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❉Full Name: Skye Oleander Grevellia

❉Allias: "The Black Demon", "Devils Interrogator", "The Wall of the Soul Society" , "The Iron Fist",

❉Gender: Male

❉Age: Unknown but is redeemd as one of the oldest Captains in the Seireitei.

❉Birthplace: Unknown

❉Orientation: Homosexual

❉Personality: He is a type of person you can not really describe. He can be very peaceful or be very cruel and sadistic. He does not switch moods quickly so he is not bi-polar but the way he feels about certain things are all over the scatter plot. It is very rare to predict what he might do. However when it comes to line of respect, loyalty, honor, and stuff that retakes around his rank. He is very strict and only allows one way to rule. His way. Thus earning him the nick name "The Wall of the Seireitei", "The Iron Fist", and "Ice King"

❉Picture:

❉Side Occupation: Skye pretty much has no other job than the one he is entitled with. She is over obsessed with her job

❉Quote:
"As I pass through the lengthy struggle of life in this fleeting world, I cannot help but long for the midnight moon I once saw."

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❉Eyes: Lime Green

❉Hair Length: His hair is quite long. It reaches all the way down to the middle of his back and its color is dark as the raven itself.

❉Hair Color: Black

❉Height: 5'6

❉Weight: 125 lbs

❉Distinct Marking(s): His outfit is not like the average shinigami, see picture

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❉Zanpakutou Appearance: His Zanpakto is completely black and average length. It is usually tied to her left hip because he is right handed. However, he has been trained very well and has performed battles with his left and right handed both.

❉Zanpakutou Information:
Name: Ugetsu {Rainy Moon}

❉Zanpakutou Spirit:

❉Inner World:

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❉Reiatsu Color: Black

❉Fighting Style: Skye has been trained to be an all around fighting stylist. He can fight whether it is close up or ranged. He prefers close up to range because he is a massive expert with a sword. He has been known to play games sometimes to improve his opponent's skill to make the battle more interesting.

❉Shinigami Skills:

Sword Style:
Skye is a master of the Kendo style. This style is what put's fears into others.

Meaning- Kendo (剣道 kendō?), meaning "Way of The Sword," is a modern Japanese martial art, which descended from traditional swordsmanship (kenjutsu) and uses bamboo swords (shinai), and protective armour (bōgu). Today, it is widely practised within Japan and many other nations across the world.

Kendo is a physically and mentally challenging activity that combines martial arts practices and values with sport-like strenuous physical activity.

Hakuda Style:
Ikkotsu (一骨, "Single Bone")

Tesshō (鉄掌, "Iron Palm")

Sōkotsu (双骨, "Double Bone")

Kazaguruma (風車, "Windmill")

Sandobaggu Bīto (サンドバッグ・ビート, "Sandbag Beat")

Tsukiyubi (撞指, Thrust Fingers)

Shunpo/Speed Skills:
~Dashing~ A most basic technique that allows the user to throw him/herself to a certain direction using a certain angle of which way the the stance is directed and executed. Based on an individual's atributes, dashing can be quite a moderately fast move instead of running. Also depending on the distance, dashing can be quite useful if in closer range to the opponent. This technique is basically for all ranks.

~Senkaimon~ (穿界門, World Penetration Gate) is the dimensional gateway which Shinigami use to enter and leave Soul Society by unlocking it. When guided by a Jigokuchō, the Senkaimon takes the form of a waiting room entered through a sliding door. Humans can also use such a gate through the use of Reishihenkanki (霊子変換機, Spirit Exchangers), which convert solid matter into spirit particles.

~Shunpo (Flash-Step)~ A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high lieutenant ranking, must be able to possess Shunpo. Furthermore, it is a most fearsome mid-range/long-range speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. All in all, this ability can only be used by lieutenants and captains. For lieutenants it is nearly mastered, yet not perfected. Therefore, it is only of mid-range level 1. For captains Shunpo is of a level 2 maximum ability in which it is fully perfected for both mid-range and long-range.

~Air Walk~ Another skill, though not necessarily related, is the Soul Reaper ability to walk on air using spiritual energy. By collecting and solidifying spiritual particles beneath their feet, Soul Reapers can gain traction on thin air to either freely move about or to stop themselves from falling. This particular ability can only be obtained from officer level. Furthermore, it cannot necessarily be used every so often, especially for officers. It is an ability that can only be temporarily used but cannot last for a very long period of time. However, for lieutenants, they can stay on air for quite a bit longer and for captains, it can be held for quite a long while considering the great amount of riatsu within a captain ranking individual.

~Utsusemi~ This technique is one of the most difficult speed abilities of them all. Furthermore, this is also one of the two, that Youruichi developed as well. It is the 4 ways of the Shihou through Shunpo which is also known as "Utsusemi". It's ability is a speed known to be so fast that the user leaves an afterimage of him/herself. Its affect is most absolute, superb, and flawless if ever fully perfected. And to be more specific, Utsusemi's speed is so fast, that the enemy can practically feel and touch the physical body of the afterimage and not even know the very fact that it is nothing more but an afterimage. Its very image can easily deceive the eyes of the enemy. This technique is very rare, thus few captains are able to possess such a flawless ability. Furthermore it is most lethal when combining Senka after Utsusemi is executed.

❉Extra Tools: N/A

❉Extra Tool Information: N/A

❉Division Number: 6

❉Division Rank: Captain

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❉Shikai Appearance:
The same except now a purple chain reaches 5 meters off the hilt. At the end of the chain is a lotus.

❉Release Incantation: "Ame, Ugetsu {Rain, Rainy Moon}"

❉Shikai Information: Kagehime's ability is to make various reiatsu techniques through Skye's reaitsu

❉Shikai Techniques:

❉Shikai Techniques:

✿1. Kigetsu {Demon Moon}

This ability allows a slim amount of the reaistu to retain on the trim of the sword. Then this trim start circulate around the blade thus giving it a slight lustrous glow. The speed of how fast the reaitsu moves in fact sharpens the blade two times per every three post. This can occur a total of three times in battle. When the blade becomes sharper, it is obvious that the blade itself would become sharpened and more easy to cut objects through and through with, the move of Gengetsu-Dansu becomes even sharper. However after the sword is sharpened at its maximum extent it will remain sharpened for total of six post where it would then dull down in the same way it was sharpened. Then after the ability is all said and done with, the wielder must wait a total of three post before using this ability again. ~ Stage one is a regular blade, Stage two- The sword now piece or slice through small kido attacks and now cut through top and or slim muscle or objects easily. Stage 3, allows the wielder to cut through heavy kido and cut through thick muscle and objects easily.~

✿2. Shingetsu {Dark Moon}

This ability allows the wielder to engulf his entire being or a small part of his being with his reaitsu that combines with the spiritual pressure to form a black encased armor. In this state the wielder physical actions are doubled however his speed is cut slightly to even out his bodily state. However there are attacks that can brake through this armor and hit him but at least when this does occur the attacks damage is minimized. How the armor works is if he is encased his whole body the armor stands weaker but still strong. Although if the dark armor is covering a small portion the armor is at the strongest point. So in other words the less space it covers the stronger the armor is but the more it covers the weaker it is but it can still be lethal if it covers the entire body and if used properly. The wielder may encase themselves for five whole post however the wielder may encase a limb or part for a total of 10 post. The cool down is a three post for a limb or part and a six post cool down for the encased armor.

✿3 Gengetsu-Dansu {Crescent Moon Dance}
At the instant of the slash, the Zanpakto absorbing the wielder’s spiritual energy, releases the highly condensed spiritual energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This so called slash takes form of a crescent moon shape thus earning it’s name Gengetsu-Dansu {Crescent Moon Dance}. This technique can be used at a weak force or a strong destructive force. This all depends on how much energy is put into the blade. Skye has mastered this ability completely and can use it in many different variations and forms. Meaning Skye may use this technique in many different sizes but the attack will always be in the same shape as a crescent moon. Also what makes this attack deadly is how fast this attack moves because if it makes contact it is able to cut through objects and or making minor to serious damage all depending on how much spiritual energy is put into blade. However Skye must be careful with this attack because this attack if he over uses it will drain him of his energy swiftly. The range of this attack is a total of twenty meters.

✿4.Mikadzuki-Dansu {New Moon Dance}

This ability is in fact the deadliest ability in Skye’s arsenal. This ability has no actual archetypal move but in fact this is a special component energy that is produced by the sword that allows Skye to manipulate all of the previous stated abilities in conjunction. Meaning that Skye may perform Gengetsu-Dansu, Shingetsu, & Kingetsu all at one period of time or a combination of the two in any way or form. However all of the Drawbacks can occur to him at the same time and still have an effect on him. So Skye must be careful on how he uses this ability or he may end up in worse shape than he started out with.

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❉Bankai Appearance:
The Zanpakto is completely Gone. For the mist combined with her own body to unleash Kagehime's true abilities.

❉Release Incantation: "Bonkai" or " Kōzui, Ugetsu. {Flood, Rainy Moon} "

❉Bankai Information: Bankai Special Ability: The ability of his Bonkai is the ability same as shikai

❉Bankai Techniques:
✿1

Zensho Kigetsu {All Consuming Demon Moon}

This ability allows the wielder to engulf his entire being with his reaitsu that combines with the spiritual pressure to form a black encased armor. In this state the wielder physical actions are doubled. However there are attacks that can brake through this armor and hit him but at least when this does occur the attacks damage is minimized. How the armor works is, The wielder may encase themselves for Eight whole post. The cool down is a four post cool down. This amour is by fat the strongest defense that Skye has in his arsenal of abilities that his zanpakto may use. This armor covers Skye’s entire body beside his hair and eyes.

✿2

Zensho Shingetsu {All Consuming Dark Moon}

This ability allows a moderate amount of the reaistu to retain on the trim of the sword. Then this trim start circulate around the blade thus giving it a moderate lustrous glow. The speed of how fast the reaitsu moves in fact sharpens the blade three times per every post. This can occur a total of three times in battle. When the blade becomes sharper, it is obvious that the blade itself would become sharpened and more easy to cut objects as well as through and through with, the move of Mugetsu even becomes sharper. However after the sword is sharpened at its maximum extent it will remain sharpened for total of Eight post where it would then dull down in the same way it was sharpened. Then after the ability is all said and done with, the wielder must wait a total of five post before using this ability again.

✿3
Mugetsu {Moonless Sky}
Skye manifest a lot of reaitsu on his blade, and swings it towards his target. Doing so creates a massive veil of reaitsu to erupt upwards and approach the target, darkening the sky and damaging everything in its path and caught within its path. The energy contuning to rise, dissipates into the sky. This attack is the strongest attack that Skye has in his arsenal. This attack reaches to extent of one hundred meters. This is Skye’s last resort. Once this attack is performed Skye must sheathe his zanpakto and he may not use his Shikai or Bankai within a ten post cool down.

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-Bakudo-

He does not perform Kido, he thinks it as a weak force that is only a distraction in battle.

-Healing-

He does not perform Kido, he thinks it as a weak force that is only a distraction in battle.

-Hado-

He does not perform Kido, he thinks it as a weak force that is only a distraction in battle..

-Forbidden-

He does not perform Kido, he thinks it as a weak force that is only a distraction in battle.

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❉ This is my story:

Skye was born in the feudal era in Japan. Skye was raised in the small village of Konkara. heHlived under the priest and along all of his students. As a young child Skye loved playing the bells of the sanctuary and singing about the wonderful gifts that Buddha had blessed him. He was always happy and a playful little child. His best friend was a boy named of Miroku and they would always meet under a Sakura Tree that was in full bloom to play music together. Skye would live a happy childhood with Miroku by his side and slowly becoming a priest.

During his middle years, the ages between 20-40, Skye became the Head Priest of Konkara. He soon became infamous all throughout Japan as becoming known as “Heaven’s Hands” for it was said that he could cure any disease that he could come in contact with. However even though his abilities were based on the healing side , deep down in her heart Skye wished to gain strong abilities that would allow him to fight alongside his commerades and face demons with his fighting techniques rather than just healing people for the rest of his life. Little did he know that her healing aspects was the first thing a mysterious figure from another dimension noticed. It was a Soul Reaper who actually dwelled along side The Soul King who noticed Skye’s ambition, and his name was Hyka.

During his latter years of her life, Skye contunied to heal people with her remedies. However he did not know that during the last part of her life, Skye was being watched by The Royal Guard due to Hyka’s orders. Skye, at the age of 79, fell ill. Hyka ordered that Soul Reapers would guard his body and Soul when he died so that way Hollows could never touch his Soul. Hyka went out of his way and against his Royal duties to help this man because in fact he was infatuated with Skye. Skye would soon die to his illness and under Hyka’s orders he was to be reborn into the Soul Society. After Skye’s death, the small town had a whole week of the year dedicated to his efforts against illness and buried him in a Shrine that would eventually become the site for Tokyo, Japan. Some legends say that is was the Shrine and Skye’s soul that blessed Tokyo’s with all of it’s wonder but that is just a legend. Skye died with the agonizing thought on how he wished he had more physical powers rather than healing.

Skye’s was reborn in the Soul Society to the noble Gravellia clan who’s current leader was an old Soul Reaper named Hyka Manseo Gravellia. Skye had no clue that was the man who raised him was in fact the Soul Reaper that fell in love with him years before. Skye lived another happy life but in the polar opposite atmosphere. He was raised and taught on how to be himself and let his soul guide him through life and not the lessons of others. Skye soon blossomed like the flowers and let his personality soar. Due to his strong pressure and powers as a young child, Hyka had to hone it and started to train him at a young age to become a Soul Reaper while still remaining herself. It was during this training he met his Zanpakto, Kagehime.

After rigorous years of training with Hyka, Skye left for the academy. Skye would enroll in the academy and was praised for his abilities within all ranges. Skye would eventually graduate at the top of class. He would return home but to his dismay he would realize that Hyka had died and moved on. Skye would fall in a deep depression and would hide from the world in isolation for a total of five months.

After the five months had completed Skye’s whole personality had changed. He was now more respectful, noble, less bubbly and more deadly as well as changing his style of clothing completely. Skye then would enroll into the 13 Court Guard Squads where he was placed as the third officer of Squad 11. Skye befriended a lot of Soul Reapers during his time as third seat including a member named Hawk. Within six months he was promoted to Captain of Squad 11. His first decree as Captain was to make Hawk his Lt. During his time as Captain of Squad Eleven Skye ruled with a ruthless power. No one even dared to make a move In his direction, however Skye grew deathly ill and soon retired his position as Squad 11 Captain and returned home to regain his strength.

After regaining his health he became the Head for the Noble Family and re-entered the Soul Society. However he did not claim her old seat, he felt that Squad 11 no longer suited his needs so he took the Exam for Squad Six and was proudly promoted to Captain of Squad Six. During this time Skye would become infamous as “Devils Interrogator” & “The Void within the Mirror” It was said he could brake anyone and make them reveal the truth or the truth that people wanted to hear. People soon feared him for his tactics.

Skye became very noble like as well a cruel and cold. People soon called him “The Wall of the Sereitei” as he empowered Squad Six. Skye to this day rules Squad Six with an Iron Fist and refuses to let his title go. He has even stated before "I Will Die as Captain of Squad Six before I let weaklings succumb to such a prestigious title." As stated he rules with an Iron Fist as one of the oldest living Captains in the Seireitei.

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❉Likes: Teas and Sweet and Sour things.

❉Dislikes:
Secretly Hates People
Hates Rudeness
Death
Disrespect

❉Blood Type: O-

❉Relations: He is currently single

❉Personal Belongings: Unknown

❉Hobbies: Skye plays the flute and sings. These special qualities allows him to calm himself.

Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 9:39 am

~ Rp Sample ~

If the moon could talk, what would you think it could say? As the moon began to rise through the velvet scarf, also known as the night sky, it shined like the most luminous pearl anyone could fathom but its beauty was just a masquerade as it revealed the setting of the so called stage down below. The stage was covered in bodies that left a smell of hatred, revenge, & fear. In the middle of this mangled soup stood a lone figure hidden behind a jester’s mask and a dark ominous cloak. Although the figure was in total disguise its eyes shone even brighter than the moons everlasting glow. The figure was breathing slowly as it did so its breath slipped out of the mask like a snake. The figure slowly looked at the moon as its voice began to laugh a playful laugh like that of a child who is enjoying some kind of cruel game. As the voice echoed one could presume that by the sound of this unnatural figure was indeed a voice of a feminine male.

His voice echoed throughout the stage, no his stage that he himself had created. His hand slowly moved from his side up towards his mask that covered his face where his wretched smile slithered abroad his entire being. He slowly removed his mask to reveal a young boys face with an evil mans smile. His dark purple eyes shone like that of the moons and he felt like he couldn’t have lived better. Before the figure could do anything after this action he realized he was surrounded in a flash by the Soul Reapers of the 13 Court Guard Squads. The boy’s eyes did not hesitate but look around him and as he did so his smile just grew more intensely until it was at the extent to make someone feel nervous or feel fear itself.

Out of the Soul Reapers there was one wearing a Haori showing her dominance and order over the others and she proved it as she stepped forward and spoke with the most demanding tone that figure has heard in a long time. “Jester from the Court of Miracles, you are herby under arrest and you will be put straight to death for your crimes against the 13 Court Guard Squads and the Balance of this world.” The so called Jester slowly turned his attention to the captain as he spoke in a cool and collective tone. “Do you think if the moon could talk would it reveal my secret.” The captain from the Court Guards eyes winded in fear as the moon shined on the Jester’s face and revealing his true appearance towards her. She couldn’t help but stumble her words together as she began to patronize in fear of who stood before her. “I-I-I-It can’t be...Captain...”

Unfortunately before the Captain could finish her sentence, she was cut off by a scream of agony and pain. Echoes of screams that occurred that night were said to reach the Soul Society itself and they even caused the very base to tremor in fear. The next day bodies of all kinds were recovered whether it was the body of regular Shinigami’s or whether it was the Captain’s body but the Jester’s body was never found. What hurt the soul society the most was that two captains disappeared that night and never heard of again whether they where killed or not the Court Guard Squads can only prove one of these bodies dead while the other remains a complete mystery. Oh if the moon could talk it would reveal so many secrets to all of the wondering ears who are waiting to hear, but the one secret it would keep to itself if it could talk; was the secret of how the Master of Games stained the moon itself with blood and how he this unknown “Jester” would let nothing reveal his true identity and maybe this is why the moon will never talk and only watch as the stage is set up again & again.

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Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:21 am

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Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:45 am

More of a notice than a review, but a lot of your profile says "she" instead of "he".

Kiyoki Takinaga

~Furikkā (Flicker step)~ This technique was created by soldiers and officers after seeing how lieutenants and captains had a technique that allows them to move faster than the eye can follow, after studying Shunpo the soldiers and officers came up with this technique similar to Shunpo but different from it as well. Similar to Shunpo, a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high soldier ranking, must be able to possess Furikkā. Furthermore, not like Shunpo this technique is only for short-range but none the less it is a speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. For soldiers it is nearly mastered, yet not perfect. Therefore, a soldier can only move 1-3 feet with this step. For officers Furikkā is fully perfected and move 1-6 feet with this step. Once lieutenant rank they loose this ability and gain Shunpo.

If Lieutenant's lose this ability and gain Shunpo, why would a Captain have it?

Kiyoki Takinaga

~Senka (Flash Blossom)~ Although Shunpo is connected with this ability, this technique possess a unique name and style of its own. This technique is known as Senka (闪花, Flash Blossom), a flash step combined with a spin to quickly move behind the enemy, followed by a strike aimed to destroy the saketsu chain and the hakusui soul sleep with a combination of two quick thrusts. This technique is one of the two, that Youruichi developed mixing Shunpo to complete its ability. Furthermore, only certain individuals, of high ranking captain level can possess such an ability.

In order to prevent OP, I want to let you know that this ability will not work on skilled/exceptionally trained Shinigami. The move itself "If they are pierced, they seal up this spiritual power, and the Shinigami will lose all their power".

Kiyoki Takinaga

✿1. Hikari no Hansha- Reflection of light
The mirror swallows elemental or energy base attacks and store it to use it against the enemy or if the move was healing swallow it and use it on an ally. The maximum capacity is ten moves. Power of the move also takes capacity. If it is powerful (Large radius destructive attack example raiho cero) the move will take up half the capacity. Weak or Medium power moves take only one space of capacity.

This needs a drawback, as you can continually absorbing and deflecting attacks without ever taking a hit. The capacity of the move is a little OP. Not only can you potentially absorb any attack, but the mirror has no limits.

Kiyoki Takinaga

✿2. Yami no Hanabira (Petals of Darkness)- This is the offensive side of the mist that Skye controls. Each mist particle will rush around in a state that resembles like Senbonzakura. However the particles are not swords but they will be dangerous just as much. The speed that they move at causes the particles to have a friction based cutting ability. The mist particles act like swords and have the ability to cut like swords but the trick is the actual speed of how fast they are moving. The mist comes from within the mirror.

How much mist can the mirror produce? Are they effected by wind i.e. blowing it away? Countermeasures, can it be blocked, or is the only way to avoid it to dodge? Range of influence?

Kiyoki Takinaga

✿3 Mōfingu Yami (Morphing Darkness)- This ability allows the mist to take shapes of various weapons. The mist can harden and created a "Yin Weapon" as Ishiani has called it. This weapon can either be a bow and arrow various other weapons. It can also surround a enemy and turn solid and trap them inside. This ability is tricky by itself but what makes it strong is how fast the mist can turn from a solid and gaseous state.

Again, range and drawbacks, as I don't see how you can block or even dodge the mist without getting "cut".

Kiyoki Takinaga

✿4. Ankoku No Yoroi (Armor of Darkness)- The Strongest ability of his Zanpakto in Shikai form is Ankoku No Yoroi. The mist can surround Skye's body and turn into a solid thus forming a extra layer around his body. This move allows the mist to work as an armor against attacks. However in this state his physical actions are doubled but her speed has lowered. He can not move as fast but again his physical attacks doubled what he lost in his speed. She can also do this on a part of her body rather than her whole body. However there are attacks that could brake through this armor and hit him and when this does occur the attack damage on his body is just less rather then the full amount.

Last time in posts, as well as a cooldown?

Kiyoki Takinaga

✿5. Seals of the Black Frosted Flowers.- The Sealing of a move cost a lot of energy and eats energy gradually to maintain the seal, But he usually lets the seal run out than hold it. The move that is sealed cannot be used until the seal removed or the seal cannot be maintained due to little energy. The mirror can only seal one set of abilities at a time (note this move can only be used 3 times in battle) The move or style that will be sealed must be reflect in the mirror for Sky to seal it. Sets the mirror can seal:

This means you can stop anyone's Shikai/Bankai moves, as long as your Zanpakuto has seen it once. I don't see how you can seal a Shunpo/Sonido, since it's an entirely speed based move by itself. The speed you would have to have to seal this would be immense. Not only that, but you can seal someone from using their Visored Mask? If you still want to use this ability, it needs a massive drawback, a countermeasure, as well as a cooldown time.

Kiyoki Takianga

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Incantation to activate the game : " "The moon is a mysterious mistress who walks the night with demons of dread and thus a game has officially begun." This is the game part of her Bonkai. After the incantation is said a dome of black reaitsu forms around Skye and her opponent. Now inside the dome the laws of time are discontinued. Meaning if it feels like a year you've been inside the dome in actuality nothing has happened outside of the dome so that way the soul reapers have not missed anything in their normal lives. Now inside the dome it looks like a black void except you can see your opponent and in the high middle of the dome floating above Skye and the other Soul Reaper is A Giant floating fallen angel who is chained and bounded. Her eyes are also covered by a purple ribbon. Skye tells people that this figure is actually the real "Judge" and she is a form of Kagehime. The game is divided into three trials. The trails goes in this order. "Scared", "Terror", and "Fear". Now what happens is that Kagehime will look into her opponents heart to see what their opponent is scared, terrified of, or what they fear. Then Kagehime will create three trials for the Soul Reaper to overcome if possible. Say if the Soul Reaper is scared of his wife leaving him then Kagehime will create a world inside the dome in which the Soul Reaper lives in but the only way to pass is if the Soul Reaper can prevent his wife from leaving him. The same laws go with Terror and Fear but the trials will be much more broader and harder. For example if someone is terrified of loosing a battle with someone , Kagehime will make he/she face them in battle. For them to pass they must win the battle. As for fear if one would fear the soul society falling or being destroyed then that will occur in the illusion and they must prevent it to pass. Now Skye can not interact within the trial at all except for the "Twilight Views" which are lifelines so to speak. Meaning the Opponent can call upon Skye for help and by the laws of the game Skye must help them in a way or she will die. The opponent will get ONLY two Twilight Views. The injuries also work as such. Your injuries you sustain you will keep until the end of the round. If you pass they will be healed, Then you will go on to the next round or you will exit Bonkai to prove you beat fear. Although if you loose you will endure the injuries and you will suffer the second Bonkai Ability on top of your Injuries. Also it is mandatory for Skye to Explain ALL of the rules before any round starts.

I'm iffy on the time thing. Not only can you keep your opponent completely trapped without a way of escape, but there is no way to dodge the initial Bankai skill. That means that the opponent either has to force you out of your Bankai, or said opponent dies. Not only that, but you have an omniscient ability to "autohit" and see into your opponent. The way I see it, your Bankai is more or less an entire autohit, and the only way I would allow it is if you got permission from every opponent you are using it on to agree to the bankai trials in OOC.

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✿2.
Punishment-
Punishment is who ever looses the game whether if its Skye's opponent or Skye herself; Will endure this ability. Now this ability is activated if either Skye's opponent looses in any trial or if they succeed ALL of the trials. The fallen angel will be unchanged and unbounded. She will connect her energy with the looser and absorb most of their remaining spiritual energy. After this ability, it will weaken whoever lost almost immobile. They will be able to walk and move but their flashstep and any kido will be out of the question because their energy will almost be completely gone. Now the fallen angel is actually a personification of Skye. Meaning Kagehime will absorb the energy and make it hers. Although if Kagehime absorbs Skye's energy she does NOT get her energy back. She will suffer as the same if his opponent would. Do note it is eaten and not stored in any way, shape or form

Just for clarification, Kagehime does not increase in power in any which way?

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Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 11:52 am

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More of a notice than a review, but a lot of your profile says "she" instead of "he".

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~Furikkā (Flicker step)~ This technique was created by soldiers and officers after seeing how lieutenants and captains had a technique that allows them to move faster than the eye can follow, after studying Shunpo the soldiers and officers came up with this technique similar to Shunpo but different from it as well. Similar to Shunpo, a movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. This technique requires a very high level of training, thus a most difficult one to obtain. One, who is of a high soldier ranking, must be able to possess Furikkā. Furthermore, not like Shunpo this technique is only for short-range but none the less it is a speed known to be the exceeding ability than dashing. For soldiers it is nearly mastered, yet not perfect. Therefore, a soldier can only move 1-3 feet with this step. For officers Furikkā is fully perfected and move 1-6 feet with this step. Once lieutenant rank they loose this ability and gain Shunpo.

If Lieutenant's lose this ability and gain Shunpo, why would a Captain have it?

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~Senka (Flash Blossom)~ Although Shunpo is connected with this ability, this technique possess a unique name and style of its own. This technique is known as Senka (闪花, Flash Blossom), a flash step combined with a spin to quickly move behind the enemy, followed by a strike aimed to destroy the saketsu chain and the hakusui soul sleep with a combination of two quick thrusts. This technique is one of the two, that Youruichi developed mixing Shunpo to complete its ability. Furthermore, only certain individuals, of high ranking captain level can possess such an ability.

In order to prevent OP, I want to let you know that this ability will not work on skilled/exceptionally trained Shinigami. The move itself "If they are pierced, they seal up this spiritual power, and the Shinigami will lose all their power".

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✿1. Hikari no Hansha- Reflection of light
The mirror swallows elemental or energy base attacks and store it to use it against the enemy or if the move was healing swallow it and use it on an ally. The maximum capacity is ten moves. Power of the move also takes capacity. If it is powerful (Large radius destructive attack example raiho cero) the move will take up half the capacity. Weak or Medium power moves take only one space of capacity.

This needs a drawback, as you can continually absorbing and deflecting attacks without ever taking a hit. The capacity of the move is a little OP. Not only can you potentially absorb any attack, but the mirror has no limits.

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✿2. Yami no Hanabira (Petals of Darkness)- This is the offensive side of the mist that Skye controls. Each mist particle will rush around in a state that resembles like Senbonzakura. However the particles are not swords but they will be dangerous just as much. The speed that they move at causes the particles to have a friction based cutting ability. The mist particles act like swords and have the ability to cut like swords but the trick is the actual speed of how fast they are moving. The mist comes from within the mirror.

How much mist can the mirror produce? Are they effected by wind i.e. blowing it away? Countermeasures, can it be blocked, or is the only way to avoid it to dodge? Range of influence?

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✿3 Mōfingu Yami (Morphing Darkness)- This ability allows the mist to take shapes of various weapons. The mist can harden and created a "Yin Weapon" as Ishiani has called it. This weapon can either be a bow and arrow various other weapons. It can also surround a enemy and turn solid and trap them inside. This ability is tricky by itself but what makes it strong is how fast the mist can turn from a solid and gaseous state.

Again, range and drawbacks, as I don't see how you can block or even dodge the mist without getting "cut".

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✿4. Ankoku No Yoroi (Armor of Darkness)- The Strongest ability of his Zanpakto in Shikai form is Ankoku No Yoroi. The mist can surround Skye's body and turn into a solid thus forming a extra layer around his body. This move allows the mist to work as an armor against attacks. However in this state his physical actions are doubled but her speed has lowered. He can not move as fast but again his physical attacks doubled what he lost in his speed. She can also do this on a part of her body rather than her whole body. However there are attacks that could brake through this armor and hit him and when this does occur the attack damage on his body is just less rather then the full amount.

Last time in posts, as well as a cooldown?

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✿5. Seals of the Black Frosted Flowers.- The Sealing of a move cost a lot of energy and eats energy gradually to maintain the seal, But he usually lets the seal run out than hold it. The move that is sealed cannot be used until the seal removed or the seal cannot be maintained due to little energy. The mirror can only seal one set of abilities at a time (note this move can only be used 3 times in battle) The move or style that will be sealed must be reflect in the mirror for Sky to seal it. Sets the mirror can seal:

This means you can stop anyone's Shikai/Bankai moves, as long as your Zanpakuto has seen it once. I don't see how you can seal a Shunpo/Sonido, since it's an entirely speed based move by itself. The speed you would have to have to seal this would be immense. Not only that, but you can seal someone from using their Visored Mask? If you still want to use this ability, it needs a massive drawback, a countermeasure, as well as a cooldown time.

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Incantation to activate the game : " "The moon is a mysterious mistress who walks the night with demons of dread and thus a game has officially begun." This is the game part of her Bonkai. After the incantation is said a dome of black reaitsu forms around Skye and her opponent. Now inside the dome the laws of time are discontinued. Meaning if it feels like a year you've been inside the dome in actuality nothing has happened outside of the dome so that way the soul reapers have not missed anything in their normal lives. Now inside the dome it looks like a black void except you can see your opponent and in the high middle of the dome floating above Skye and the other Soul Reaper is A Giant floating fallen angel who is chained and bounded. Her eyes are also covered by a purple ribbon. Skye tells people that this figure is actually the real "Judge" and she is a form of Kagehime. The game is divided into three trials. The trails goes in this order. "Scared", "Terror", and "Fear". Now what happens is that Kagehime will look into her opponents heart to see what their opponent is scared, terrified of, or what they fear. Then Kagehime will create three trials for the Soul Reaper to overcome if possible. Say if the Soul Reaper is scared of his wife leaving him then Kagehime will create a world inside the dome in which the Soul Reaper lives in but the only way to pass is if the Soul Reaper can prevent his wife from leaving him. The same laws go with Terror and Fear but the trials will be much more broader and harder. For example if someone is terrified of loosing a battle with someone , Kagehime will make he/she face them in battle. For them to pass they must win the battle. As for fear if one would fear the soul society falling or being destroyed then that will occur in the illusion and they must prevent it to pass. Now Skye can not interact within the trial at all except for the "Twilight Views" which are lifelines so to speak. Meaning the Opponent can call upon Skye for help and by the laws of the game Skye must help them in a way or she will die. The opponent will get ONLY two Twilight Views. The injuries also work as such. Your injuries you sustain you will keep until the end of the round. If you pass they will be healed, Then you will go on to the next round or you will exit Bonkai to prove you beat fear. Although if you loose you will endure the injuries and you will suffer the second Bonkai Ability on top of your Injuries. Also it is mandatory for Skye to Explain ALL of the rules before any round starts.

I'm iffy on the time thing. Not only can you keep your opponent completely trapped without a way of escape, but there is no way to dodge the initial Bankai skill. That means that the opponent either has to force you out of your Bankai, or said opponent dies. Not only that, but you have an omniscient ability to "autohit" and see into your opponent. The way I see it, your Bankai is more or less an entire autohit, and the only way I would allow it is if you got permission from every opponent you are using it on to agree to the bankai trials in OOC.

Kiyoki Takinaga

✿2.
Punishment-
Punishment is who ever looses the game whether if its Skye's opponent or Skye herself; Will endure this ability. Now this ability is activated if either Skye's opponent looses in any trial or if they succeed ALL of the trials. The fallen angel will be unchanged and unbounded. She will connect her energy with the looser and absorb most of their remaining spiritual energy. After this ability, it will weaken whoever lost almost immobile. They will be able to walk and move but their flashstep and any kido will be out of the question because their energy will almost be completely gone. Now the fallen angel is actually a personification of Skye. Meaning Kagehime will absorb the energy and make it hers. Although if Kagehime absorbs Skye's energy she does NOT get her energy back. She will suffer as the same if his opponent would. Do note it is eaten and not stored in any way, shape or form

Just for clarification, Kagehime does not increase in power in any which way?

Draw backs and etc.. put in, hope they work out.

as for the He/She thing...Well Skye used to be a girl like the one in my guild but seeing how most of the captains in this guild are girls I decided to switch her to a him...so that is why that happened XD sweatdrop

Now as for Bankai. Bankai is only used for training purposes only. Due to his personality, Skye would never resort to using a Bankai in battle. He prefers his sword in battle. His shikai will act more like his "Bankai" Of course I will get permission to use this move first, I thought this would be a great lesson for earning Bankai's and what not but I could have been wrong xD lol As well as No, Kagehime gains no power what so ever she "eats" it that's it. As for the auto hit, Skye does not see into the opponent that is all Kagehime. It is as much a lesson for Skye as the opponent. Skye is just the walking puppet of Kagehime's will in this world. He is nothing but a meat bag so to speak xD

Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 12:05 pm

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✿1. Hikari no Hansha- Reflection of light
The mirror swallows elemental or energy base attacks and store it to use it against the enemy or if the move was healing swallow it and use it on an ally. The maximum capacity is ten moves. Power of the move also takes capacity. If it is powerful (Large radius destructive attack example raiho cero) the move will take up half the capacity. Weak or Medium power moves take only one space of capacity. ~ However if the move is stronger than Skye's own pressure and ability the mirror will crack and thus releasing all od the reaitsu he absorbed plus his own upon him in a self destructing blast ~

This still needs limits, as the complaint previously addressed still applies to anyone that's not on par with Captain level.

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✿5. Seals of the Black Frosted Flowers.- The Sealing of a move cost a lot of energy and eats energy gradually to maintain the seal, But he usually lets the seal run out than hold it. The move that is sealed cannot be used until the seal removed or the seal cannot be maintained due to little energy. The mirror can only seal one set of abilities at a time (note this move can only be used 3 times in battle) The move or style that will be sealed must be reflect in the mirror for Sky to seal it. Sets the mirror can seal:

I still need a little clarification for this. How strong of a move can it seal? Can it also be used in conjunction with the first Shikai ability, and does it also take up capacity?

As for the Bankai, I will allow it, but do not abuse it. You will need to get permission from your opponent for this if you happen to want to use it in battle.

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Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 12:19 pm

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Okie dokie is this better? ^.^

Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 12:49 pm

Perfect! Approved!

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Posted: Mon Aug 05, 2013 12:54 pm

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Perfect! Approved!

Thank you ^.^ I will get the Squad up either tonight or tomorrow. I have work, but it will get up soon ^.^

Posted: Tue Aug 06, 2013 1:18 pm

▐ The curtain that falls, at the end shall be pulled down by my blade▐

If the moon could talk, what would you think it could say? As the moon began to rise through the velvet scarf, also known as the night sky, it shined like the most luminous pearl anyone could fathom but its beauty was just a masquerade as it revealed the setting of the so called stage down below. The stage was covered in bodies that left a smell of hatred, revenge, & fear. In the middle of this mangled soup stood a lone figure hidden behind a jester’s mask and a dark ominous cloak. Although the figure was in total disguise its eyes shone even brighter than the moons everlasting glow. The figure was breathing slowly as it did so its breath slipped out of the mask like a snake. The figure slowly looked at the moon as its voice began to laugh a playful laugh like that of a child who is enjoying some kind of cruel game. As the voice echoed one could presume that by the sound of this unnatural figure was indeed a voice of a feminine male.

His voice echoed throughout the stage, no his stage that he himself had created. His hand slowly moved from his side up towards his mask that covered his face where his wretched smile slithered abroad his entire being. He slowly removed his mask to reveal a young boys face with an evil mans smile. His dark purple eyes shone like that of the moons and he felt like he couldn’t have lived better. Before the figure could do anything after this action he realized he was surrounded in a flash by the Soul Reapers of the 13 Court Guard Squads. The boy’s eyes did not hesitate but look around him and as he did so his smile just grew more intensely until it was at the extent to make someone feel nervous or feel fear itself.

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Posted: Wed Aug 07, 2013 9:47 pm

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Here are the new modifications. I just got to thinking, since Skye is supposed to be this melee expert I should change his Zanpakto...ALOT to match his being. So above are listed the new modifcations. Also to make it easier on yourself I listed them below as well.

❉Shikai Techniques:

✿1. Kigetsu {Demon Moon}

This ability allows a slim amount of the reaistu to retain on the trim of the sword. Then this trim start circulate around the blade thus giving it a slight lustrous glow. The speed of how fast the reaitsu moves in fact sharpens the blade two times per every three post. This can occur a total of three times in battle. When the blade becomes sharper, it is obvious that the blade itself would become sharpened and more easy to cut objects through and through with, the move of Gengetsu-Dansu becomes even sharper. However after the sword is sharpened at its maximum extent it will remain sharpened for total of six post where it would then dull down in the same way it was sharpened. Then after the ability is all said and done with, the wielder must wait a total of three post before using this ability again. ~ Stage one is a regular blade, Stage two- The sword now piece or slice through small kido attacks and now cut through top and or slim muscle or objects easily. Stage 3, allows the wielder to cut through heavy kido and cut through thick muscle and objects easily.~

✿2. Shingetsu {Dark Moon}

This ability allows the wielder to engulf his entire being or a small part of his being with his reaitsu that combines with the spiritual pressure to form a black encased armor. In this state the wielder physical actions are doubled however his speed is cut slightly to even out his bodily state. However there are attacks that can brake through this armor and hit him but at least when this does occur the attacks damage is minimized. How the armor works is if he is encased his whole body the armor stands weaker but still strong. Although if the dark armor is covering a small portion the armor is at the strongest point. So in other words the less space it covers the stronger the armor is but the more it covers the weaker it is but it can still be lethal if it covers the entire body and if used properly. The wielder may encase themselves for five whole post however the wielder may encase a limb or part for a total of 10 post. The cool down is a three post for a limb or part and a six post cool down for the encased armor.

✿3 Gengetsu-Dansu {Crescent Moon Dance}
At the instant of the slash, the Zanpakto absorbing the wielder’s spiritual energy, releases the highly condensed spiritual energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This so called slash takes form of a crescent moon shape thus earning it’s name Gengetsu-Dansu {Crescent Moon Dance}. This technique can be used at a weak force or a strong destructive force. This all depends on how much energy is put into the blade. Skye has mastered this ability completely and can use it in many different variations and forms. Meaning Skye may use this technique in many different sizes but the attack will always be in the same shape as a crescent moon. Also what makes this attack deadly is how fast this attack moves because if it makes contact it is able to cut through objects and or making minor to serious damage all depending on how much spiritual energy is put into blade. However Skye must be careful with this attack because this attack if he over uses it will drain him of his energy swiftly. The range of this attack is a total of twenty meters.

✿4.Mikadzuki-Dansu {New Moon Dance}

This ability is in fact the deadliest ability in Skye’s arsenal. This ability has no actual archetypal move but in fact this is a special component energy that is produced by the sword that allows Skye to manipulate all of the previous stated abilities in conjunction. Meaning that Skye may perform Gengetsu-Dansu, Shingetsu, & Kingetsu all at one period of time or a combination of the two in any way or form. However all of the Drawbacks can occur to him at the same time and still have an effect on him. So Skye must be careful on how he uses this ability or he may end up in worse shape than he started out with.

❉Bankai Techniques:
✿1

Zensho Kigetsu {All Consuming Demon Moon}

This ability allows the wielder to engulf his entire being with his reaitsu that combines with the spiritual pressure to form a black encased armor. In this state the wielder physical actions are doubled. However there are attacks that can brake through this armor and hit him but at least when this does occur the attacks damage is minimized. How the armor works is, The wielder may encase themselves for Eight whole post. The cool down is a four post cool down. This amour is by fat the strongest defense that Skye has in his arsenal of abilities that his zanpakto may use. This armor covers Skye’s entire body beside his hair and eyes.

✿2

Zensho Shingetsu {All Consuming Dark Moon}

This ability allows a moderate amount of the reaistu to retain on the trim of the sword. Then this trim start circulate around the blade thus giving it a moderate lustrous glow. The speed of how fast the reaitsu moves in fact sharpens the blade three times per every post. This can occur a total of three times in battle. When the blade becomes sharper, it is obvious that the blade itself would become sharpened and more easy to cut objects as well as through and through with, the move of Mugetsu even becomes sharper. However after the sword is sharpened at its maximum extent it will remain sharpened for total of Eight post where it would then dull down in the same way it was sharpened. Then after the ability is all said and done with, the wielder must wait a total of five post before using this ability again.

✿3
Mugetsu {Moonless Sky}
Skye manifest a lot of reaitsu on his blade, and swings it towards his target. Doing so creates a massive veil of reaitsu to erupt upwards and approach the target, darkening the sky and damaging everything in its path and caught within its path. The energy contuning to rise, dissipates into the sky. This attack is the strongest attack that Skye has in his arsenal. This attack reaches to extent of one hundred meters. This is Skye’s last resort. Once this attack is performed Skye must sheathe his zanpakto and he may not use his Shikai or Bankai within a ten post cool down.

Posted: Thu Aug 08, 2013 8:09 am

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✿2. Shingetsu {Dark Moon}
This ability allows the wielder to engulf his entire being or a small part of his being with his reaitsu that combines with the spiritual pressure to form a black encased armor. In this state the wielder physical actions are doubled however his speed is cut slightly to even out his bodily state. However there are attacks that can brake through this armor and hit him but at least when this does occur the attacks damage is minimized. How the armor works is if he is encased his whole body the armor stands weaker but still strong. Although if the dark armor is covering a small portion the armor is at the strongest point. So in other words the less space it covers the stronger the armor is but the more it covers the weaker it is but it can still be lethal if it covers the entire body and if used properly. The wielder may encase themselves for five whole post however the wielder may encase a limb or part for a total of 10 post. The cool down is a three post for a limb or part and a six post cool down for the encased armor.

If only one part of his body is encased in this armor, does his whole body get the physical action boost, or only the limb?

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✿3 Gengetsu-Dansu {Crescent Moon Dance}
At the instant of the slash, the Zanpakto absorbing the wielder’s spiritual energy, releases the highly condensed spiritual energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack, which flies forward. This so called slash takes form of a crescent moon shape thus earning it’s name Gengetsu-Dansu {Crescent Moon Dance}. This technique can be used at a weak force or a strong destructive force. This all depends on how much energy is put into the blade. Skye has mastered this ability completely and can use it in many different variations and forms. Meaning Skye may use this technique in many different sizes but the attack will always be in the same shape as a crescent moon. Also what makes this attack deadly is how fast this attack moves because if it makes contact it is able to cut through objects and or making minor to serious damage all depending on how much spiritual energy is put into blade. However Skye must be careful with this attack because this attack if he over uses it will drain him of his energy swiftly.

Range?

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✿4.Mikadzuki-Dansu {New Moon Dance}
This ability is in fact the deadliest ability in Skye’s arsenal. This ability has no actual archetypal move but in fact this is a special component energy that is produced by the sword that allows Skye to manipulate all of the previous stated abilities in conjunction. Meaning that Skye may perform Gengetsu-Dansu, Shingetsu, & Kingetsu all at one period of time or a combination of the two in any way or form. However all of the Drawbacks can occur to him at the same time and still have an effect on him. So Skye must be careful on how he uses this ability or he may end up in worse shape than he started out with.

I find this move OP. In my understanding, this allows him to bypass the post times it takes for Kigetsu to activate, and the cooldown of Shingetsu?

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Zensho Kigetsu {All Consuming Demon Moon}
This ability allows the wielder to engulf his entire being with his reaitsu that combines with the spiritual pressure to form a black encased armor. In this state the wielder physical actions are quadrupled . However there are attacks that can brake through this armor and hit him but at least when this does occur the attacks damage is minimized. How the armor works is, The wielder may encase themselves for Eight whole post. The cool down is a four post cool down. This amour is by fat the strongest defense that Skye has in his arsenal of abilities that his zanpakto may use. This armor covers Skye’s entire body beside his hair and eyes.

Quadrupled is a bit much. I wouldn't even go past double, added to the fact that there are no drawbacks.

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✿2 Zensho Shingetsu {All Consuming Dark Moon}
This ability allows a moderate amount of the reaistu to retain on the trim of the sword. Then this trim start circulate around the blade thus giving it a moderate lustrous glow. The speed of how fast the reaitsu moves in fact sharpens the blade three times per every post. This can occur a total of five times in battle. When the blade becomes sharper, it is obvious that the blade itself would become sharpened and more easy to cut objects as well as through and through with, the move of Mugetsu even becomes sharper. However after the sword is sharpened at its maximum extent it will remain sharpened for total of Eight post where it would then dull down in the same way it was sharpened. Then after the ability is all said and done with, the wielder must wait a total of three post before using this ability again.

The cooldown is much to short for such a powerful ability. Not to mention there is no way to stop the blade from growing sharper and sharper, the end result would make your blade fifteen times sharper than normal. Really OP.

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✿3 Mugetsu {Moonless Sky}
Skye manifest a lot of reaitsu on his blade, and swings it towards his target. Doing so creates a massive veil of reaitsu to erupt upwards and approach the target, darkening the sky and damaging everything in its path and caught within its path. The energy contuning to rise, dissipates into the sky. This attack is the strongest attack that Skye has in his arsenal. This attack reaches to extent of one-fourth of a mile. This is Skye’s last resort. Once this attack is performed Skye must sheathe his zanpakto and he may not use his Shikai or Bankai within a ten post cool down.

A quarter of a mile is about 400 meters. I wouldn't go past 100.

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Posted: Thu Aug 08, 2013 8:31 am

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No, if the armor only covers a single part of the body, that is the part that gets the effect. Not his entire body.

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Does 20 meters sound good?

3
No it only allows him to preform the moves at the same time. He must follow abide the rules of each move. Meaning he can expreince the cool downs and drawbacks at the same time. That is what I was trying to get at.

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Changed to double

5
I changed to only sharpened 3 times in battle amd coold down is mow five post.

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Dropped to 100 meters.

Posted: Thu Aug 08, 2013 8:35 am

Alright, edits sound good. Once they're made, you're reapproved.

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