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Shuichi Vash-kun

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Posted: Thu Oct 27, 2005 3:51 pm

Ok time for a serious one. This has suicide in it and I will say now that I am strongly against suicide. I believe it's wrong and the coward's way out. This is Trigun too so as a disclaimer I don't own Trigun. Well here goes:

Enough
By: Shuichi vash-kun

I could not take it anymore.

Blood coats the walls and stains the floor.

As my mind begins to fade,

I think back to the life I made.

Full of torture, hate, and crime.

I wandered through a world of grime.

I had never taken any lives,

until I met a man named Knives.

He showed me what an eden the world could be.

Then he said he wanted me.

He threw me down and took me there.

His fingers buried in my hair.

I finally had a meaning in life.

But it soon was fraught with pain and strife.

I don't know why I want to die.

I've just been living one big lie.

And so I feel I should say at last,

Thank you Knives, I had a blast.

-Legato +

Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 5:15 pm

Shuichi Vash-kun

Ok time for a serious one. This has suicide in it and I will say now that I am strongly against suicide. I believe it's wrong and the coward's way out. This is Trigun too so as a disclaimer I don't own Trigun. Well here goes:

Enough
By: Shuichi vash-kun

I could not take it anymore.

Blood coats the walls and stains the floor.

As my mind begins to fade,

I think back to the life I made.

Full of torture, hate, and crime.

I wandered through a world of grime.

I had never taken any lives,

until I met a man named Knives.

He showed me what an eden the world could be.

Then he said he wanted me.

He threw me down and took me there.

His fingers buried in my hair.

I finally had a meaning in life.

But it soon was fraught with pain and strife.

I don't know why I want to die.

I've just been living one big lie.

And so I feel I should say at last,

Thank you Knives, I had a blast.

-Legato +

Thats exactly how i feel, except the thought of my family keeps me from doing it.

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Kusa-chan
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Posted: Fri Oct 28, 2005 6:43 pm

That is one awesome piece! xd Thank you for sharing it! heart

Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:48 pm

Shuichi, your lines, about when they did IT, gave me chills. I really liked it.

*blush* I-I'm not a prevert...It just sounded really nice!!

Really!!!

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Shuichi Vash-kun

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Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:24 pm

Ha ha thank you everyone for your kind words. I was just really depressed that day so I wrote that to get rid of the feeling. I'll post some more stuff here as I think of it since you all like it so much. *Bows* Domo arigato gozai masu!

Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2005 5:11 pm

I have a poem that I would like to share.It's not based on any anime characters but it's about someone I had a crush on in school a while ago and it was after I realized he didn't like me, so i wrote a poem to let out my emotions.If that's not allowed or if you guys don't want to hear it,then it's ok.

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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 12:11 am

Heero 101

I have a poem that I would like to share.It's not based on any anime characters but it's about someone I had a crush on in school a while ago and it was after I realized he didn't like me, so i wrote a poem to let out my emotions.If that's not allowed or if you guys don't want to hear it,then it's ok.

I think that's what this thread is for, my poem wasn't about anime characters at all. Vashie knows that,so I'm sure your poem will be just fine here.

Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 3:11 am

Oh,ok.Thanks.Well, here it is.It doesn't have a title as of yet as well.

Empty faces pass me by
Deaf and silent to my cry
I shuffle through the crowded halls
People around me,big or small

But none matter most to me
Except my blond-haired fantasy
Peaceful and pure,from his toes to his mouth
Beautiful to look at,without a doubt

He brightens my mood,makes me smile
Makes the trouble worth the while
Brushes the sleep from my eyes
Leaves me dazed and hypnotized

But this treasure is far from reach
A lesson that's there,only to teach
The path I see,but never to cross
Looking on at a painful loss

But I am still happy,all the same
Just to be able to know his name
And speak it out in a friendly gesture
Without having to feel the pressure

And my thoughts and feelins will stay to myself
And I'll just be thankful for my health
Waking up at the peak of dawn
Because I know life goes on

Hope you guys enjoyed it.

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Agotha Fang

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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:02 am

All the poems are so wonderful! i love them all! maybe i'll share some of mine... maybe sweatdrop

Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 4:57 pm

Heero 101

Oh,ok.Thanks.Well, here it is.It doesn't have a title as of yet as well.

Empty faces pass me by
Deaf and silent to my cry
I shuffle through the crowded halls
People around me,big or small

But none matter most to me
Except my blond-haired fantasy
Peaceful and pure,from his toes to his mouth
Beautiful to look at,without a doubt

He brightens my mood,makes me smile
Makes the trouble worth the while
Brushes the sleep from my eyes
Leaves me dazed and hypnotized

But this treasure is far from reach
A lesson that's there,only to teach
The path I see,but never to cross
Looking on at a painful loss

But I am still happy,all the same
Just to be able to know his name
And speak it out in a friendly gesture
Without having to feel the pressure

And my thoughts and feelins will stay to myself
And I'll just be thankful for my health
Waking up at the peak of dawn
Because I know life goes on

Hope you guys enjoyed it.

Oh wow that was wonderful..I loved it. I think you've got great talent.

Shuichi Vash-kun

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Nirvanha

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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 5:09 pm

Shuichi Vash-kun

Heero 101

Oh,ok.Thanks.Well, here it is.It doesn't have a title as of yet as well.

Empty faces pass me by
Deaf and silent to my cry
I shuffle through the crowded halls
People around me,big or small

But none matter most to me
Except my blond-haired fantasy
Peaceful and pure,from his toes to his mouth
Beautiful to look at,without a doubt

He brightens my mood,makes me smile
Makes the trouble worth the while
Brushes the sleep from my eyes
Leaves me dazed and hypnotized

But this treasure is far from reach
A lesson that's there,only to teach
The path I see,but never to cross
Looking on at a painful loss

But I am still happy,all the same
Just to be able to know his name
And speak it out in a friendly gesture
Without having to feel the pressure

And my thoughts and feelins will stay to myself
And I'll just be thankful for my health
Waking up at the peak of dawn
Because I know life goes on

Hope you guys enjoyed it.

Oh wow that was wonderful..I loved it. I think you've got great talent.

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Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 7:56 pm

Thanks.I just wanted to get my feelings down and that was the best way I could do it.

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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 9:58 am

Heero 101

Thanks.I just wanted to get my feelings down and that was the best way I could do it.

It was very good and If I may suggest a title? "Unattainable Love"

Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:13 am

Now here's a new one from me.

MIDNIGHT

Your sweetness on my lips,
Your song of ecstacy fills my ears.

My pulse thunders in my veins
My eyes fill with joyous tears.

You lips like butterflies of love
Bestow gentle kisses so warm.

As I make my offering love
On the altar of your form.

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Shuichi Vash-kun

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Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 1:04 pm

Oh wow that was beautiful...I loved it..so light and airy..mmm makes my brain float with inspiration! xd

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