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 Posted: Fri Jan 07, 2011 7:25 pm
It's good, I can only spot two problems, He seems a little too perfect (personality wise), everyone has some sort of personality flaws, even if he did live a good life (This is only my opinion, if you like it, stick with it). The other problem would be that you used one color all the way through, in the layout it says at one point, to pick a different color.
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 6:43 am
about the color: oopsie haha
about the personality: I agree with that, but I wasn't sure how to give him maybe a dark past.... I'll get working on that right away!
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Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:24 am
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