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DarkWaterMiyo Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 3:47 pm
Okay! This is where you can write reviews for the story REJECTION!!!!! ^^
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 4:51 pm
AWESHOMENESS!!!!! >W<
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<3333333333333
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DarkWaterMiyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 4:53 pm
YAY!!! I HAVE A FAN!!!!!!^^
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 5:29 pm
Seriously, this one OWNS!!!!!!!!!! 3nodding
^_^
heart I Luv it!!! heart
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DarkWaterMiyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 5:37 pm
Heh heh, I'm glad people like me angsty story of doom!!!! ^^ Took me 3 months...3 MONTHS!!!! XOOOOO
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:09 pm
Wow!!!! Thats long! But that just shows your dedication!!!! ^^
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DarkWaterMiyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:15 pm
Uh-huh! I really like the way it came out, although the end seemed a little rushed in my opinion
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:19 pm
I see, well you can always adjust it when you have the time. ^^
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DarkWaterMiyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:24 pm
Nah, prologue's over. I wanna work on the acutal hummonculous aspect....lol....Rejection and her Nii-kun...so much fun to be had
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:26 pm
lol! Can't wait!!!! ^^ Whoooo! xDDD
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DarkWaterMiyo Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 6:29 pm
Sibling rivalry don't even cover this disfunctional brother-sister duo XD
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Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2006 2:28 pm
Yeah, I reviewed this on FF so you know what I think. Please dont make any sticky stories though. Let people write their reviews in the thread itself cause normal people wont be able to make stickies and thats not fair okay.
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Twilight Seraphim Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2006 12:30 pm
Wow!!!!
OwO
Chapter 1 was awesome!!!! Write more Miyoko-chan!!!
>O<
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 3:07 pm
Awesome chapter!! whee Can't wait till the next!!! 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Oct 23, 2006 4:01 pm
OMG!!! I totally loved the first chapter!
=^-^=
heart heart heart
I can't wait for the next, you're a really talented writer! 3nodding
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