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 Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 2:01 pm
After i got home from the hospital I heard screamming coming from a room i ran to the door and it was locked and there was a stranger. The person had a mask on so i couldn't see his face but the person he had against the wall was one of my neighbors i ran over to him and punched the guy in the face i asked Aura if she was ok.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 2:38 pm
((I would really prefer if you rp'd in 3rd person narritive...it's much easier to read))
Aura sighed, "Yes, I suppose I'm fine." She said dragging herself over to a chair. She sat up in the dinning room chair and leaned on the table. "I was always told this was a bad neighbourhood." She was still in shock. "But I had no idea."
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 4:29 pm
"It's a good thing your ok" I said. As she leaned on the chair i fealt tht strange pain again and i ran to my apartment. God what is wrong the park insadent this pain what is happening to me and why am I all of a sudden having black outs. to be continued
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 5:35 pm
Atitan31 "It's a good thing your ok" I said. As she leaned on the chair i fealt tht strange pain again and i ran to my apartment. God what is wrong the park insadent this pain what is happening to me and why am I all of a sudden having black outs. to be continued ((please! write in 3rd person!))
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 6:46 pm
Aura looked up and wondered what had just happened. She had only talked to the guy once, and that was when she first moved in. She now understood why, he was very odd that was for sure. The shocked girl looked over to her door, the lock had completly broken off, there was no way she could afford to fix it. She crawled over to the door and put her back against it and began to cry. It was the first moment that she realized she was alone in this city.
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 7:25 pm
After turning down his stereo, only then did Ryan hear the crying from the appartment room down the hall. Ryan peeked out his door into the hall to see a man walking away in the opposite direction. He didn't know if this was who caused the distress or otherwise. It was only instinct to check out the situation for Ryan. He approached the source of the crying cautiously peered into the next appartment. There was a young girl perched on the floor just through the damaged door that was left ajar. A young, vulnerable girl? Interesting... "Hey there, is everything okay in here? I heard some crying and I thought you might need something...."
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Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 9:41 pm
She looked up with her red puffy eyes to see a handsom obviously older man. She stuttered a little, "I was robbed." she finally let out as sob that was barely understandable. She blew her nose loudly on her sleave, "I can't afford to pay for it. I'm alone." She was sure that the man could hardly understand her but it felt good to say it outloud. Aura had never felt so stupid, she was completely embaressed.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 12:09 pm
As Jaden was dreaming that night he saw what had happened at the construction site and said to himself "I am a monster how could i have done that thats not me." The next morning Jaden got out of bed and went to school and he saw disaster that had happened. As Jaden stared at the disaster he feel to the ground crying knewing that he had done this. That day all Jaden did was he layed in his bed crying saying he wasn't a monster.
( Well is that better because i look over the other ones and i was talking in first person well i am sorry for the other times good thing you guys told me.)
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:41 pm
[[yea that's better...one thing I don't understand ...is why are you like a "monster" ...cause you don't start to realize you are a demi god till you meet your love]]
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 2:55 pm
( Oh s**t ok i well fix it well all be like a dream or something god i am so retarded.) Well after Jaden fell asleep he woke up and just realized it was just a dream but even if it was a dream jaden still felt everything like it had truely happend and he well figure out if this is true how this could happen and how he can prevent it.
( So i guess you well get yours soon ok i well see if this works.)
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 3:43 pm
[[remember you can always recruit someone you know to be yours!]]
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 4:06 pm
( I know but all my friends are dudes and i am not gay)
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 7:17 pm
[[haha oic ...well if I find anyone I will tell them about it]]
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:47 pm
Yuma shivered after hearing the blood curdling scream. "It's probably just some kids horsing around", she reassured herself returning to the magazine she was reading. "Oh who am I kidding?", she said outloud, "This is a bad neighborhood! If something bad ever happened to me, I'd probably punch their lights out!" She began punching the air quickly as if some pervert were reaching for her.
Calming down, she realized it was beginning to grow lonely in her small apartment, and she wondered if she'd ever meet anyone again. She slowly pushed the curtains aside on her window and peeked outside.
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 11:05 pm
Ryan frowned. "Looks like he busted through this door pretty good..." he thought to himself about the situation and realised that this wasn't the time to "take advantage". "It doesn't look like staying in here is too safe, with the door and lock ripped out like that...hmm? Oh my, I'm sorry; I forgot to introduce myself. I'm Ryan." He offered a reassuring smile to the sobbing girl before him.
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