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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 6:25 pm

I guess i'll post some poems if nothing else... ummm... just one thing

NO TEASING NO BAD MOUTHING AND NO LYING!!!

if you think it sucks ok that's fine it's ur oppinion just be nice about it or say nothing at all!!!! crying i don't wanna post something awful then have ppl say it's good ok?

Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 6:28 pm

Of Blood and Tears

Watergirl, Watergirl, why do you mourn?

I cry for the health, the happiness of which I'm born.

Lightning girl, Lightning girl, it's diamond on which you bleed.

I bleed for the death, and suffering of which I breed.

Half-breed, Half-breed, why won't you die?

I live for the past, the dead, to which I'm tied.

Cursed girl,Cursed girl, it's pain that we give you.

You're why I remember, a pain that is taboo.

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Posted: Tue Oct 16, 2007 6:29 pm

What do you think of me sister???

Why do you look at me that way??
Like I murdered some one dear.
What have I done?
For you, my sister,
To make you look at me with such distaste.

Why do you look at me that way??
And hug and smile at everyone else?
Am I embarrassing you?
Even tho i don't talk to you in public,
because you no longer answer me any way.

Why do you look at me that way??
Like I'm lower than you.
Like I did some thing deplorable.
Do you hate me?

Posted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 6:29 pm

I really liked the "Of Blood and Tears" one, just the last line sounds a little funny.
"Cursed girl,Cursed girl, it's pain that we give you.

You're why I remember, a pain that's taboo. "

If you changed "that's" to "that is" I think it would come off the tough easier like the rest of the poem.
Good job! scream

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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 5:35 pm

These are good. God, it's too bad, I didn't get around to viewing this forum until now.

I cannot help but feel as though I've chased all of our regular's off with my management skills.

Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 9:58 am

Shiomizu

I really liked the "Of Blood and Tears" one, just the last line sounds a little funny.
"Cursed girl,Cursed girl, it's pain that we give you.

You're why I remember, a pain that's taboo. "

If you changed "that's" to "that is" I think it would come off the tough easier like the rest of the poem.
Good job! scream

kk i like that idea... i think i'll take ur adivce ^.^

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Posted: Sat May 03, 2008 10:01 am

The Unknown Shadow

These are good. God, it's too bad, I didn't get around to viewing this forum until now.

I cannot help but feel as though I've chased all of our regular's off with my management skills.

^_^ aww don't worry... i'm a mod in several other guilds and i do the same thing... =.= except... well... no one's in them anyway... it's sad that i'm on more than the Guild Leader in most of my guilds... geeze... =.= i could single handedly take over some of the guilds i'm in... -.-

Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 9:08 pm

Yeah. It happens sometimes.

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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:49 pm

I noticed I hadn't been posting in her (obviously) and so i picked up one of my old poems. I wrote it in a creative writing class where the assignment was to write a song. So I wrote one to the tune of "Love Is War" A song someone made with the Vocaloid progam. I really like that song. Anyway. Here's my poem:

Demon God

There is a demon at my back,
A cruel ta-un-ting beast that’s looming~

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH——-

Drip-ping~viscous weight-y things
Upon my fragil shoulders.
Oh dear god, are you not here?
It can’t be. You don’t exist. I don’t believe you!
AHH, let me go, don’t you hold this hand

I’ll leave you now, so earthly hands can lay claim to me.
Something so firm, for this damned soul of mine,
I need to hold onto you forever more.
Something so sound… So real and.

So enjoyable that I can never forget you.
So give me life and let me live in peace with my lonesome.
So real and so true “Goodbye my DEMON me.”
I’ll fight for something true, a thing for me to keep from you.

Beneath the sea, I found a drowning man who waited quietly,
Just to die a LONELY death.
So quiet…
That no one could hear his poor lamenting pain.
AHH, it seems he’s given up, his demon, winning!
No-o! Don’t go away from me!
I’ll take you too,
To my own paradise where you and I can go and sleep in peace.
Forever quietly, where no one else can bother us.

I just can’t LOVE you!

So my poor de-mon me, my HEART aches for you
Just leave me here alone, with my newfound peace of mind.
Should I help you out the door? Make the process neat and clean.
Cause my special golden love is waiting at my door!

How I love him more than me!
So say “Goodbye and no longer linger over me!
Leave me with my newfound peace,
Oh dear God, I never did BELIEVE in anyone but me.

Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 7:03 pm

O.S.L. (One-Sided Love)

Cruel everlasting fool, Free me...
from this idiocy you call LOVE.
How sad. How ONE SIDED.

Get out! Get out now!
Let me have some peace and quiet.
This stress you cause me has no point,
A stupid piece of -- I don't care about it.
How sad. So ONE SIDED!

Get out! Get out NOW!
Should I help you off that ledge?
Down into that pathetic void of ignorant self pity?
How sad. Freakin' ONE SIDED--

Get lost! Get out now!
Where I'm free of your worthless oblivion.
I'm confused? You're not possibly--
How sad. So darn pathetic.

Get out! Get lost now!
Why don't you hate me yet?
How sad. So darn pathetic. So freakin' one sided...
Your damn ONE SIDED LOVE. I'm sorry for you.

Get out. Get away from me.
I stopped LOVING you years ago.
You're dead to me now.
How sad. So damn twisted.

Get away. Keep that twisted ONE SIDED LOVE.
On second thought. Keep this death trap too.
This hole we called a freaking home.
How sad. Hazardously unsafe.

Get out. How sad.
So darn pathetic, so damn twisted, so ONE SIDED.
This broken, hellish LOVE of yours.

I wrote this also as a creative writing project like the other one above. It's not written to a song, but I was pretty pissed at the time. I'm not sure if it was at my ex-boyfriend or my dad. But I find references to both in my writing this. I wonder. I'm not as happy with this one. It's really rough in comparison to Demon God but I guess it gets a point across. There was a lot more profanity when i first wrote it than now. Since then I've taken them out. Once before I turned it in for class, and again before I showed my parents. There still seems to be some strong language though if you look at it through a conservative eye. I wouldn't read this kind of thing at an elementary or middle school.

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Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2010 5:18 pm

Kiss the Rock You're Under

Kiss the Rock you're under,
There's no one here to see.
You live here,
Breath here,
Oblivious to those sandstorms,
Destruction at their core.
You paint your rock,
With rainbows, flowers, and smiles.
Happy things.
All so you can't see those sandstorms passing by.
So Be grateful.
And kiss the rock you're under.

Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 2:23 pm

Liar's Den

Welcome to the holy ground, it's not what you're thinking.
This, is of a different nature than what you're believing.
This is not a place that can be ruled by democracy.
Held tight in the clutches of tyrannic hypocrisy,
This place is a lie, where demons run free.

Left lonely; reality, honesty, and friendship are turned to lies.
This silent but suffocating fantasy world wraps around you,
And you're hooked. The feeling of belonging grabs hold.
Have you noticed? I'm part of the community. Supposedly.
I'm the shoulder that you lean on, the one who really cares.

But I'm the one in pain. Alone in this small society,
If only you all knew, if only you could understand...
The thing that holds me back, the monster that's caged my heart,
The one true anxiety, that I face alone.
Can no one understand? I'm tired of crying in silence.

Have I been too blunt? At this point should I care?
I'm tired of screaming quietly, watching you standing there.
You all seem to just tolerate me. When I seek to understand.
Can I gain acceptance? And leave this beguiled land.
I'm tired of crying alone. I've no longer got the patience.

I want to howl, to holler, to scream.
I want my lament to be heard, listened to, and understood.
I want to be accepted truthfully, not weakly tolerated minute by minute.
I want it to be okay for my voice to be heard,
So maybe I won't feel so tired, and finally, I can rest.

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