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Starfruit N Mangos

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:07 pm


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Pride
"The Devil, the proud spirit, cannot endure to be mocked." - St. Thomas More, 16th Century

- Seeing ourselves as we are and not comparing ourselves to others is humility. Pride and vanity are competitive. If someone else's pride really bothers you, you have a lot of pride.

Envy
Envy is perverted because it "loves" what other people possess. Envy are for those with their eyes sewn shut, but weeping over their sins eating away at their own hearts.

- "Love is patient, love is kind…" Love actively seeks the good of others for their sake. Envy resents the good others receive or even might receive. Envy is almost indistinguishable from pride at times.

Anger/Wrath
Every angry person feels righteous. When we are angry we concentrate on the object of it and forget everything else.

- Kindness means taking the tender approach, with patience and compassion. Anger is often our first reaction to the problems of others. Impatience with the faults of others is related to this.

Sloth/Acedia
Most people think of sloth as laziness, not doing much of anything, but just sitting around doing nothing. Many people stay busy most of the time but don't do the things they should, putting them off for later. They may be staying busy so they have an excuse.
Sloth (or acedia) is a kind of spiritual laziness (as opposed to mere physical fatigue or depression). It means not making it a priority to do what we should

- Zeal is the energetic response of the heart to do what is needed to be done. The other sins work together to deaden the spiritual senses so we first become slow to getting things done and then drift completely into the sleep of complacency.

Greed
There are at least three forms of greed:
1) an obsessive desire for ever more material goods and the attendant power.
2) A fearful need to store up surplus goods for a vaguely defined time of want.
3) A desire for more earthly goods for their own sake.

- This is about more than money. Generosity means letting others get the credit or praise. It is giving without having expectations of the other person. Greed wants to get its "fair share" or a bit more.

Gluttony
There are at least three forms of Gluttony:
1) wanting more pleasure from something than it was made for.
2) Wanting it exactly our way (delicacy).
3) Demanding too much from people (excessive desire for other people's time or presence).

- Temperance accepts the natural limits of pleasures and preserves this natural balance. This does not pertain only to food, but to entertainment and other legitimate goods, and even the company of others.

Lust
To be fair, there is one good thing about the sin of Lust: it cannot persist into eternity. In actuality, sins of the flesh tend to burn themselves out over time. After a while lust becomes a habit and what pleasure it brought diminishes until we wonder what the attraction is.

- Lust is the self-destructive drive for pleasure out of proportion to its worth. Sex, power, or image can be used well, but they tend to go out of control.

Story

In this world we are not prefect. I don't care who you are or say you are everyone has a sin. On this land that was soon built with sin is where the true beauty of woodland shined. Before humans, elves, dwarfs, etc. The land was once without sin once without lust, gluttony, greed, sloth, anger, envy, or pride. It almost sounds sad. What could live in a place such as this hell? What could be truly living having no flaws what's-so-ever? In truth nothing…only that without a mind could live in such a place created by gods. This land had a name giving to it by its creator, Icelus.

Icelus gave birth to the first living creatures from the depths of its shallow waters. Strange things they were, they could not speck, taste, feel, or see but they could hear. Their hearing was their power used to listen to the earth that spoke to them. These creatures had no names for they had no need for them. You could guess what happens next slowly they began to talk learning in a different way to get what they need. Soon they could feel the things around them knowing that something was soft and warm. Soon they could see the beauty as well as the ugly that was in front of them all of their life.

When this happened the sin had begun. The creatures started to point out what they thought what was right and what was wrong. What the wanted and what they didn't want. What was good or bad. The gods did not like this and destroyed the beings but the land gave forth new beings, humans, elves and so on. When the gods destroyed the first creatures they left behind their sins. Forging their souls into the seven stones they scattered the land never to be seen again. The gods saw that they could do nothing about this land but watch over it and so they did.

But this was five hundred years ago before humans and other races came.

Now five hundred years later in the medieval times a war is at hand. Someone had found the stone of greed and uncovered its mysteries. As well as getting consumed but its sprit the man, Koy, desired power and took his once peaceful kingdom, Ra'lin, into a war. A rain of terror fell from the blood red sky over took the land as they destroyed everything in their path. Kyo would stop at nothing to gain the rest of the stones in order to formulate the ultimate being in himself.

To make a long story short Kyo gained all of the stones becoming the most powerful man that walked the earth. The land always seemed dark and under his rule creating a new kingdom named Sin. He had managed to in slave almost everyone you were lucky if you weren't caught. He even had control of the ever powerful dragons. The people began to give up hope until they learned that he could be stopped. All they had to do was invade the castle and take the stones…but could they do that without getting consumed themselves?

This is where you come in ^_^

You will start either in or out side the kingdom either way everyone has to meet up somewhere along the line of this story. Sin is surrounded by a forest swarming with solders. Further away is a small hidden cabin under a tree where the resistance groups stay. It’s not so big and mostly underground. The groups are working on tunnels that lead under the castle.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:14 pm


Rules

1. This is Advance literate Role-play five or more Sentences each post.
2. Mistakes are ok every once in a while even I make them.
3. Do not god mold, auto hit, power play or create overly powerful characters everyone has a weakness.
4. My words are finale to make it simple I am god. I can add and take away rules as I please.
5. Pm profiles titled 'Living in Sin', Wait for my ok. That way this thread stays nice. If you must and utterly have to OOC in this thread please use (( )) or [[ ]].
6. Stay active.
7. Please let me know if you are going to be away for a while and will be unable to post so that I do not delete your character.
8. Please use size 9-10 font it makes larger post easier to read.
9. Have fun ^_^ Oh yeah romance and violence are encouraged you know the deal keep it pg 13.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:17 pm


Profiles

[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Name:[/b] { First and Last }
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Race:[/b] { Elves, dwarfs, humans, fairies and such. No demons and angles sorry. }
[b]Weapon:[/b] { Please don’t go crazy only three }
[b]Skills:[/b] { Dose your character specialize in anything, craftsmanship, speed, flexibility and so on. }
[b]Bio:[/b] { Nothing to long please }
[b]Appearance:[/b] { Links please }
[b]Other:[/b] { Anything other you would like to add. }
[b]Side fighting for:[/b]
PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:18 pm


Characters

I need a king of Icelus You must show me that you are worthy of this role by your skills.

Fallen King of Icelus-

Resistance group

Username: xXAiko HanaXx
Name: Tessa Hana
Age: 17
Race: Human
Weapon: Two Kanata’s
Skills: Heighten hearing and flexibility.
Bio: Tessa was born blind to the world around her growing up in the great kingdom of Icelus before its name was changed. Tessa fought until she couldn’t move and her body would no long take her minds command. To her luck the resistance groups were attacking at the time helping her escape. They took care of her and they soon became close friends. Even though she was blind she was a skilled fighter and never went down easy.
Appearance: Alone ll Alone again ll Tis is Tessa
Other: She never takes off her blindfold.

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Username: Colin_Jasper
Name: Cervantes Veldahar
Age: 23
Race: Human
Weapon: Crossbow and a long knife, which he rarely uses, except in close combat situations.
Skills: Highly-developed sense of accuracy, ability to use stealth quite well, and skilled at pick-pocketing
Bio: Cervantes lived in a town among the forest with his family. He was quite good at archery and joined the local archery clun, but his mom didn't allow him, because she thought it was a bad influence on his sister. He was forced to train in the forest from that day. One day, when he came back from his training, his village had been burnt and destroyed by Kyo and his army. There were no survivors, except for him, so he started to wander, picking up his stealth skills and pick-pocketing skills along the way. He then heard of the resistance and he decided he wanted to join and put a stop to Kyo's rule.
Appearance: Cervantes Veldahar
Other: His crossbow is behind his cape on his back.
Side fighting for: Resistance

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:19 pm


Characters

Spies

Loyal to Icelus

Loyal to Ra’lin
PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:20 pm


Characters

Fighters loyal to Kyo

Username: xXAiko HanaXx
Name: Kyo Keshiro
Age: 45
Race: Human
Weapon: A Kanata
Skills: The dark arts.
Bio: Kyo rule everything you see blinded by the seven sins. He is a powerful king that rules by strength without thinking of the others he has to harm. If you read story then you know what you need to know about him.
Appearance: Kyo Keshiro
Other: He controls all dragons and keeps a small white dragon that sits on his shoulders.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 3:32 pm


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:31 am


Tessa sat near the entrance to the cabin with her back on the dirt covered wall. With her head down she seemed as if she could be sleep but she was far from it. She was listening. Tonight was her turn to play as the look out for the hid out. She made sure she was well hidden from sight something that would be hard for someone who couldn't see. Her breathing was shallow to make it easier for her ears to pick up anything near. Her arms were crossed across her chest held close to her body.

Hearing a soft rustle in the bushes she raised her head slightly. "What was that," a soft, calm, and low voice came from between her lips. The second look out next to her looked around for her before replying, "I don't see anything." The second female made sure she was specking low as if any sound at all would cause them death. Tessa pressed her lips together lowering her head again, "Don't let your guard down."

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Colin_Jasper

PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:35 am


Cervantes rushed towards the cabin. He wasn't really running from anything, he just needed to get back to the base as quickly as possible. He jumped over a couple of logs and dodged a couple of overhanging branches before he almost collided with Tessa.
"Jesus!" he shouted as he barely dodged her and went flying over a bush, head first into the dirt.
Cervantes turned face up and opened his eyes, seeing a large cluster of green foliage above him. He whiped the dirt off his face and stood up, looking at Tessa in front of him.
"Oh...sorry about that Tessa. What are you up to?" he asked, a little winded from all the running.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:44 am


The second look-out began to nod her head out of boredom. She talked too much if you asked Tessa but Tessa would only feel that way because any sound was loud to her. She sighed having a hard time to hear the rustling in the distance of the night. She stood up quickly hearing the sound of something running towards them. Hiding behind the low breaches of the tree she placed her hand on her blade, "Someone's coming," her eyes narrowed.

The moon light cast the shadows of the many trees around them. Slowly she waited for the girl next to her to tell her who it was. "Oh it's only Cervantes," she spoke a little relieved. Tessa moved a little when he almost crashed into her. The female next to her chuckled seeing him fall. "Cervantes...what are you running for? I thought someone had found us," she sighed lowering her head, her hair shifting slightly off her shoulders.

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Colin_Jasper

PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:48 am


"Oh...nothing really...I was just running." he said with a smile. "I need to keep my speed up for any encounters we may have."
He looked at the other girl and nodded, then looked back at Tessa. "Sorry about the scare...". He felt a little guilty for making them be on alert for no reason. He walked over to a nearby log and sat down.
"No sign of any troops nearby. I scouted the area for a good hour and didn't find anyone." He hoped it stayed like that, but he knew it wouldn't for much longer.
PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 11:57 am


Tessa smiled hearing the good news of no near by troops. "That's good to know," she turned her head a little to her right. A cool night breeze tossed the ends of her blindfold into the air dancing with her sliver hair. She took her mind off the sound she hared. It must have come from Cervantes. Listening to his voice she walked over to his side facing him but unable to see. "Lill you can go and get some rest now," she turned her head towards the female.

She smiled happily clapping her hands together. She had been up for a long time and now she was able to go off and get some sleep. Tessa smiled knowing she would be happy. The female hurried and lifted her post before Tessa could change her mind. "You are my new eyes for tonight," she chuckled turning towards the forest.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 12:03 pm


Colin looked up in suprise. "Me? Seriously? But I couldn't take on such an important task."
He was quite suprised, but worried about slipping up, nonetheless. He'd never been Tessa's eyes before, and he didn't want to do anything wrong.
"Sure...I'll be your eyes tonight, then." he said, with a half-smile. He stood up and faced the breeze and took a whiff of the oncoming air. It smelled of death and destruction, as it should, since nothing beyond the forest had any spirit or freedom anymore.
"It's sad to think about it..." he whispered silently as he let his eyes wander around the forest and anything he could see beyond it.
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