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black magic made the rose
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 Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:18 am
its ok...not your best tho...
i think you should have ditched the rhyming...
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 8:44 am
Spencer can't rhyme for jack!
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 10:07 am
Saturday Stalker Spencer can't rhyme for jack! Jack the rack stare
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Posted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 12:43 pm
Yeah, I know it's not my best, but it was just an example of bad, good or good, bad. I haven't written a lot of poetry recently, and I wrote that like Monday, so it didn't have a normal, good tune..
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 7:49 am
YAY!!!!!!! There are kindred souls alive! This is good. I don't know too many people who like that kind of poetry. This is coolio. It is so nice to know. I only write poetry after the death of some one or when I'm feeling empty. Then I burn it.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 9:58 pm
It almost Christmas
Get out soem Christmas Songs and Christmas Poems
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Posted: Sat Dec 09, 2006 6:03 am
YAY CHRISTMAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Tis the season to be jolly, and eat cake!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm happy cause I have Christmas carols!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 8:24 am
This is gonna be gay, but that's okay. Wrote it in less than a minute.
Upon a midnight glow,
I saw the reindeer,
I heard the carols.
In a world of hate and sadness,
I felt it true in my heart,
A small sense of happiness.
When those carols came and sang to me,
Or when those reindeer landed on my roof,
I saw St. Nick,
And I felt truly special,
That he'd come all the way,
From the North Pole,
Just to serve me.
Merry Christmas,
Feel special that St. Nick,
Would travel all the way from the North Pole,
To give all the naughty little kids,
Like you and me,
The presents that make us giggle and laugh,
All season long,
And more seasons to come.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 6:53 am
That was total coolioness. I like it. I think that I am going to go sort mi madre's poetry books just for this. Oh, wait. I have a good poem with me now.
I've known rivers:
I've known rivers ancient as the world and older than the flow of human blood in human veins.
My soul has grown deep like the rivers.
I bathed in the Euphates when dawns were young.
I built my hut near the Congo and it lulled me to sleep.
I looked apon the Nile and raised pyramids above it.
I heard the singing of the Mississippi when Abe Lincoln went down to New Orleans and I've seen it's muddy bosom turn all golden in the sunset.
I've known rivers:
Ancient dusky rivers.
My soul has grown deep like the rivers.
-Langston Hughes
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 12:55 pm
Karonhisake92 That was total coolioness. I like it. I think that I am going to go sort mi madre's poetry books just for this. Oh, wait. I have a good poem with me now. I've known rivers: I've known rivers ancient as the world and older than the flow of human blood in human veins. My soul has grown deep like the rivers. I bathed in the Euphates when dawns were young. I built my hut near the Congo and it lulled me to sleep. I looked apon the Nile and raised pyramidsabove it. I heard the singing of the Mississippi when Abe Lincoln went down to New Orleans and I've seen it's muddy bosom turn all golden in the sunset. I've known rivers: Ancient dusky rivers. My soul has grown deep like the rivers. -Langston Hughescool beansss! langston hughes rocks...but i still like queen elizabeth I better... but thts k hes still great
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 6:45 am
Yes it ish and yes he ish. But I like Langston Hughes and people who wrote his type of poetry best. I don't like poetry from the Elizabethan era very much. It's just too wierd for me.
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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:43 pm
Queen Elizabeth's poetry is not the same from her era. You should read some of her better poems [[damn can't think of any grr]]. But, they're not like Shakespeare or that repitive horrible crap you usually have to read for like 12th grade English class. I actually like Elizabeth, don't like the rest lol. I actually don't even really like poetry that much, I don't like reading it all the much, yet I write it and I don't know why. I suppose it's because I feel like writing yet I don't feel like ultimately writing, such as a story? I don't know... I guess I like to bore people with my own fake sappy love things or my overdramatic death plagued poems. Hah.
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 9:51 am
don't knock your poetry woman. mine sucks and it's total crap. yours is better than mine any day of the week. and i have a question. is music poetry to a tune, or something else entirely?
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 6:39 am
Is there really anybody here? am i alone?
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