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 Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 5:26 pm
Great-grandpa floated towards the boat then he landed on the deck and he still looked like Abel. The ghosts that were in the sky followed after great-grandpa in a single filed line onto the boat."Let the ritual begin!" announced Abel's father. "This ritual could take hours to finish" Abel complain in his thoughts.
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:32 am
( sorry that i havent post in a while )
Jasmin was just smiling then hear someone knocking at our door she goes and awnser the door and their was 2 men that putt her inside a sack '' MELANIE , LAURA HELP'' Melanie hear that their sister was in trouble she runs as fast as she can and putt one of the men butt's on fire . Laura came slowly '' Hurry up slowpoke can u see our sister has been kidnapped '' Melanie shouted
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:23 pm
The ritual started like any other ancient ceremony for the dead without the campfire or bonfire being involved in any way. After that they talked to their dead relatives separately about how they were doing lately.
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 3:45 am
'' If you guys want to see ur sister again meet us in 1500 min with 10000$ at the alley ways if you dont come say goodbye to ur sister'' Both of the men walk away . Laura was panicing ''WHAT ARE WE GONNA DO '' Melanie make Laura stop panicing '' Wait i got to plan ''
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Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 1:25 pm
Jack causally walked towards Abel, "Have you wondered how the others are doing right now, Abel?" asked Jack as he passed by him. Abel answered him once he got the chance a few minutes later, "I thought about that a little but we could just ask them when we see them again tomorrow at school. Since we're leaving at dawn".
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 3:45 am
Melanie explain the plan to Laura '' Ok i got it '' Melanie start to get her weapoins '' WOAH WOAH !!!! Melanie werre gonna take our sister back not killing the men ... '' Shouted at Melanie '' Laura calm ur harmoons its a plan B in case the plan A didnt work '' Laura had a sweat mark on her forhead '' Melanie ur crazy ''
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 2:24 pm
The rest of the ritual went by slowly and it finally ended two hours after midnight. Once the ghosts left the boat and they said their good-byes to great grandpa, Abel and Jack yawned then stretched their arms out in the air. "Why don't you two get some sleep before we dock at the harbor later?" suggested Abel's Mom. "Alright, we will" Jack and Abel said at the same time then they went downstairs and laid down on their beds until they drifted off to sleep.
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 4:02 am
-A soccer ball rolls across them - Wait i got a ideal - Melanie picks up the soccer ball - That evolve soccer u know me Mel im not good at soccer - Laura looks down and said it - No No its not about you if i could do a distraction with the soccerball then you could get Yasmin out of their - Melanie said it with passion - Wait i got a ideal you distrack the guys with a soccerball then i could rescue Yasmin - Laura said it with sparkles in the backround while Melanie looks at her sweatdrop - Thats exacly what i said - Laura checks the time - Oh no time to go - Laura said while Melanie grab the soccerball - I wonder if Jack is alright - Melanie whispers to herself while Laura comes close to her - Who's Jack ????- Laura was verry curiouse - Jack is in the kendo club and in my gym class - Melanie said - Do u like Jack more then friends - Laura said while that Melanie left eye turn pink and her hair turns pink - Wellll................. - Nervously - U LIKE HIM !!!!! admit it - Laura said while she was exited - Ok ok i do - Melanie said it blushing -
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Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 3:33 pm
The boat exited barrier when dawn came around, it took another two hours to reach the harbor. Abel woke up first before Jack then pack his stuff along with Jack's things. "Well, we gave all the stuff that we wanted to give them" said Jack after he woke up. "Yeah, and now we're going straight back to school once we get back home" responded Abel then they made their way to the kitchen area for breakfast.
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:34 am
Ok never mind about that Laura we have our sister to save - Melanie said and Laura nods- Right lets go - Melanie and Laura went to the alley with the cash they see the boys and Yasmin on the floor - Well u guys show up u got the cash - One of the guys said - You got our sister - Melanie said and the other guy pick Yasmin up - Here she is - Melanie putt the suit case on the ground they grab the cash quick and Laura went to get her sister Melanie putt the soccer ball on the floor - Let me show u guys a couple of tricks about soccer - Melanie get their attention while Laura untied and rip the tape from her mouth - Ouch that hurt - Yasmin whispers - Ok all we want u too do is to tie them with the strongest branch u got - Laura whispers - Ok - Yasmin focus all her energy to het herd out of the ground and they tied to boys and Melanie kick the soccerball to their faces - GAME OVER !!!- All three said at the same time
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Posted: Wed Feb 17, 2010 3:13 pm
After they all finished their breakfast, Abel's dad called a taxi to take them home. Once, they arrived at Abel's house, Abel and Jack went their separate to their homes to get ready for school.
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 3:41 am
As soon as the guys went Yasmin check the time '' Oh no we better get ready to go to school lets go '' All three of them run home and get ready to go to school , but they take eachoder stuff '' Laura you got my stuff '' Melanie said while brushing her hair '' I do then Yasmin u got my stuff '' Laura shouted to Yasmin '' Ok ok '' Yasmin give her stuff to Laura and Laura give Melanie stuff to her '' And their ready they went out of the door and start walking to school
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 4:42 pm
Abel and Jack meet halfway to school once they were ready. "Hey, did you call Shin?" asked Jack eagerly. "No, did you?" answered Abel as they pedaled towards school. Jack shook his head, "I talk with him at school then" he replied. They locked their bikes to the bike rack and carried their bags over their shoulders after they arrived on school grounds.
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 6:16 pm
All three of them was at the school grounds they went to their lockers sepretly
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:32 pm
"Well, I have to get to math class and you have to get to your English class also" spoke Abel after they entered the school building. "Yeah, well see you at lunch then" responded Jack then they parted ways to their first class so they could be on time.
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