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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:56 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:57 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:58 pm
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 1:59 pm
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Darkness Desire
May your darkness consume your mind, may life vanish to nothing. You were there, in the corner, all alone, wanting someone to know you, but knew they never could. You are dead, you are nothing, and you are the one they want. Take these shackles to my wrists, these whips to my temples. Find me, save me, as you would your loved one. If not, the dead shall take you to their hide away, in the darkness of your soul. The life you once had shall disappear to your memory, as your love disappears to her last breath. Obsession shall take over you, take you, and kill you more in its own way, till only your essence is left. Resist and the process will be painful. Her last words echo in your head, those three words that killed you, and yet saved you at the same time. Her life, taken by the knife she held in her hand, took her to her fate. She wanted this, she wanted you to live, and yet you didn't survive.
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Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 8:42 pm
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(Haha, quite a collection we have here, it is like a plethora of golden coins, I must of found mario's 20 years of collectiong coins! Man i love mario, but even then it is a pale version placed against your vibrant poems. I have to say defeat stood out the most to me. All of the others had their morals there little sadden defeat in some sense or another, all had their concepts nicely done, and then there was defeat. I am not sure why I was enraptured by it so much, but when I see the ending of the stanza giving it that little aura of awe, it really did make me wonder about it all, what does human existance mean? You should defeat in a great way! Good job, good job.)
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:55 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:27 pm
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(<-- note I am actually using brackets this time, and changed the other one to suit this way too haha, I forgot that you said you would like them in these things, so here it is! Anyways, Listen to the Motions, very nice, kind of like opening up a cracker jack's box and finding out there's a bomb in it. Not sure if I'd want that maiden calling for me, but I suppose even if one ran they would not get far from her. So I'd just have to embrace her and see where I'd be taken...yes to my death of course haha, but hey if she's playing hard to get, then I'd just have to be willing to overcome more challenge, and what is the mortal life but a challenge? So come at me maiden, I shall embrace ye with open arms.......... Great poem lol.)
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Posted: Fri Nov 30, 2007 1:10 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 8:12 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:47 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 1:11 pm
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