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 Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 5:42 am
It was mentioned that we get 3 characters at sometime I think. Blood, can you confirm this?
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Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:05 pm
You mean up to 3 characters? Yes. The max is 3 characters except for me because I have to have one in each area. And only one of those characters can be a general or headmaster unless I approve otherwise.
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 7:51 pm
[The Basics]
Your Gaianame: Giachianeo
Character's name: Geo Flash
Status: Light Student
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Race: Shapeshifter
Appearance: Is fairly tall mostly, and has tan skin. Likes to keep his hair blue, and allways wears raggedy white shorts. Has an unnaturally long toungue.
Height: 5'9"
Strengths: Can throw his golden daggers very well. Has a huge IQ, which was gained in his early years.
Weaknesses: Cannot be touched by ice, or it burns into his skin. It always will leave a scar, and because of that he has several.
Weapon(s): Ten small gold daggers on his belt.
Personality: Is mostly a good person, and very rightous. Follows anyone who will lead him, as long as somethings in it for him. Is nice to everyone who's nice to his friends. Which he lost. Crud. Isn't a very touchy person, so is fairly easy to hang out with.
Bio: Had forgotten his past. He wandered into an old cave where a man lived. He stayed with him for a long while, helping the man carry wood for the fire and collecting sap. He had went walking with the man one day, when a large bear attacked. He barely saved the mans life, but killed the bear. In return, the man gave him knives to train with. He was then sent to the academy.
Extra: Nope.
[The Stats]
Type of fighter: Close/ Long range
Kills: Killed a bear...
Wins/Losses/Tied: 0/0/0
Unique/Acquired Special abilities: Can shapeshift into any item that is alive. He can even create a creature purely of his imagination, but this tires him enormously.
Weapon(s): Small gold daggers, only about a half a foot long, with a small gem in each one. Got them from the man he stayed with before going to the academy.
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:42 pm
-Giachianeo [The Basics] Your Gaianame: Giachianeo Character's name: Geo Flash Status: Light Student Age: 13 Gender: Male Race: Shapeshifter Appearance: Is fairly tall, mostly likes to have blue hair and yellow eyes. Wears fairly raggedy clothes. {Is his hair long or short? What color is his skin? What color is his clothes? Is his clothes shorts or pants? Please use more detail.}Height: 5'9" Strengths: Can Shapeshift, Duh. Can throw knives very well, and is extremely smart. {Shapeshifting is not a strenght but an ablitly. Please elaborate on the others.}Weaknesses: Hates ice. If it touches him, it burns horribly. {Elaborate on the ice effects and add more. At least 1 more.}Weapon(s): Ten small daggers on his belt. {Give a slightly larger explaination, such as what are they made out of? How long are they?}Personality: Is mostly a good person, and very rightous. Follows anyone who will lead him, as long as somethings in it for him. Is nice to everyone who's nice to his friends. Which he lost. Crud. {Does he ever get angry? If so, how does he react then?}Bio: Had forgotten his past. He wandered into an old cave where a man lived. He stayed with him for a long while, helping the man carry wood for the fire and whatnot. In return, the man gave him knives to train with. He was then sent to the academy. {Please make longer, even if it's just details. Don't use whatnot. Whatnot can refer to anything, like bathing the man.}Extra: Nope. [The Stats] Type of fighter: Close/ Long range Kills: Killed a bird... Wins/Losses/Tied: 0/0/0 Unique/Acquired Special abilities: Has a long tongue that no matter how he shapes, he can't get rid of. Doesn't sticl out of his mouth unless he want's it to. {This is more of an Extra item. Ablilites refer to things he can do special such as magic or spells. Also refers to his ablilty to shapeshift.}Weapon(s): Little steel daggers, with a small gem in each one. {Add more detail. Use things such as lenght, color, handle design, and material. Also can include where he got them from.}Updated Extra: Okay I have added some small comments in red. I'm sorry if I sound picky I just would like to help inprove your character. He is very basic and not a bad idea but he needs a bit more creativity. If you need some ideas feel free to see some of the other profiles already made. These may help. P.s Please do not feel that I am picking on you. I have done this editing for others via PM before they posted.
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 7:58 pm
Wow, I just got semi-burned by voodoo. Kewl. And uhh, two sisters. Two very NAGGY sisters. That was practicly a comliment compared to them. xd
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Posted: Mon Mar 31, 2008 8:13 pm
Just be glad it was be and not Celeste that got here first. She would have made you write 8 pages more. >.< I love you Celeste!!
But yeah just edit the post and add those things and someone will go over it again.
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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 3:32 pm
Your Gaianame biggrin arkslayer1324 Character's name:Conrad Howard
Status:light General
Age:30
Gender:male
Race:human
Appearance:He a little bit of tan, about 6.4 feet tall , has one big scar on his right eye, and he has black hair
Height:6.4 feet
Strengths:sword fighting, strong attacks, great defence,
Weaknesses: Stamia
Weapon(s):sword, pike, and kantana
Personality:wise in war and strong personality, and make friends right away
Bio:hes gone through the ranks up to vice general then the general died and he took his place. he been through many battles also where most of his freinds died. he doesn't really talk about his past. It makes him said. If you ask him what happened to him he'd probably knock you out.
[The Stats]
Type of fighter:close range
Kills:0
Wins/Losses/Tied:0/0/0
Unique/Acquired Special abilities:teleportation
Weapon(s):piked club
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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 3:41 pm
Darkslayer1324 Your Gaianame biggrin arkslayer1324 Character's name:Conrad last name
Status:light General
Age:30
Gender:male
Race:human
Appearance:He a little bit of tan, about 6.4 feet tall and has one big scar on his right eye. More description, like hair color, and shape and size.
Height:6.4 feet
Strengths:sword fighting, strong attacks, great defence, good hider Make it more human. Give and take a few strengths and weakness.
Weaknesses: Stamia add another one.
Weapon(s):sword, pike, and kantana
Personality:wise and strong personality strong? Give more detail. How is he wise, does he make friends right away, or is he shy.
Bio:hes gone through the ranks up to vice general then the general died and he took his place. he been through many battles also where most of his freinds died. More detail. At least one paragragh long, bare mininum.
[The Stats]
Type of fighter:close range
Kills:0
Wins/Losses/Tied:0/0/0
Unique/Acquired Special abilities:teleportation
Weapon(s):piked club
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Updated Extra:
I suggest you look at other's to see how to correctly right it. edited by Atrum Krigare. Work on your detail. Edit it and someone will go over it again.
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Posted: Wed Apr 02, 2008 3:46 pm
Hey everyone, this is my little brother's account. I've looked it over and it checks out to me but I just want to be sure on this...
[The Basics]
Your Gaianame: Kaoru1632
Character's name: Teriel(Tear-E-ell) Sliver
Status: Light Solider
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Elemental Angels
Appearance: Teriel has coal gray hair and soft facial features, as well as deep slate gray eyes. He has slender dexteritous hands. and large Beautiful wings composed of feathers black as pitch and red as blood.
Height: 5'8''
Strengths: He is a quick thinker and usually fights with a clear head. Also has an excellent memory and attention to details.
Weaknesses: Most of the tiem he is clear headed but occasionally he has uncontrolable bouts of rage...these bouts tend to leave things in flame and ruin. He is incapable of using any fire attack from behind his back because of a fear of damaging his wings.
Weapon(s): He carries a set of dual swords, nicknamed smoke and fire. One is red and the other black, He can occasionally use the blade named fire to let loose a bolt of flame.
Personality: Teriel is a kindly person and makes friends easy, but occasionally he gets arrogant and mean tempered.
Bio: Teriel is a straggling survivour of the Sliver family and is traumatized by the sight of the murders his brother Abrien commited, the Trauma seems to have developed a split personality of sorts that makes him unpredictable at times.
Extra: Teriel is Abrien's little brother, he wishes to fight Abrien someday.
[The Stats]
Type of fighter: Close-Long Ranger
Kills: 4
Wins/Losses/Tied: 1/2/0
Unique/Acquired Special abilities:Fire Manipulation-The ability to control fire. The fire if mastered has five properties. First property is normal fire in which it burns any who is touched by it. The second is the red flame in which the user uses all his rage to make the fire hotter and more explosive. The third is the blue flame which is activated by the will to protect. It is the highest ranking of fire in terms of temperature. The fourth is known as the black flame which burns with evil intent. It continues to burn at the spot it lands on for days. The last is the white flame which has no heat to it at all. What it does is purifies cursed weapons, and other curse like spells. Weak to water.
Angry mode-A mode where the user begins relying on pure instinct and reflex, causing them to charge into battles head first. This mode will increase all physical attributes to the sacrifice of rational thinking. Usually due to its reckless tendencies the user usually will ignore any pain inflicted on themselves. Also causes the user to challenge anyone to a fight.
Dirty Fighting Techniques-When angry, the user tends to become completely relentless, and goes so far as to try to kill.
Weapon(s):
-- The twin blades Smoke and Fire, One black one red. Teriel is the only person who can touch them with out being scalded. Smoke can release a black puff to temporarily blind/disorient the enemy and Fire can shoot a small bolt of weak flame.
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:53 pm
Gee, thanks voodoo, sweetheart. My profile isn't that long either! I just respect the power of detail! That's all! Besides, I was in Greece, so my hands were tied.
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 6:46 pm
Hey I updated my Laila profile to better accomidate her teaching posts...
Voodoo, could you read what I have to make sure it works before I have Laila apply for the teaching posts I mentioned?
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 12:41 am
Giachianeo [The Basics] Your Gaianame: Giachianeo Character's name: Geo Flash Status: Light Student Age: 13 Gender: Male Race: Shapeshifter Appearance: Is fairly tall mostly, and has tan skin. Likes to keep his hair blue, and allways wears raggedy white shorts. Has an unnaturally long toungue. {Better but you only added the details that I suggested. Try adding more. It's going to be hard for us to picture him. Right now My character would see him as just barely taller then her with skin her color and blue hair with a long tounge. This is a rather plain discribtion. Try to jazz him up and make him seem real, like he's standing in front of you.}Height: 5'9" Strengths: Can throw his golden daggers very well. Has a huge IQ, which was gained in his early years. {Better strenghts but you might want to elborate more. Plus very well isn't a good term to be used for a student. You might want to say something rather about him having a good acuaturacy instead. As for the IQ, give an example. Is it book smarts across the board, or just in oe subject?}Weaknesses: Cannot be touched by ice, or it burns into his skin. It always will leave a scar, and because of that he has several. {You elborated on the ice but you forgot to add one more.}Weapon(s): Ten small gold daggers on his belt. Personality: Is mostly a good person, and very rightous. Follows anyone who will lead him, as long as somethings in it for him. Is nice to everyone who's nice to his friends. Which he lost. Crud. Isn't a very touchy person, so is fairly easy to hang out with. Bio: Had forgotten his past. He wandered into an old cave where a man lived. He stayed with him for a long while, helping the man carry wood for the fire and collecting sap. He had went walking with the man one day, when a large bear attacked. He barely saved the mans life, but killed the bear. In return, the man gave him knives to train with. He was then sent to the academy. Extra: Nope. [The Stats] Type of fighter: Close/ Long range Kills: Killed a bear... Wins/Losses/Tied: 0/0/0 Unique/Acquired Special abilities: Can shapeshift into any item that is alive. He can even create a creature purely of his imagination, but this tires him enormously. Weapon(s): Small gold daggers, only about a half a foot long, with a small gem in each one. Got them from the man he stayed with before going to the academy. {Much better. You're getting there.}Atrum krigare Darkslayer1324 Your Gaianame biggrin arkslayer1324 Character's name:Conrad last name
Status:light General
Age:30
Gender:male
Race:human
Appearance:He a little bit of tan, about 6.4 feet tall and has one big scar on his right eye. More description, like hair color, and shape and size.
Height:6.4 feet {Is this 6 feet and 4 inches or 6 feet and 4.8 inches? You have it as the second one. [6'4"] is the first one}
Strengths:sword fighting, strong attacks, great defence, good hider Make it more human. Give and take a few strengths and weakness. {I wouldn't say more human but use more detail and sword fighting is an ovious if he is a general. We know he'd be good with his weapon. Strong attacks however leaves the mind to wander. How is he strong. Are they acuerate hits or are they powerful? Great defence? So he can block? Or does that mean dodge? A good hider? Please elborate on this.}
Weaknesses: Stamia add another one. {Also elborate on Stamina. How is this bad?}
Weapon(s):sword, pike, and kantana {DETAILS!!! Also how does he carry all three?}
Personality:wise and strong personality strong? Give more detail. How is he wise, does he make friends right away, or is he shy.
Bio:hes gone through the ranks up to vice general then the general died and he took his place. he been through many battles also where most of his freinds died. More detail. At least one paragragh long, bare mininum.
[The Stats]
Type of fighter:close range
Kills:0
Wins/Losses/Tied:0/0/0
Unique/Acquired Special abilities:teleportation {Details. Distance/ limits?}
Weapon(s):piked club {What happened to the other two???Also details.}
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I suggest you look at other's to see how to correctly right it. edited by Atrum Krigare.
Voodoo edits added in indigo Work on your detail. Edit it and someone will go over it again. Abrien Sliver Hey everyone, this is my little brother's account. I've looked it over and it checks out to me but I just want to be sure on this...
[The Basics]
Your Gaianame: Kaoru1632
Character's name: Teriel(Tear-E-ell) Sliver
Status: Light Solider
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Elemental Angels
Appearance: Teriel has coal gray hair and soft facial features, as well as deep slate gray eyes. He has slender dexteritous hands. and large Beautiful wings composed of feathers black as pitch and red as blood.{Are these wings small or large?}
Height: 5'8''
Strengths: He is a quick thinker and usually fights with a clear head. Also has an excellent memory and attention to details.{Memory of reading, hearing, sight, or all three?}
Weaknesses: Most of the time he is clear headed but occasionally he has uncontrolable bouts of rage...these bouts tend to leave things in flame and ruin. He is incapable of using any fire attack from behind his back because of a fear of damaging his wings.
Weapon(s): He carries a set of dual swords, nicknamed smoke and fire. One is red and the other black, He can occasionally use the blade named fire to let loose a bolt of flame.
Personality: Teriel is a kindly person and makes friends easy, but occasionally he gets arrogant and mean tempered.
Bio: Teriel is a straggling survivour of the Sliver family and is traumatized by the sight of the murders his brother Abrien commited, the Trauma seems to have developed a split personality of sorts that makes him unpredictable at times.{Add more details please.}
Extra: Teriel is Abrien's little brother, he wishes to fight Abrien someday.
[The Stats]
Type of fighter: Close-Long Ranger
Kills: 4
Wins/Losses/Tied: 1/2/0
Unique/Acquired Special abilities:Fire Manipulation-The ability to control fire. The fire if mastered has five properties. First property is normal fire in which it burns any who is touched by it. The second is the red flame in which the user uses all his rage to make the fire hotter and more explosive. The third is the blue flame which is activated by the will to protect. It is the highest ranking of fire in terms of temperature. The fourth is known as the black flame which burns with evil intent. It continues to burn at the spot it lands on for days. The last is the white flame which has no heat to it at all. What it does is purifies cursed weapons, and other curse like spells. Weak to water.
Angry mode-A mode where the user begins relying on pure instinct and reflex, causing them to charge into battles head first. This mode will increase all physical attributes to the sacrifice of rational thinking. Usually due to its reckless tendencies the user usually will ignore any pain inflicted on themselves. Also causes the user to challenge anyone to a fight.
Dirty Fighting Techniques-When angry, the user tends to become completely relentless, and goes so far as to try to kill.
Weapon(s):
-- The twin blades Smoke and Fire, One black one red. Teriel is the only person who can touch them with out being scalded. Smoke can release a black puff to temporarily blind/disorient the enemy and Fire can shoot a small bolt of weak flame.
Updated Extra:
All of my edits are added in indigo this time. Again just edit your original post and let us know and we will read over it. Hey I'm getting better with detail! Look ^^^ I said add more detail like 100 times. I know. How was it?? Did you take pictures????? Yeah I'll go read, Yuffie. BRB. EDIT::Yup Yup Yuffie it's good.
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:12 pm
Mmks. I will go have her apply for those jobs now =)
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Posted: Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:37 pm
I'm so jelous! xd Was Greece awesome?
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Posted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 4:17 am
I have fixed my profile I hope it's alright.
The Basics]
Your Gaianame: Kaoru1632
Character's name: Teriel(Tear-E-ell) Sliver
Status: Light Solider
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Elemental Angels
Appearance: Teriel has coal gray hair and soft facial features, as well as deep slate gray eyes. He has slender dexteritous hands. and an immense set of Beautiful wings composed of feathers black as pitch and red as blood.
Height: 5'8''
Strengths: He is a quick thinker and usually fights with a clear head. Also has an excellent memory, it is rare that he forgets orders or a person, often he can dipict who a person is based off their Silhouette and sound of voice even after only one encounter and attention to detail.
Weaknesses: Most of the time he is clear headed but occasionally he has uncontrolable bouts of rage...these bouts tend to leave things in flame and ruin. He is incapable of using any fire attack from behind his back because of a fear of damaging his wings.
Weapon(s): He carries a set of dual swords, nicknamed smoke and fire. One is red and the other black, He can occasionally use the blade named fire to let loose a bolt of flame.
Personality: Teriel is a kindly person and makes friends easy, but occasionally he gets arrogant and mean tempered.
Bio: Teriel is a straggling survivour of the Sliver family and is traumatized by the sight of the murders his brother Abrien commited, the Trauma seems to have developed a myriad of mental disorders going from Dementia to schizophrenia, they disorders are odd because they are only triggered by things that remind him of the murders, this makes him unpredictable at times.
Extra: Teriel is Abrien's little brother, he wishes to fight Abrien someday.
[The Stats]
Type of fighter: Close-Long Ranger
Kills: 4
Wins/Losses/Tied: 1/2/0
Unique/Acquired Special abilities:Fire Manipulation-The ability to control fire. The fire if mastered has five properties. First property is normal fire in which it burns any who is touched by it. The second is the red flame in which the user uses all his rage to make the fire hotter and more explosive. The third is the blue flame which is activated by the will to protect. It is the highest ranking of fire in terms of temperature. The fourth is known as the black flame which burns with evil intent. It continues to burn at the spot it lands on for days. The last is the white flame which has no heat to it at all. What it does is purifies cursed weapons, and other curse like spells. Weak to water.
Angry mode-A mode where the user begins relying on pure instinct and reflex, causing them to charge into battles head first. This mode will increase all physical attributes to the sacrifice of rational thinking. Usually due to its reckless tendencies the user usually will ignore any pain inflicted on themselves. Also causes the user to challenge anyone to a fight.
Dirty Fighting Techniques-When angry, the user tends to become completely relentless, and goes so far as to try to kill.
Weapon(s):
-- The twin blades Smoke and Fire, One black one red. Teriel is the only person who can touch them with out being scalded. Smoke can release a black puff to temporarily blind/disorient the enemy and Fire can shoot a small bolt of weak flame.
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