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❀ Personality ❀

Compassionate | Lestari is very passionate, it isn't so much to ask someone how their day is going or holding a door open for them a few more moments, Lestari is all about the personal reward a smile could give her. She's always there when a friend is in need, need a bit of cash or maybe some medicine for your sick mother? She'll go out of her way to get whatever it is you need, rain or shine. Don't get Lestari started on how she feels about certain things because the conversation could go on for days. Whenever there is a particular cause or thought that is dear to her heart, you can bet that she will shout to the stars how great it is.

Venomous | When her patience is tried or someone is really irritating her to the point where she just can't be civilized anymore, she usually turns to being a very cold hearted woman. She will call people names and make them feel worthless. While she may not be the violent type, she will make sure the person causing her such irritation will suffer. If she doesn't deal with the root of the problem right away, then she holds a grudge and swears she'll make them pay.

Curious | Lestari has been cooped, controlled, and watched her whole life, so there’s a ton of things that she just doesn't know yet...but she's dying to learn it all! If there's something that perks her interest, nothing will stop the flow of questions Lestari will have. She will also go beyond extremes to get answers, she likes to be knowledgeable even if it may get her in trouble sometimes. Her curiosity has no end to it, and she may become stubborn if she isn't satisfied; it takes a lot of information for her to be satisfied and content with whatever thing she's curious about.

Blunt | Lestari is not the one to sugar-coat the news. She isn't the one to tell someone they look great in a dress, when in reality it makes them look like they've gained ten pounds. She certainly isn't the one who is afraid to tell someone their stupid, or to let someone know the circumstances of their situation and how screwed they might end up being. She has no problem cracking jokes, even those in bad taste, in front of anyone. She doesn't care what people think of her, she only cares that they respect her enough to listen to her and do what she says when she needs something done. Nobody who knows her well enough would be surprised if someone they all cared about died a horrible death, and she said something along the lines of "He wasn't much help anyways."

Possessive | Lestari has the capability of being overly protective, and she won’t back down from a fight when it involves her friends, or sharing an item with someone. The Lunarian believes that if she herself is loyal to her peers, then her peers should be loyal to her. Lestari takes backstabbing or turning on your friends as one of the greatest offenses one could ever do, and she will go to great lengths to cause harm to someone who has backstabbed her. Sharing does not exist in this Lunarians world, she will become overly suspicious if someone gives her something for free, and if someone did ask for this thing back. Les isn't giving it back, it is now officially hers.


❀ Hobbies ❀

Dancing | Forced upon her every single day of her childhood, Les could only grow fond of her dancing over the years. It is also the only hobby that pleases and keeps her mother quiet; in Sinta's eyes she needs to be more feminine. Dancing has allowed Lestari to be able to move with gracefulness which has helped her fighting style, it is another quiet activity that she believes she can meditate upon.

Confectionery | Les thinks that to be able to control her sweet tooth, she must indulge it. After years of making confections, the Lunarian has turned it into a hobby she adores. Sure controlling her sweet tooth is one thing, but eating excess amounts of candy is never good, and so she has also taken up the habit of selling her candy or giving it away. Lestari also works at the candy store called Khandi.


❀ Quirks ❀

Quoting | Constantly quotes people and famous people in the middle of conversations. She will use her fingers to make the " " sign when quoting anything. She also likes to quote people when they're annoying her.

Sweet Tooth | Lestari has a sweet tooth which she tries to control, but really can't. Anything sweet usually catches her attention, and she loses any interest in whatever she was previously doing.

Wifehood | Lestari hates doing chores, hates little kids, and hates cooking things that can't be turned into candy or something sugary. She dislikes that her mother is trying to turn her into a puppet wife, even though she knows everything that a wife should do by heart.

T.o.C :
Intro | General Profile | Personality | History | Family | Q&A | Reserved

Sinta Wulan | Sinta tries to rule every single event in Lestari's life with an iron fist because of her noble background, which she hopes to pass onto her daughter.
She is the one who pushed Lestari to turn to dancing, something the Lunarian both hates and loves her for.
Lestari just wished the woman would give her more freedom on her life, she has no desire to follow in her mothers footsteps.

Bambang Pramoedya | The father of the house, Sanouk is happy with whatever path his daughter choses, though he’s secreatly making sure Lestari keeps up with her acupuncture behind his wife’s back.
If it wasn't for him, Lestari would never found her ability with acupuncture. She loves her father to death, and couldn't thank him more about helping her become a warrior.

Guntur Pramoedya | Lestari loves her older brother to death, because they both have followed into their fathers footsteps in acupuncture.
She gets along extremely well with him, more so then her other brothers. Guntar is also married and still living in their home, Lestari gets along quite well with his wife.

Citra Eka | Guntar's wife, and currently pregnant with their first child. Lestari gets along with the woman, she's been trying to make Lestari more optimistic.
Citra is like the older sister she never had.

Susilo Pramoedya | He taught Lestari how to defend herself, and still does even to this day.
Lestari like this brother too, though not as much as Guntar, they often fight for the silliest reasons.

Budi Pramoedya | The last brother and probably the only one Lestari doesn’t like. Budi follows his mother around as if he were her shadow, he is the family snitch.
Budi went to the academy to become a priest, Lestari thinks it’s to keep an eye on her and report to their mother.
The Lunarian couldn't hate him more for being so close to her mother and yet having so much more freedom.

T.o.C :
Intro | General Profile | Personality | History | Family | Q&A | Reserved

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Yay! (: I popped your crit cherry! Muhaha!

First off welcome to the shop! ^-^ I have not seen you around anyways and since I pretty much live here you would have to be a ninja for me not to notice you! <333

General Profile - Its all good, reads very well and is easy on the eyes, it tells you what you need to know and leaves a lot of freedom for the artist which is always a good thing.

Personality - Her personality flows very well indeed <333 all her traits complement each other nicely and it tells you a lot about her character, I like the fact its so easy to read *U* it is what you need to know with out no off putting fancy bits. To the point and a damn good job doing so if I say myself.

The only thing I can comment on she seems too neatly packaged XD she is very predictable when you read it through which is not a bad thing however I would like to see some aspect of her personality you would not expect with out it sticking out like a sore thumb at the same time. Its just a personal preference of mine. ~ However what you have is really good.

Hobbies, family and history all look good too ~ :3 they suit her personality and say a lot about her.

All in all I love Lestari's character and I wish you the best of luck getting her! 8D very well written!

Alright, my turn! To start out, I'm not the best at giving crits, so I hope this helps you.

First off, I love how you start each post with a quote about fighting, it gives me a good look at who Les really is.

Mostly, she's very well put together, but I got confused a little early on and expected more sisters by the quote

"Not wanting to be a stay at home mother like all the females of her family, Lestari takes pride in following the path of a warrior."

Then, why is cooking a hobby for her? I got the impression it was something she had to learn from visiting her mother's side of the family. That doesn't come across as a hobby to me.

Otherwise, she sounds like a great Lunarian and I hope you can get her! Good luck!

I hope that helped!

Bee approves!

I really like.. her. xD

Her name, her look, her build, her personality, her hobbies. all off it.

Now onto more serious stuff.

There is a slight mistake in her her weapon blurb. I'm sure you'll catch it if you look at it again. A missing word, or odd turn of phrase. I'm not sure which.

I ADORE that her skin tone is yellowish with the black hair with pale flowers in it. If you hadn't figured in scale color yet, perhaps monochromatic, white, gray, and black? Just tossing out an idea.

For whatever reason I picture her as more slim then she is, but that's probably just me. I myself have wide hips, and if I didn't have a larger bust to even it out, I'd look like a pear, and so I would imagine, Lestari?

I really like what you have so far for personality. It's very unique from anything I've seen so far, and i think will make her stand out and allow for great character development and growth as well as pissing off the legion, which will be handy when trying to meet the fighter battle requirements. I look forward to seeing how she interacts with others.

On the same note, if you felt so inclined, adding some quirks or habits would make her seem more real and personable, and also more well rounded. They also add a little spice to rp.

I like her hobbies. They're very unique for the most part. I don't think I've seen acupuncture used before, and it's very neat that you've adapted that into her weapon. (Needles as weapons = win). Cooking seems to be a popular hobby. I wouldn't say remove it, cause it fits her character very well, but perhaps expand on it. Is there any thing in particular she enjoys cooking above other things? Perhaps making her own recipes, or making desserts.

The history is well written. Short and sweet but seems to hit all the key points from what I can see.

Lastly, I love that her heritage is Javanese. <3