arrived too late. Blood dripped out of the young woman's gaping neck. Her throat had been slit and a pool of blood surrounded her being. The man was used to this torment. Everyone he had ever cared for had met his or her ends in precisely the same way.
He heard footsteps in the distance. Perhaps the culprit was still lurking in the shadows, this time to claim his life for good.
The man reached into his jacket and produced a gleaming 9mm Beretta pistol. He was not going to dispose of him without a fight.
Sweat dripped from his brow, this had only been the second time the killer had attempted to take him on. He had barely gotten away from him that time. It seemed like yesterday. He touched the scar on his hand; it was numb as it had always been.
He clenched his fist a few times. He would get the killer back for what he had done to him and his loved ones.
His colleague appeared at the doorway. The man holstered his gun and stood up. "Hey Jake" he said. "Oh there you are, looks like he ******** you over again hey Matthew."
He heard footsteps in the distance. Perhaps the culprit was still lurking in the shadows, this time to claim his life for good.
The man reached into his jacket and produced a gleaming 9mm Beretta pistol. He was not going to dispose of him without a fight.
Sweat dripped from his brow, this had only been the second time the killer had attempted to take him on. He had barely gotten away from him that time. It seemed like yesterday. He touched the scar on his hand; it was numb as it had always been.
He clenched his fist a few times. He would get the killer back for what he had done to him and his loved ones.
His colleague appeared at the doorway. The man holstered his gun and stood up. "Hey Jake" he said. "Oh there you are, looks like he ******** you over again hey Matthew."
Spontaneous Story Number 2
The moon shone on the distant plane. It highlighted the features perched atop it. A singular figure walked directly under the moon, it cast a sinister shadow upon him. The man grinned from ear to ear, cigarette smoldering away at the left corner of his mouth. A smooth zephyr was in the air. The man dropped spat out the cigarette and smothered it with his foot. A strange aura emanated from him, it was like that of a specter.
A young soldier looked on at the proceedings in front of him. What was he grinning about? There was no fun to be had out in the wasteland. He felt a niggling in his throat. He coughed and saw blood drop to the ground. The soldier collapsed, now clutching his throat gasping for air. He fell to his side in a heap, he bled profusely from the mouth, an ocean of blood soaked his uniform. His blank eyes still fixed on the position where the dark cloaked man stood.
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The dark man remained grinning, his night was almost complete. The powers he possessed were by no means normal. Ever since he was a child he had exposed these odd techniques. He had been able to kill people just by thinking about it. It was because of this that he had been an orphan from age 4. He unwittingly killed his natural parents and family. Just a burst of rage.
At first his ability was limited to one person at a time...but as time gradually passed by he found himself able of much more. The army had at one point recruited him into their ranks; they wished to harness his power. That was not a possibility. He had killed his superior officer in a fit of rage. He had been court marshaled and sent to the gas chamber. He had killed his captors with relative ease and had escaped.
They had come after him with an army of hundreds. He had slaughtered them all in a blink of an eye. That was a day of reckoning. He had no opponent worthy of his premise. That was 2 days ago. The media had been all over him like a rash. He had decided against destroying them, it would only cause problems for his cause.
There was also an earlier battle he had fought after his desertion. In this case he was more the middleman. One side had discovered his desertion and had wanted to incorporate him into their own force. On the other side were his former comradary. They wanted him back.
The battle was unlike one any had seen since the dawn of the Chinese Empire. One thousand combatants for each. In two minutes all that could be seen was bodies and blood. Gallons of blood. Had a gunshot been heard? Was there a toxic gas present? The media had speculated so much and had not come any nearer to the truth until recently.
No one in the world's history would have guessed that one man would have destroyed over two thousand men in such a short time. No such feat had ever been achieved.
The specter of a man progressed through the wasteland. He had another visitor to meet. The thought of it made him cackle with delight. At last he would reacquaint himself with an old friend.
A young soldier looked on at the proceedings in front of him. What was he grinning about? There was no fun to be had out in the wasteland. He felt a niggling in his throat. He coughed and saw blood drop to the ground. The soldier collapsed, now clutching his throat gasping for air. He fell to his side in a heap, he bled profusely from the mouth, an ocean of blood soaked his uniform. His blank eyes still fixed on the position where the dark cloaked man stood.
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The dark man remained grinning, his night was almost complete. The powers he possessed were by no means normal. Ever since he was a child he had exposed these odd techniques. He had been able to kill people just by thinking about it. It was because of this that he had been an orphan from age 4. He unwittingly killed his natural parents and family. Just a burst of rage.
At first his ability was limited to one person at a time...but as time gradually passed by he found himself able of much more. The army had at one point recruited him into their ranks; they wished to harness his power. That was not a possibility. He had killed his superior officer in a fit of rage. He had been court marshaled and sent to the gas chamber. He had killed his captors with relative ease and had escaped.
They had come after him with an army of hundreds. He had slaughtered them all in a blink of an eye. That was a day of reckoning. He had no opponent worthy of his premise. That was 2 days ago. The media had been all over him like a rash. He had decided against destroying them, it would only cause problems for his cause.
There was also an earlier battle he had fought after his desertion. In this case he was more the middleman. One side had discovered his desertion and had wanted to incorporate him into their own force. On the other side were his former comradary. They wanted him back.
The battle was unlike one any had seen since the dawn of the Chinese Empire. One thousand combatants for each. In two minutes all that could be seen was bodies and blood. Gallons of blood. Had a gunshot been heard? Was there a toxic gas present? The media had speculated so much and had not come any nearer to the truth until recently.
No one in the world's history would have guessed that one man would have destroyed over two thousand men in such a short time. No such feat had ever been achieved.
The specter of a man progressed through the wasteland. He had another visitor to meet. The thought of it made him cackle with delight. At last he would reacquaint himself with an old friend.

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DNA_Guru is a 17 year old High School Student located in Australia. He enjoys his writing thouroughly and wishes to accomplish more than he already has. DNA is a bright person but it's best to stay on his good side. He doesn't like naggers.
He has an extreme fascination with Japanese culture, hence he is well hearsed in alot of the Japanese culture. He enjoys anime and loves Cowboy Bebop to itty bits.
"May all your pancakes be full of starchy goodness <3."
He has an extreme fascination with Japanese culture, hence he is well hearsed in alot of the Japanese culture. He enjoys anime and loves Cowboy Bebop to itty bits.
"May all your pancakes be full of starchy goodness <3."
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