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 Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 11:18 pm
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 11:34 pm
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2014 11:59 pm
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 12:07 am
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Nebbia d Argento Alternate Takeshi: HEY YOU LEAVE POOR EVA ALONE! -Takeshi missile kick!- Takeshi don't! Hey...Eva...Eve...Eva...Eve...just got that. '-' Say Nebbia. I'm on the verge of finishing one of my characters. Does Eva still need a son? I know you might have wanted to make one for her but I was inspired. emotion_kirakira I rather not do the brother thing but just have him as a child of Eva's. whee If your okay with that. For goodness sakes if you don't like it tell me no. I'll understand. 4laugh Of course just because I made a son for her doesn't mean you can't make one. Plus Melani will have a cute little Nii-san. emotion_kirakira |
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 12:08 am
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Crasher Wave Nebbia d Argento Alternate Takeshi: HEY YOU LEAVE POOR EVA ALONE! -Takeshi missile kick!- Takeshi don't! Hey...Eva...Eve...Eva...Eve...just got that. '-' Say Nebbia. I'm on the verge of finishing one of my characters. Does Eva still need a son? I know you might have wanted to make one for her but I was inspired. emotion_kirakira I rather not do the brother thing but just have him as a child of Eva's. whee If your okay with that. For goodness sakes if you don't like it tell me no. I'll understand. 4laugh Of course just because I made a son for her doesn't mean you can't make one. Plus Melani will have a cute little Nii-san. emotion_kirakira
Well that would depend
what do you have in mind? o . o
-not noticins his skull was exposed due to the kick- |
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 12:11 am
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Nebbia d Argento One second my friend. -Click- Posted. 4laugh Will this suffice Nebbia-sama? I hope it's okay. I made him have madness since I know Eva corrupts her children. Alternate Takeshi: -Sits back down- There you go Eva. ^^ Gee what happened to your head by the way? That looks like...TAKESHI! Did you hit trainer-sama!? Alternate Takeshi: Nope. Okay then. |
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 12:58 am
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 12:58 am
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sorry I am a slow reader.
I get the basic Idea.
But if I bluntly read it all at once it sounds like an OP character.
I mean, I know he's not OP god moding like.
We just need to explain certain cases a little more.
It can be viable for him to be Eva's son.
Emphathy needs a more detailed explanation of how it works
because in plain sight is seems like
"I ran read your every move, therefore I can control your emotions and control you"
This is a delicate manner, please look on it and explain it with a little more detail.
I don't know, something like he can instead read the auras of the emotions. Thus gaining an idea of where they are most likely going to attack depending on their feelings. (A blinded person by rage tends to be all out thus depending on their range, he can evaluate the safest place to position himself in.)
The Inner heard indeed sounds tricky
But try to make it as less tedious to approve as you can.
I don't know State the basis.
Like
"Despite all hearts being different, there would always be 3 basic steps"
Sword (A passionate heart. Strong emotions, being good or bad. Makes sword like weapons in manifestaiton)
Shield (A brave heart, Strong will, the valor/courage to endure. A protective shield /Aura shield)
Wand (A dreaming heart, Strong imagination. Makes awesome magic powers which vary depending on the person that made the special move with Donovan)
[BTW this is just a sugestion, not like I'm telling you what to do. It's merely my opinion]
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Now, back with Eva, what would their story be?
Right now Eva is set to help on some pending quests for plot developing.
So I need to know what were you planing by being her child so I can get a timing and know how to proceed without altering the other plots at hand. |
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 1:00 am
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Crasher Wave Nebbia d Argento Right I forgot to explain. xD I was thinking Donovan is a corrupted version of a demon Eva killed. And that she may study him however she pleases. Since he wouldn't be able to sense her emotions I figured it would be that simple. c: Seriously though feel free to say no. I don't want you to say yes from kindness. ^^"
ohhh, yeah that works too. razz |
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 1:24 am
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 1:37 am
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 8:46 am
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 9:02 am
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Crasher Wave Nebbia d Argento Eep! Your right! I must finish making edits for my character right away! redface You sir should be a judge. 3nodding Very helpful advice trainer sama! -Claps- And plot wise I didn't want to start off too big so study is where I had hoped to start out. By the way you were very right on empathy. emotion_kirakira Arigato! ^^ -Runs off to edit happily-
no problem XD |
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 10:56 am
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Posted: Sun May 11, 2014 1:18 pm
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