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[Nathan_Salem]

Shiro gets off the school bus and waves to Alayna. He comments on getting off the bus a few stops early, saying that he feels like walking home for a while. He heads home, pondering the events of the day, when he hears a woman scream in the distance. He stops and listens, and he hears another scream. Much louder than before. He starts jogging slowly in the direction the woman was in. He looks down an ally and almost passes by when he notices a group at the very end. Three men surrounding a girl. He walks closer trying to get a better look and notices Luna backing up against the wall. Shiro surprised to see her outside of school, freezes. But one of the guys notices him and tells him to screw off.
Shiro looks back at the street then looks at Luna who had never really looked at him before. She looked beyond scared. Shiro then stands tall and tells them off. They start laughing and surround him instead. Luna back up further into the ally as they start making fun of Shiro.  

[Nathan_Salem]

This part has not changed but the placement is different.---

Erin, a High Captain and rookie squad leader, has been given her first assignment to travel to earth. One of the spirits has ripped a hole onto the planet and several spirits are now reeking havoc. She as well as a few others have been sent to stop them, or capture the humans they dwell within. But she's worried. two things have already gone wrong. Salem, a boy older than her physically, but not mentally, has gone to earth without permission, and because she outranks him, its her job to see that he come back without being marked a traitor. She also has started to doubt her own abilities, which is why she's going to talk to the leader of her land- Valeon.
She parts ways with Darren, her boy friend, and heads up Emerald mountain, the only mountain in Ragnavol- the land of spirits- Valeon is often found up there when he isnt giving orders around the city, Erin was sure he would be able to give her the advice she needed. So she heads up, and her spirit Amelia follows along faithfully- as she has for almost 200 years. They eventually reach the top of the mountain and Erin leaves her spirit to speak with Valeon. Acknowledging her she sit and they discus her problems.
Valeon says that Salem may be difficult to find and capturing Immortals, as people with more than one spirit are called, should be a simple venture as well. in fact she may find it difficult not to make them pass out if she approached them with a full spiritual guise. (a form of presence used to show power level.) She understands and tells him that she is still worried, because very few people have been to earth and come back un harmed, even the generals get hurt going there. Valeon nods and says there is a reason for that, and she will not have to deal with it yet. She is confused but leaves feeling better. Erin meets Amilia again, and together they disappear into a burst of flame. Ready to face Earth and whatever it may hold  

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Shiro is thrown to the ground as the men laugh at him. The biggest of the three picks him up and pins him to the ally wall. He laughs and tells the other two to get the girl so they can leave, this upsets shiro and he does everything he can to make the man let go. a swift kick in the nuts only upsets he and the man sends shiro to the enterance of the ally with a rather hard punch. Shiro lays on the grown and only opens his eyes when he hears Luna scream. He then slowly gets, but is barely able to move, he grips at the grown and the men stop. No one moves, and they all know it. One of them drops the girl and shouts that he's stuck. The other two agree and they all start to panic. blaming cops or the girl. But shiro knows its him. Feeling something powerful he rolls with it and grips at the ground harder drawing blood. The men and drawn to the ground and scream out in pain. Shiro uses this opportunity to get Luna. They leave the ally only to see Salem standing in front of them. Luna asks Shiro why he's stopped and Shiro tries to respond but before he can talk Salem jumps forward and pushes him back, much harder than he could have imagined. He hits the ground and watches as he picks up Luna and disappears. Shiro gets up and looks around, he tries to block the screams from the men still trapped behind him. Suddenly he hears someone call down from the building in front of him. He looks up to see Salem smiling. Salem tells him to meet him at the school gym first thing in the morning, Luna is safe, but if he doesnt do exactly as he says, someone may get hurt. Salem then disappears again. Shiro is confused, but doesnt stay around there as the men are slowly finding their strength. He starts running home.