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 Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2009 11:53 pm
The wolf would control water until I merge it with my body. I wouldn't turn into the wolf I would summon it, but its ok. I'll change it I guess.
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 4:36 am
xx__CBK__xx I also want to know why all of a sudden people need to specify the decent of their characters.
No one cares.
It bothers me because that means people are paying attention to such.
Which is stupid.
Anyone that cares is stupid.
Who cares where your family is from, or what you look like? The only thing about someone's appearance that I pay any attention to is whether or not I find them attractive. Which seems shallow, but it's an automatic thing so don't start with me.
I'll kick your head off.
'Kay thanks.
Edit;;
To make myself happy, I changed it so that it just says human. Like it's SUPPOSED to. Now be nice. lol, Specifying the decent of a person adds to the whole description of appearance and can also be used in the establishment of a character's background story.If the writer wants to make that a detail, he/she should, it's not like it's hurting anyone, and it doesn't make any one stupid for wanting to know, either. Oshin Masaki The wolf would control water until I merge it with my body. I wouldn't turn into the wolf I would summon it, but its ok. I'll change it I guess. And I believe the confusion is over the specific use of the wolf. Is the wolf actually your Buso Renkin, or is it just there? If it's just there, I suggest dropping the wolf entirely and say your Buso Renkin is an orb that lets you control water, but if you run with the wolf thing, then you'd have to specify that in your Buso Renkin's description.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 9:48 am
Nozomu Smythe _______________________________________________________________Name: Nozomu Smythe
Nickname: Nomu.
Gender: Male
Race: Human (half Japanese half American yes I'm mixing things up here)
Birthdate: January 18th
Age: 20
Blood type: B-
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Occupation: Teacher at Gensei Academy
Mode of Transportation: Custom 1970 Plymouth Roadrunner but if that's in the shop then public transportation friends or walking.
Hobbies: Driving, work on his car, and being with his friends.
Motto: Like farming you wait for the time...to strike!
Appearance: Long black hair bangs down to his eyebrows and down to the center of his back. A black sleeveless shirt black pants two red wrist bands and black steel toed boots with the steel on the outside and the inside.
Personality: Usually relaxed, but in battle completely focused on his opponent. one of his pet peeves is when you point out his name is contradictory.
Background: As a boy Nozomu grew up on a farm as a simple farm boy. At the age of ten he was attacked by a homunclus. Thus the scar on his face.But in his early teens he moved into the city he attended gensei Academy after graduating he evenutally wound up working there now as a teacher. Due to him getting attacked while being young at the ages of 18 and on his 20th birthday he was attacked but he managed to get away. He was found two weeks after the third attack by the regiment. They figured with training he could be a useful fighter. Being a Teacher at Gensei is his cover job.
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Who you Fight for: The Alchemist
Rank: Warrior in training
Team: N/A
Rival(s): N/A
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Kakugane Serial Number: N/A
Name of Primary Kakugane: The Harvester
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: The cutting edge of the blade is laced with a potent poison to homuncli but a potent cure of the same poison if the chemicals are slightly altered.
Image of your Buso Renkin: 
Other Equipment: He carrys a few knives in his pocket.
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Theme song: Stand here with me-Creed
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:08 am
NeoPaladinOfLight xx__CBK__xx I also want to know why all of a sudden people need to specify the decent of their characters.
No one cares.
It bothers me because that means people are paying attention to such.
Which is stupid.
Anyone that cares is stupid.
Who cares where your family is from, or what you look like? The only thing about someone's appearance that I pay any attention to is whether or not I find them attractive. Which seems shallow, but it's an automatic thing so don't start with me.
I'll kick your head off.
'Kay thanks.
Edit;;
To make myself happy, I changed it so that it just says human. Like it's SUPPOSED to. Now be nice. lol, Specifying the decent of a person adds to the whole description of appearance and can also be used in the establishment of a character's background story.If the writer wants to make that a detail, he/she should, it's not like it's hurting anyone, and it doesn't make any one stupid for wanting to know, either. I say it does. Paying attention to race is stupid.
I don't want people to try an twist it into sympathy points.{It's happened plenty of times before.}
I don't care what you look like or what you believe. I'll still act like a total jerk if I feel like it.
But whatever. NeoPaladinOfLight Oshin Masaki The wolf would control water until I merge it with my body. I wouldn't turn into the wolf I would summon it, but its ok. I'll change it I guess. And I believe the confusion is over the specific use of the wolf. Is the wolf actually your Buso Renkin, or is it just there? If it's just there, I suggest dropping the wolf entirely and say your Buso Renkin is an orb that lets you control water, but if you run with the wolf thing, then you'd have to specify that in your Buso Renkin's description. No.
Water's been done.
Even if it wasn't by me, I'd still want you to change it.
I don't approve of anything with the same ability. A Buso Renkin can't have the same ability as someone else's. Not possible.
And I STILL don't see what a wolf has to do with water.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 11:35 am
xx__CBK__xx I say it does. Paying attention to race is stupid.
I don't want people to try an twist it into sympathy points.{It's happened plenty of times before.}
I don't care what you look like or what you believe. I'll still act like a total jerk if I feel like it.
But whatever. That's fine, just as long as you don't go about banning people from telling the ethnicity of their character, you can complain all you want. I personally find that kinda silly, but that's just me. xx__CBK__xx No.
Water's been done.
Even if it wasn't by me, I'd still want you to change it.
I don't approve of anything with the same ability. A Buso Renkin can't have the same ability as someone else's. Not possible. Now that I'm willing to agree with. Duplicate powers would get outta hand, so yeah,
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:05 pm
Uh is anyone gonna approve/disapprove of my character.
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:02 pm
Tanis Mizu Uh is anyone gonna approve/disapprove of my character. Where's the background?
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:20 pm
xx__CBK__xx Tanis Mizu Uh is anyone gonna approve/disapprove of my character. Where's the background? That's it up there for now i have a bit of writers block. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 7:53 pm
Oshin Masaki  _______________________________________________________________ Name: Oshin Masaki
Nickname: Mo-Mo
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Birthdate: December 23
Age: 18
Blood type: O-
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Occupation: High School student and Store Clerk
Mode of Transportation: Bus and friends
Hobbies: Watching the ocean, swimming, hiking, dressing up other people
Motto: "You seem a little cold."
Appearance: Oshin is a short and has a very slender body type. He has long lightly blue hair and glasses because she is near-sited. She is usually in navy blue and sky blue dress with a very short pair of pants on under it, in the same color.
Personality: Oshin is a very quiet and soft voiced person and almost never speaks her mind unless shes with her close friends.
Background: Oshin was a very quite person even growing up as a child. She had a normal amount of friends which almost always said the same thing about her when asked "Shes has a very low voice." She moved away from her family to live with her aunt at the age of 13 because of a problem between her mother and her, she left behind her mother, father and younger sister; but this caused her to fall behind a year in school. Oshin began studying medical books at the young age of 14 after she was encouraged by her aunt. Not long after that she began to study fashon as a personal thing which ended up lander her a job at the local clothing store in Ginsei. Oshin is also near-sighted and wears glasses.
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Who you Fight for: The Alchemist
Rank: Warrior in Training
Team: None at the moment
Rival(s): Red Masaki
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Kakugane Serial Number: LVI
Name of Primary Kakugane: Buso Renkin: Crescent Moons
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: The crescent moons give temporary invisibility to Oshin. During battle her weapons can also become invisible, but she can only make one thing invisible at a time either herself or her weapons.
Image of your Buso Renkin:
Other Equipment: A sealed vile of water given to her by her aunt.
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Theme song: Utada Hikaru - Sakura Drops
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Posted: Fri Jul 03, 2009 8:00 pm
Oshin, you're good to go.
Tanis, I'd like to see a little more background before you get down to business. If you're having trouble with coming up with something to put there, just tell about how and why you joined up with the Alchemists.
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:20 pm
Cruix  _______________________________________________________________ Name: Cruix
Nickname: ‘The Fated Maiden’
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Birthdate: December 24th
Age: Mid- twenties
Blood type: RH+
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Occupation: Medium/ Gypsy
Mode of Transportation: Her feet and any other form that is nearby
Hobbies: Playing with her tarot cards, finding out a person’s fate and future.
Motto: “I can see… The world through these eyes.”
Appearance: Hip-length ebony hair that curls and winds wildly with bangs that fall slightly over illuminating crimson-colored eyes that are ringed with darker and darker shades of red, her skin is a soft tan with many unique symbols decorating her body. 5,7“½, 129lbs.
Personality: She is silent most of the time, but when she does indeed speak, her words are poetic. Her personality is something that can only be described as unconventional. She can be either very sweet and kind or sullen and somber. She was described as ‘Bipolar’, but in truth, she was influenced by the many souls that have entered her over the many years.
Background:
26 years ago in the streets of New Orleans, Louisiana…
The only daughter of a world renowned medium artist and an alchemist was born. She was given the unusual name of Cruix and was brought up around the paranormal and strange from the day of conception, unknowingly marking her to take the same path as her father and become an alchemist. After her mother’s death, she then took over the family business to keep it afloat, taking care of her father who suffers from dementia. Yet very soon after her 20th birthday, her father committed suicide, saying that he could no longer live without his wife and knowing that he was no useless. Cruix went into a state of emotional shock that caused her to be bed ridden for a entire year…
3 years ago, she was called by a mysterious man that told her that she was letting her talents go to waste. She was told to move to a town called Ginsei and to await further instruction. So, she did. She took the little possessions that hadn’t burned in the fire that her father had used to kill himself and moved to Ginsei and joined the group of Alchemists that resided there.
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Who you Fight for: Alchemists
Rank: N/A
Team: N/A
Rival(s): Shiori BloodMoon
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Kakugane Serial Number: XXII
Name of Primary Kakugane:
Lex
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin:
Lex has the ability to summon all of the 22 major Arcana from the Fool to the world and each has a certain ability that aids her in her fight:
Number Name
0 The Fool
1 The Magician, The Mountebank, or The Juggler
2 The High Priestess
3 The Empress
4 The Emperor
5 The Hierophant
6 The Lovers
7 The Chariot
8 or 11 Strength
9 The Hermit
10 Wheel of Fortune
11 or 8 Justice
12 The Hanged Man or The Traitor
13 Death or The Trump with No Name
14 Temperance
15 The Devil
16 The Tower
17 The Star
18 The Moon
19 The Sun
20 Judgment
21 The World
She may only use one card at a time and can only be activated with the use of blood. 1 pint for each card used, so that 3 cards can be used a day.
Image of your Buso Renkin:
Other Equipment:
None.
_______________________________________________________________
Theme song: “Poison” Groove Coverage
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Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:45 pm
"Hm....interesting power, mind sending me a pm of the cards abilities so I can make a final verduct?"
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:50 am
I decided to add another rule. I thought it was implied, but don't post in a profile thread that isn't yours. They're not meant to be used for casual conversation.
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:32 am
Leon Lamaitre _______________________________________________________________Name: [Leon T. Lamaitre]
Nickname: ['Tai' and 'Reece']
Gender: [Male]
Race: [Human]
Birthdate: [September 3]
Age: [19]
Blood type: [O]
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Occupation: [Street Performer and Poker Player]
Mode of Transportation: [Skateboard, or motorcycle]
Hobbies: [Playing guitar, cooking, skating, swimming, and playing poker]
Motto: ["It's better to be underestimated rather than overestimated."]
Appearance: [He's roughly 6 feet tall, has dark blonde hair, is slightly toned, and has milky white-green eyes. He tends to wear a old, frayed jacket, has several scars covering his body, including one across his face, and he has two tattoos. Tribal tattoos covering both of his arms, and a yin yang symbol covering most of his back,]
Personality: [Leon is a quiet and shy guy, who tends to keep himself more often than not. Despite his shyness though, he jokes around a lot, and doesn't give care at all what others think of him. He could walk down the street wearing nothing but heart boxers and a top hat while tap dancing with a grin on his face.
He has a hard time trusting anyone, but when he trusts someone, he'll be tight with them. He's also rather protective of any friends he has, defending them or backing them up no matter the odds.]
Background: [Leon can't remember anything before the age of 16 because of a gunshot wound to the head. According to the doctors, he had been defending a young couple from a mugger, and when the man shot him in the head, he slipped into a coma for a good three years. With this knowledge, and not knowing any family, he decided to live in the city he woke up in. After therapy and such, he acquired a job as a cook at a hotel, quickly becoming head chef.
He soon acquired an interest for poker, and at the age of 18, he entered a poker tournament, with the hotel owner paying for his buy-in (Leon couldn't afford it), with first place winning a whooping four million. He won first place (but just barely). He donated a million to good will, and paid the hotel owner a million for helping him through the years. He kept the other two million for himself. One night, he was practicing energy manipulation, and he ended up pushing himself too far by trying out a new idea. He almost died, but got extremely lucky, and simply went 'blind'.]
_______________________________________________________________
Who you Fight for: [Alchemist]
Rank: [Warrior in Training]
Team: [N/A]
Rival(s): [No one]
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Kakugane Serial Number: [N/A]
Name of Primary Kakugane: [Inochi no Ketsueki: Life blood. He tends to call it 'Kets' for short.]
Special Ability Of your Buso Renkin: [It allows him to control energy, which allows him to do things from hastening or completely healing a wound, to electrifying an object. And, ever since the incident, his Buso Renkin allows him to 'see' energy.]
Image of your Buso Renkin: [His jade necklace]
Other Equipment: [A white cane with a blade hidden in it, a .50 revolver, and a custom deck that he's traced with energy so he can 'read' the cards (but only when he touches it...seeing them face down would be cheating!)]
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Theme song: (Don't Fear) The Reaper - Blue Oyster Cult
[Hope this is all dandy, =] ]
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NeoPaladinOfLight Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 5:34 am
It looks pretty good. Decent background, nice character. The only thing you really need to do is pick a number for your kakugane. It's no big deal, just the way we keep up with members in the guild. Look at the list and choose a number that's not taken. Then you'll be good to go.
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