Ok, sorry about that. I got a
bit caught up in things.
Anyway, I think we can think
of the observational force
later. Let's get on with the
main story.
So, we have Illo and Melani
training, Donovan doing something
(What's he doing at this time?),
Eva in regular world doing her
Eva thing and trying to break
Melani away from Illo, and the
Evaverse characters seeking
to unify Dovelette and Don
(right?). Nebz has said that
Alt. Illo, before he got turned
dark by alt. Eva, had gotten to
80% mastery of his ability.
That in itself puts him light years
ahead of current time Illo with
only 5% control. Each time
Illo enters the Bardo he comes
out with a power increase. I'd
like to change how Illo knows
about his alternate self to him
seeing him in a vision while
trying to go back in (Melani can
be taking a break from a hard
day's training when this happens).
Now, I plan on having Illo meet
Donovan very soon, seeing as
he could sense the fight the two
of them had (spoiler!), and sort
of take him under his wing
(phoenix wing! XD). Would you
rather Illo know Donovan already,
or should he be a side character
to Illo? Someone who is close
to Melani and not much else but
an innocent that must be saved.
If we have it take place much
farther in the future, Illo will be
stronger, and aside from opening
up more missions for power increase
in between there, it would make the
fight between the two Illos more
intense, as the Dark Illo has 80%
Phoenix
and kishin powers.
