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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2010 9:09 pm
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Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:52 pm
Hi there!
I really like his personality; most of the virtues and flaws flow very nicely into each other. However, I have a single question: I'm not sure how being a "Loyal Confidant," particularly as you've described it, is a flaw. It sounds as if he doesn't really let it get in the way of his moral values, nor does he avoid telling people about it when they're wrong. I actually see this sort of behavior as being reminiscent of doctor/patient or confessor/sinner confidentiality, and not at all negative. I think perhaps describing how it's a negative more precisely, or making it a virtue would be a good idea?
Just a suggestion. Much love for somewhat oblivious men of science. heart
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Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2010 10:43 am
Thanks bunches ... and I will definitely explain its more negative light. I am really happy the flaws and virtues flow together, it took forever to get them right!
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Posted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:33 am
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:38 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2011 7:38 pm
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 8:46 am
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:18 pm
Hey, could you link to the source of Xander's page name? I can't find a Tortall other than the one in Tamora Pierce's books )= and I'm not sure it applies?
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:20 pm
shibrogane Hey, could you link to the source of Xander's page name? I can't find a Tortall other than the one in Tamora Pierce's books )= and I'm not sure it applies? That where I got it from, if I need to I'll change it XD
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:22 pm
Quote: Naming: Knights draw their powers from the wonders of planets they were sworn to guard. These can be... ...real natural landmarks on Earth or other planets, ...manmade cities and structures that are at least a thousand years old, ...or mythological places. Chances are the place is a myth on Earth because it's a real location on another planet. I don't see where a fictional place that's less than 20 years old would fit into this? =( Sorry to be a downer.
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Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2011 7:26 pm
shibrogane Quote: Naming: Knights draw their powers from the wonders of planets they were sworn to guard. These can be... ...real natural landmarks on Earth or other planets, ...manmade cities and structures that are at least a thousand years old, ...or mythological places. Chances are the place is a myth on Earth because it's a real location on another planet. I don't see where a fictional place that's less than 20 years old would fit into this? =( Sorry to be a downer. So not a problem, totally open to suggestions, just wanting him to be a pluto, for the place im cool with anything so long as i can spell it <3
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