Kalile Alako
In english, we had to write a poem using the first stanza of another poem. It also had to be about ourselves somehow. So, naturally, I chose to represent myself as a violinist. I know this technically isn't music talk, but I'd like to get a feel for how accurate my descriptions are, from other violinists.
Have you ever seen
Anything -------------- arrow (First stanza from another poem)
More beautiful
Than a violinist?
So stately
in love,
so graceful and radiant.
Matching the waves of the music,
Breathing,
Sighing,
Losing yourself in your life
and your love.
And have you ever felt
the fire building,
the golden
happiness swelling through,
until you want to leap
to your feet
and play
through your heart.
Play until your
Joy is exhausted,
your sadness assuaged.
And you smile,
and you weep,
and the applause echos
in your ears.
Then exhausted,
bt deeply joyful,
you put your heart away in its case
until tomorrow.
...Yes I know it switches from third to first person.... sweatdrop
Have you ever seen
Anything -------------- arrow (First stanza from another poem)
More beautiful
Than a violinist?
So stately
in love,
so graceful and radiant.
Matching the waves of the music,
Breathing,
Sighing,
Losing yourself in your life
and your love.
And have you ever felt
the fire building,
the golden
happiness swelling through,
until you want to leap
to your feet
and play
through your heart.
Play until your
Joy is exhausted,
your sadness assuaged.
And you smile,
and you weep,
and the applause echos
in your ears.
Then exhausted,
bt deeply joyful,
you put your heart away in its case
until tomorrow.
...Yes I know it switches from third to first person.... sweatdrop
WOW...kool
