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 Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:51 pm
((okay, i'll start using that style.))
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:52 pm
Art1st4786 ((Does it really matter? Just as long as you know what's an action and what's actual dialogue?)) ((Well, it's considerably easier to read with a uniform format. Not only that, but it helps highlight detail, and makes everything seem more formal.))
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:52 pm
Baron vivi von vi ((okay, i'll start using that style.)) ((Thank You ^^))
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:55 pm
((sigh "I'll start, too"))
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:57 pm
collaspses on to his knees outside of the house. His right eye twitches slightly and his had is slump, the feather has begun to wilt oh god your killing me, i'd do anything for some food right now"is...issss anyone there??" he raises his head slightly to see if anyone is nearby.
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:58 pm
Looks out the window
"Vivi??"
She quickly rushes out the door and over to Vivi, kneeling next to him.
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 8:59 pm
Art1st4786 ((sigh "I'll start, too")) ((Thank you very much. whee I appreciate it))
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:06 pm
Looks up at Art "well....s..s..seems your doing well" coughs a bit and tries to get to his feet again. "I'm a little out of shape at the momment." a little?? ha! try you have a broken leg and several shards of rocks stabbed into your chest"I...needa little help."
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:08 pm
She picks him up in her arms and stands up
"Hold on, I'll get you inside."
She walks to the front door, bumps it open with her hip, then walks inside, carrying Vivi.
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:19 pm
(hats inner thoughts from here on in are going to be in Red)Damnit!! you freaking idiot, you could have just cast a stupid Healing spell but nooo, you had to be a big shot and go without it! now look at you!Damnit!! i should've casted a freaking spell! now look at me A tear begins to roll down his face in shame. "thanks Art, I owe you one." Looks up at her and smiles again as she helps him into the house.
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:22 pm
She smiles back
"It's no problem at all. You're my friend."
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:39 pm
damnit i'm too tired to cast a spell of healing"I'll pay you back some day soon, I swear." his voice trails off to a yawn. "i just need some sleep madam. I'm sorry to be such a burden Art."
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 9:44 pm
"You're not a burden at all. I've felt like a burden to you with all of my problems, so I guess we're even. You just rest up now. I'll watch over you."
She lies him down on the couch
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 10:01 pm
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 10:08 pm
Falls asleep soundly on the couch (see ya all, class at 9 >_<)
"zzz"
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